Descent Of The Sword Hero

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DonaldSenju

Writing Quality (5 Stars): The book is well written, with a good pace and little to no grammar errors. Stability Updates (4 Stars): From what i understood the author will release chapters in blocks, like this one. I don't know how long it will take for the next one, but the chapters are already quite short. I can't give 5 stars. Story Development (5 Stars): I can say i quite enjoyed reading this book, it has a good pace and it's not just the mc following Naofumi around. The mc is moving alone forming his own party and i'm enjoying his journey for now. Character Design (5 Stars): I quite like the mc personality, different from the classic pervert/edge lord all the other fanfics have. His appereance reminds me of Vergil (with a bad hairstyle), while his personality reminds me of Dante. The other character are also quite well made. They aren't plain NPC's. World Background (5 Stars): It's quite rare to see a fanfic of the 'The Rising Of The Shield Hero' on Webnovel, so it was a breath of fresh air from the classic ones (DxD, Naruto, One Piece, ecc).

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Lol1san

It's just bad. Mc Naofumi's dog. He opposes the kingdom and the church for him and makes them his enemies. His power allows him to copy the swords, but he doesn't do that. Why, because it is wrong, they have been laboring for them. But our Mc, who can't stand injustice and is a paragon of righteousness, also plans to f♡♡k the others wife. The frustrating thing is that the author makes him seem unnecessarily cautious. He's a sword hero, but he acts like a bandit. Dude, why is he hiding his identity? Are you sure we're watching the same anime? Because in that world, heroes are respected by far, and as long as Mc reveals his identity, his job becomes a lot easier. I don't know if the author has read too many Chinese novels. Mc walks around like a bandit and gives up the prestige of being a hero. In short, annoying Mc, the novel, the characters, his hypocrisy and the Author's writing style. This book just fails.

LV 10

Master_of_Mana

Absolute trash of an Author giving himself 5 stars for no apparent reason so I give you the ownership of Raphtalia in return for reading this trash....

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Yuri_is_Ntr

It is totally objective review with only cold facts and Iron logic. Keep that in mind. And the truth is, raftalia - is best waifu in shield hero. Writing fanfic without her in harem, is like writing sao without asuna.(she is the only good thing that we got from sao) Pointless. 0/10 wouldn't bang. P. S. Mc seems to be tsundere. He talks a lot about benefits and whatnot, but his actions doesn't seem to be logical or beneficial.

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Aayann_

sorry i don't like mc personality. i am gonna drop. 😕🙄🙄

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Logi_cal

Honestly, its a disappointment. 😔😒

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WintyLP

nice

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Jackoftrades

I like the story an idea a lot but the grammar and spelling are so bad that it’s extremely hard to read

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Daniel_Silva_3411

Great story but I ask you one thing. don't put all the images only in the comments because there are people who don't have a computer to see them in the comments of the chapter put the images at the end of the chapter too please.

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CaveSquirrel

You need to work on making the characters have more emotions and not be bland and boring. You can follow the plot, but at least screw off of being Naofumi's pet doggo for once, make him not trust the MC and slowly build up his trust in later chapters. The MC is a stereotypical dragon, another red flag. I am now at the exit. Bye.

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PANDA10000

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LV 4

GodOmni

It perfect, perfect, last to the minor detail

LV 4

GodOmni

A very good story. I hope you can update daily. One chapter a day is fine for me

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Void_M0narch

Good !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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rC_1209

i like the development of the story, i hope this doesn't get dropped