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This would be way better if the MC doesn't seem like he's trying to create a harem. Plus it seems like he's just fooling around.
pretty good overall. Props far a bit of a different take on the whole Isekai trope. But one thing i really didn't like about the story is how forcefuly it trys and fails to be deep. The whole conversation with Barnes after the Marvel thing was just forced and cringe and the MC always having some plot going on or expects to be manipulated by the Gods etc. is just not properly established in the first place and kinda conflicts with with the overall lighter tone of the story because the stakes are super low for the MC. After he finished his first mission even if he fails at worst he has to wait longer for a new mission, so getting killed in some other world has little consequences. That is not bad and can make for a nice easy going story with a MC that is on the Fun side of Chaotic Neutral. But the MC is to emotional unstable, plots to much and is at the same time never really that smart. story is like I said not bad but it's borderline cringe
Hmmm, hmm, Hm. It's just not good. Dropped after this retard tell the group of teenagers that he could be used because of the plot. Not a great plan,but whatever. It's was boring anyway...
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I love the story especially the HOTD arc. Love Saeko. I would be glad if you could update more, I just can't take the excitement of reading this because this is such a masterpiece.
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I like this fanfic 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍👍🏼👍👍🏼👍👍🏼👍👍🏼👍👍👍🏼👍👍🏼👍👍🏼👍👍👍🏼👍👍🏼👍👍🏼👍👍🏼👍👍👍🏼♋😂👍👍🏼👍👍🏼♋♋👍🏼👍🏾👍🏼👍🏾😂👍🏾👍🏾👍🏼♋😂👍🏾😂😂
I'll be back when the world of Hotd ends.............................................................................................................................................................
Hello !! How many floors should a bag of rice have, how many floors should a bag of rice have, how much should you pay for a bag of rice, how much should you wash a bag of rice, each grain is muddy, to whom you gave a bag of rice! Spicy Tiansai! ! ! Jiraiya swimming in the sea of dragons and angelica, popsicles melting under the street lamp
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It's good. The Writing Quality is decent. Story Development is reasonable. Character Design is good so far. Updating Stability needs to go up! Or not. World Background is interesting.
i love this fanfic................................................................................ ,................................................
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the story is interesting, the idea of a penguin as a manager is funny, it makes me think of disgaea's Prinny or overlord's Eclaire. moreover I am happy that the false chapters were removed!
I am my other account thought to make use of it... wordswordswordswordswordswordswwordswordswordsordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswords
Hopefully you can continue; it’s like breath of fresh air being taken for the first time. So far I’m enjoying the journey… “Revenge Isn't A Passion It's A Disease That Eats At Your Mind And Poisons Your Soul.”
hello I only do this review because I want to help the author and I look forward to more chapters:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
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This would be way better if the MC doesn't seem like he's trying to create a harem. Plus it seems like he's just fooling around.
pretty good overall. Props far a bit of a different take on the whole Isekai trope. But one thing i really didn't like about the story is how forcefuly it trys and fails to be deep. The whole conversation with Barnes after the Marvel thing was just forced and cringe and the MC always having some plot going on or expects to be manipulated by the Gods etc. is just not properly established in the first place and kinda conflicts with with the overall lighter tone of the story because the stakes are super low for the MC. After he finished his first mission even if he fails at worst he has to wait longer for a new mission, so getting killed in some other world has little consequences. That is not bad and can make for a nice easy going story with a MC that is on the Fun side of Chaotic Neutral. But the MC is to emotional unstable, plots to much and is at the same time never really that smart. story is like I said not bad but it's borderline cringe
Hmmm, hmm, Hm. It's just not good. Dropped after this retard tell the group of teenagers that he could be used because of the plot. Not a great plan,but whatever. It's was boring anyway...
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I love the story especially the HOTD arc. Love Saeko. I would be glad if you could update more, I just can't take the excitement of reading this because this is such a masterpiece.
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I like this fanfic 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍👍🏼👍👍🏼👍👍🏼👍👍🏼👍👍👍🏼👍👍🏼👍👍🏼👍👍👍🏼👍👍🏼👍👍🏼👍👍🏼👍👍👍🏼♋😂👍👍🏼👍👍🏼♋♋👍🏼👍🏾👍🏼👍🏾😂👍🏾👍🏾👍🏼♋😂👍🏾😂😂
I'll be back when the world of Hotd ends.............................................................................................................................................................
Hello !! How many floors should a bag of rice have, how many floors should a bag of rice have, how much should you pay for a bag of rice, how much should you wash a bag of rice, each grain is muddy, to whom you gave a bag of rice! Spicy Tiansai! ! ! Jiraiya swimming in the sea of dragons and angelica, popsicles melting under the street lamp
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It's good. The Writing Quality is decent. Story Development is reasonable. Character Design is good so far. Updating Stability needs to go up! Or not. World Background is interesting.
i love this fanfic................................................................................ ,................................................
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the story is interesting, the idea of a penguin as a manager is funny, it makes me think of disgaea's Prinny or overlord's Eclaire. moreover I am happy that the false chapters were removed!
I am my other account thought to make use of it... wordswordswordswordswordswordswwordswordswordsordswordswordswordswordswordswordswordswords
Hopefully you can continue; it’s like breath of fresh air being taken for the first time. So far I’m enjoying the journey… “Revenge Isn't A Passion It's A Disease That Eats At Your Mind And Poisons Your Soul.”
hello I only do this review because I want to help the author and I look forward to more chapters:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))
Good stuff