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Nice fic, almost everything was (or is ) good, only problem that for me its, i like one piece, like really a lot, so i cant see a mc better than luffy, its not that a inteligent luffy its better, if you make a OC . was better but good fic
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plz u should finish writing it i haven't seen any good one piece ffc complete i hope u can overwork yourself to death until u finish this novel u can also make up ur own theory to complete it before oda 🌝
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Amazing fanfiction. This is my favorite One Piece fanfic that takes place in the current timeline, and my second favorite one piece fanfic ever after Path to Power. Writing is good, humor is great, devil fruits and crewmembers are interesting, and the flow of the story is amazing. The story moves fairly slowly but it doesn’t seem to drag, there’s just more stuff going on than in canon. There’s also very frequent uploads, there really isn’t much to complain about with this one.
Aun para mi gusto va un poco lento pero tambien me gusta ya que se esta construyendo un buen transfondo y me encanta que esta apoyando a los personajes no solo se centran en el prota un que como es el MC es el más s fuerte
It's not the best story in the world but it's enough to spend some time reading, one of the things that I think should improve is how slow the story is going and some parts of the story are a little stretched
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I loved the novel, but the biggest flaw is Haki. The writer did not focus on Haki or give it importance, even though the most important thing in the story is Haki, because Haki develops in fights. It is the most important power in One Piece, if I were instead of Luffy The first thing I do is learn Hak
Une des meilleur fanfic que j'ai lue pour l'instant. J'espère que l'auteur continuera sur cette lancé. Tellement hâte de voir l'arc Marine ford. Le combat contre ener et aussi crocodile j'espère qu'il ne va pas le nerf. J'suis presser qu'ils apprennent le haki.
Story is awesome.Not gonna lie I was skeptical at first about the DF choice. But you got me in the end.I actually didn't want to write a review at first, but I have to when I saw someone on fanfiction net posted your story there.Don't know if you had given him/her permission or not, just wanted to let you know
One of the things I could say that is negative is that the story moves slowly, but I really appreciate that the author is making frequent updates.
This fanfic is great. Some people will hate the convenience of summoning people and genderbends, but if you get over it and continue reading, it's a great story overall.
Membuka SPOILER
This book just popped up in my recommendation section and I gotta say I’m glad it did, absolutely phenomenal so far, keep it posted man 👊
Goood keep going !! Goood keep going !! Goood keep going !!Goood keep going !! Goood keep going !! Goood keep going !! Goood keep going !! Goood keep going !! Goood keep going !!
More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More!!!
fantastic fic. while the first chapter makes it seems like this will be a fic where the mc will just be handed power without effort, the rest of it disproves it. still op mc, but he didn't randomly get powers.
Nice fic, almost everything was (or is ) good, only problem that for me its, i like one piece, like really a lot, so i cant see a mc better than luffy, its not that a inteligent luffy its better, if you make a OC . was better but good fic
Membuka SPOILER Historia entretenida y en emisión 5/5 harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem harem
plz u should finish writing it i haven't seen any good one piece ffc complete i hope u can overwork yourself to death until u finish this novel u can also make up ur own theory to complete it before oda 🌝
a great fanfic🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩🤩
Amazing fanfiction. This is my favorite One Piece fanfic that takes place in the current timeline, and my second favorite one piece fanfic ever after Path to Power. Writing is good, humor is great, devil fruits and crewmembers are interesting, and the flow of the story is amazing. The story moves fairly slowly but it doesn’t seem to drag, there’s just more stuff going on than in canon. There’s also very frequent uploads, there really isn’t much to complain about with this one.
Aun para mi gusto va un poco lento pero tambien me gusta ya que se esta construyendo un buen transfondo y me encanta que esta apoyando a los personajes no solo se centran en el prota un que como es el MC es el más s fuerte
It's not the best story in the world but it's enough to spend some time reading, one of the things that I think should improve is how slow the story is going and some parts of the story are a little stretched
HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
I loved the novel, but the biggest flaw is Haki. The writer did not focus on Haki or give it importance, even though the most important thing in the story is Haki, because Haki develops in fights. It is the most important power in One Piece, if I were instead of Luffy The first thing I do is learn Hak
Une des meilleur fanfic que j'ai lue pour l'instant. J'espère que l'auteur continuera sur cette lancé. Tellement hâte de voir l'arc Marine ford. Le combat contre ener et aussi crocodile j'espère qu'il ne va pas le nerf. J'suis presser qu'ils apprennent le haki.
Story is awesome.Not gonna lie I was skeptical at first about the DF choice. But you got me in the end.I actually didn't want to write a review at first, but I have to when I saw someone on fanfiction net posted your story there.Don't know if you had given him/her permission or not, just wanted to let you know
One of the things I could say that is negative is that the story moves slowly, but I really appreciate that the author is making frequent updates.
This fanfic is great. Some people will hate the convenience of summoning people and genderbends, but if you get over it and continue reading, it's a great story overall.
Membuka SPOILER This book just popped up in my recommendation section and I gotta say I’m glad it did, absolutely phenomenal so far, keep it posted man 👊
Goood keep going !! Goood keep going !! Goood keep going !!Goood keep going !! Goood keep going !! Goood keep going !! Goood keep going !! Goood keep going !! Goood keep going !!
More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More!!!
fantastic fic. while the first chapter makes it seems like this will be a fic where the mc will just be handed power without effort, the rest of it disproves it. still op mc, but he didn't randomly get powers.