Fate series: My Alternate Saber

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Kirito_K5

Check out the review at the bottom, for some reason I can't pin it.

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ArdaPendragon

It looks beautiful.Saber waifu---It looks beautiful.Saber waifu---It looks beautiful.Saber waifu---It looks beautiful.Saber waifu---It looks beautiful.Saber waifu---It looks beautiful.Saber waifu---It looks beautiful.Saber waifu---It looks beautiful.Saber waifu---It looks beautiful.Saber waifu---It looks beautiful.Saber waifu---It looks beautiful.Saber waifu.

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_GoldenStick_

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DeadCat5757

Nice i like it so far but there is not much chapters to make a solid review so all i can say is that it is a good fan fiction so far anyway i can't wait to see more of this fic by

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Pythia

If I had to sum this book up in one sentence it would be "A teenager discovers Fate/Grand Order and thinks the servants are hot." A lot of Fate laws are broken within the first 3 chapters and characters are all ooc or just new ocs. Scathach isn't even summonable outside of f/go since she's still alive btw...

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VagusGrim

Honestly has potential but for lack of a better word was Made too Quickly without much or any research to Fate just considering The Stats which weren't the Normal E-A rankings but rather just "Maxed"

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Jims_Rid

So far, it's looking good! Writing quality is decent. Updates are stable, for now, at least. Story development, so far is going well. As for character design, I think we need more of the MC's thought process. As for Saber, well, it's good, I suppose. Overall, it's a good read.

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Emarleetah

Added to library, all I can say is amazing, amzing lot, amazing plot, amazing world outline. The author has great potential, the book is so smooth no errors, and easily readable and a bit addictive trust me I read and read to the latest chapter, you just want to know whats next. Definately worth your time.

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Christ_Apostle

Meh.....................................

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Alkk

its pretty fast paced but other than that I'd say it's pretty darn good whether it's the characters or the world settings so for me it is enjoyable

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Psan

if possible.... add Chloe von Einzbern/Kuro to the H. [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]. will comment about things to help you improve later

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M7TH1C

do i need to know have knowledge of fate to read this?? Cuz I aint doing that ( It's the reason I have stayed away from fate fics for so long )

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LegalWolf

Well for me I saw it to be Harem. Nothing special but interesting.

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SnowApathie

I read the first chapters it is pretty good my only problem is that I fn't really like harem, but yeah if you like harem you will probably like it. Good luck writing the rest author.

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Haku_Ouroboros

Esto no tiene nada que ver con fate, parece más Pokémon con sirvientes que fate porfavor corrija "fate" . Esto no es fate[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]