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Membuka SPOILEROttimo sviluppo della storia. Tutto cambia per non cambiare niente in realtà. Come fosse una storia ciclica. E del resto la cosa è perfettamente lineare. Unico neo è che se da un lato jon sembra una persona ben più maturata rispetto alla versione Canon poi appena ritrova i Targaryen sembra troppo attaccato loro.
Honest review... I read this fanfic and I was very impressed... more so with the storyline... very nicely written. I even got waters in my eyes reading some emotional chapters... Just updates are slow
If boring had a definition This is it !!The good thing is world background is nicely developed ..
So far tho is the best and closest to the source material of GOT, I’ve ever read. The multiple POV the political intrigue, the settings. Great work author. Just more frequent chapters
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Good story. Interesting. But the plot moves very slowly and predictably (if you read similar stories). As a result, it's very cool to read, but it's terrible to wait for a new chapter.
Hola estaba tratando de pagar por Patreon pero no puedo quería saber si puedo pagarte directamente por pay pal y si es así porfa que le ayudes con tu correo de pay pal. Tus historias son muy buenas y entretenidas ya que tiene una buena trama.
well it is a well written story but it is hard to follow because author (in particular before chapter 13) likes to put flashbacks/visions/description of dreams everywhere randomly and without any warning(not even leaving some space). the plot is filled with a subtle bashing of some characters; there are a lot of inner monologues and it is filled with lots of drama including forced one that lead to some part of the stories to seem stupid and forced. But the most irksome thing is the presence of yuri without a tag and it involves the potential future love interests of the mc who got involved with each other heavily even before seeing the mc in person. So it is not the worst reading but it is also not the best: overall an above average work for patient people (it is slow paced) who like/can overlook random cringeness, foolishness and yuri contents. it is also needed the mood to follow a complicated dramstic plotline
This FF is quite good, but sadly I was put off by the mc's love interest having a female lover before they've even met despite the love interest already having feelings for the mc. I wish it didn't go that way because I would have loved to read more of this story, but I, unfortunately, cannot look past that.
Membuka SPOILERthe story is interesting, but when reading it, one gets the feeling that it is stretched, that it can be put into 1 chapter stretches into 3 - 4 chapters.
It's a very good fanfic👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Membuka SPOILERWhat a snooze fest. 4 chapters just to introduce the Mc, and another 10 spent on nothing but Catlyn hating on Jon and us watching him cry There’s been no plot or progress from what I’ve seen, and to top it all off the author decides to make John talk to the three eyed raven and sheet. I want the 1-2hrs of my life I spent reading this back. OR you can tell me when your story starts.
really good ASOIAF fanfic that does a nice job integrating what we already know about asoiaf and the authors original ideas to really make something that I find unique and compelling among the usual dribble which some authors tend to try passoff as a readable asoiaf fanfic. basic story house targaryen won the battle of the trident and how that changes the story we know. Mc good old Jon snow with no special powers besides being himself and a pretty good warg NO REINCARNATION OR TRANSMIGURATION just good old Jon.
Very good fanfic looking forward to new chapters Pls update more frequently Pls don’t dropp 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
An amazing story!! This is truly an amazing piece of writing. I would recommend that you post your stores on other sites as well so more people can enjoy them! Questionable Questing, SpaceBattles, Sufficient Velocity, and AlternateHistory are all sites that you should post on!
I'm not interested simply because I hate Lyanna Stark and the prince, but well everyone with their tastes, I would have made an oc character as the prince's brother so it would make more sense for them to win because the prince really had no way of winning that rebellion
the different universe and it's storyline change makes it an enticing book to read. I recommend it
basically an AU where roberts rebellion failed. jon is mostly treated the same by catelyn so idk yet how he'll differ from the OG. long chs with little to no grammar mistakes. decent so far Ill continue reading to see what happens.
Membuka SPOILERGonna give this a five star because it probably a good read but. EVERY GOT FANFIC IS HAREM Like seriously why not a good love interest just one
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Membuka SPOILEROttimo sviluppo della storia. Tutto cambia per non cambiare niente in realtà. Come fosse una storia ciclica. E del resto la cosa è perfettamente lineare. Unico neo è che se da un lato jon sembra una persona ben più maturata rispetto alla versione Canon poi appena ritrova i Targaryen sembra troppo attaccato loro.
Honest review... I read this fanfic and I was very impressed... more so with the storyline... very nicely written. I even got waters in my eyes reading some emotional chapters... Just updates are slow
If boring had a definition This is it !!The good thing is world background is nicely developed ..
So far tho is the best and closest to the source material of GOT, I’ve ever read. The multiple POV the political intrigue, the settings. Great work author. Just more frequent chapters
more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter more chapter
Good story. Interesting. But the plot moves very slowly and predictably (if you read similar stories). As a result, it's very cool to read, but it's terrible to wait for a new chapter.
Hola estaba tratando de pagar por Patreon pero no puedo quería saber si puedo pagarte directamente por pay pal y si es así porfa que le ayudes con tu correo de pay pal. Tus historias son muy buenas y entretenidas ya que tiene una buena trama.
well it is a well written story but it is hard to follow because author (in particular before chapter 13) likes to put flashbacks/visions/description of dreams everywhere randomly and without any warning(not even leaving some space). the plot is filled with a subtle bashing of some characters; there are a lot of inner monologues and it is filled with lots of drama including forced one that lead to some part of the stories to seem stupid and forced. But the most irksome thing is the presence of yuri without a tag and it involves the potential future love interests of the mc who got involved with each other heavily even before seeing the mc in person. So it is not the worst reading but it is also not the best: overall an above average work for patient people (it is slow paced) who like/can overlook random cringeness, foolishness and yuri contents. it is also needed the mood to follow a complicated dramstic plotline
This FF is quite good, but sadly I was put off by the mc's love interest having a female lover before they've even met despite the love interest already having feelings for the mc. I wish it didn't go that way because I would have loved to read more of this story, but I, unfortunately, cannot look past that.
Membuka SPOILERthe story is interesting, but when reading it, one gets the feeling that it is stretched, that it can be put into 1 chapter stretches into 3 - 4 chapters.
It's a very good fanfic👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Membuka SPOILERWhat a snooze fest. 4 chapters just to introduce the Mc, and another 10 spent on nothing but Catlyn hating on Jon and us watching him cry There’s been no plot or progress from what I’ve seen, and to top it all off the author decides to make John talk to the three eyed raven and sheet. I want the 1-2hrs of my life I spent reading this back. OR you can tell me when your story starts.
really good ASOIAF fanfic that does a nice job integrating what we already know about asoiaf and the authors original ideas to really make something that I find unique and compelling among the usual dribble which some authors tend to try passoff as a readable asoiaf fanfic. basic story house targaryen won the battle of the trident and how that changes the story we know. Mc good old Jon snow with no special powers besides being himself and a pretty good warg NO REINCARNATION OR TRANSMIGURATION just good old Jon.
Very good fanfic looking forward to new chapters Pls update more frequently Pls don’t dropp 🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
An amazing story!! This is truly an amazing piece of writing. I would recommend that you post your stores on other sites as well so more people can enjoy them! Questionable Questing, SpaceBattles, Sufficient Velocity, and AlternateHistory are all sites that you should post on!
I'm not interested simply because I hate Lyanna Stark and the prince, but well everyone with their tastes, I would have made an oc character as the prince's brother so it would make more sense for them to win because the prince really had no way of winning that rebellion
the different universe and it's storyline change makes it an enticing book to read. I recommend it
basically an AU where roberts rebellion failed. jon is mostly treated the same by catelyn so idk yet how he'll differ from the OG. long chs with little to no grammar mistakes. decent so far Ill continue reading to see what happens.
Membuka SPOILER
Gonna give this a five star because it probably a good read but. EVERY GOT FANFIC IS HAREM Like seriously why not a good love interest just one