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It is faithfull to adventure time in that it is goofy somtimes and other thimes is super sad. It has been 2 months but i just cant stop wanting more of it and i therefore hope for an update soon.
Update more our dear handsome author!!! Also i would rather you release more even if you decrease the chapter lengths by the same length so you would have to write the same amount every month.
I am enjoying this story quite a lot, it's one if the few adventure time story with actual plot. The authors is not afraid of going his own way yet still remain somewhat faithful to the story. I do see grammar issues, which I recommend chat gpt for proof reading. Besides that I thank you for your work
Its good if you can ignore the grammar mistakes and the inconsistent updates
why 5 star you may ask? because i can .. .-.. .-.. ..- ... .. --- -. / .. ... / .-. . .- .-.. .. - -.-- --..-- / .-.. .. ..-. . / .. ... / .- / .... --- .-.. --- --. .-. .- -- --..-- / -... ..- -.-- / --. --- .-.. -.. / -... -.-- .
The nine realms will die if more chapters are not released. May glob be with you :)
Эх, скорее бы (я не мастер писать отзывы, поэтому скажу одно, как же прекрасно, прекрасно, прекрасно, прекрасно, прекрасно, прекрасно, прекрасно)
I need the next volume of reincarnating in adventure time as the son of Simon Petrikov, please, it became a necessity. I don't know what other fanfic this good there will be with a mc x marceline I don't know what other fanfic this good there will be with a mc x marceline
I don’t like how like how mc and Marceline stick together until they force to split up and they won’t be able to see each other again that one of them thinks the other one them dies and the searth each other never find each othe later when they’re like hundred years later they meet again , but they friend but don’t really need each other good help when needed sorry for the rant it it just idk I just think Idea for something but it kinda feel forced because I don’t know to to describe its smooth reading then one the very forced
Great premise with a decent amount of character development in your OC. I also like how you've honored the source material and lore while filling in Blanche spots (see what I did there). Please don't cover this story with dust. I get your busyness, but some people like myself enjoy your writing. [img=strong][img=More pls][img=recommend]
Estou esperando os proximos capitulos............. ........................................................................................................................................................
Muchas gracias y animos, la historia es muy entretenida ------------------------------------------------ ------------------------------------------------
La historia y el personaje son de lo mejor espero que mas de las aventuras de blache y marcelin en esta historia y la entrada de mas personajes como la dulce princesa y mas. Tambien que esta gran historia no la avandones ya que es demaciado buena es el primer fanfic de adventure time que veo que me llame la atención y tiene una buena historia donde el prota tiene trampa que sea demaciado fuerte al inicio y el va creciendo con los años eso me gusta mucho. Me gustaria que blanche y marcelin crearan la casa del arbol en algun futuro lo cual me entantaria ver. Porfa no lo avandones te apoyo al 100, gracias
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Bro are u going to upload the new part after christmast? I think is a good time for writing like normaly people have more time on December and January but depends I don’t know if u study or in why are u working so ye hope ur good and I’m waiting really hard I love this story and I love adventure time
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Best adventure time fanfic ive read, i hope this continues. Ive seen a lot of good fanfics dropped its tragic.
Honestly, it's one of the best I've read, stable plot, heart-wrenching turmoil, and actually using the source material well to make a seemless story. Oh, and I love Marcy's character
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personally I'm loving this book I believe it is the best Adventure Time fanfic that is out so far
es una o sino la mejor de las historias de hora de aventura que es visto hasta el dia de hoy me encanta como desarrola a los personajes me encanta los timelaps porque no son exagerados y nos da resumenes de lo que paso en ese tiempo tiene una historia interesante que me encantaria seguir leyendo esperemos una actualizacion en los tiempos venideros
It is faithfull to adventure time in that it is goofy somtimes and other thimes is super sad. It has been 2 months but i just cant stop wanting more of it and i therefore hope for an update soon.
Update more our dear handsome author!!! Also i would rather you release more even if you decrease the chapter lengths by the same length so you would have to write the same amount every month.
I am enjoying this story quite a lot, it's one if the few adventure time story with actual plot. The authors is not afraid of going his own way yet still remain somewhat faithful to the story. I do see grammar issues, which I recommend chat gpt for proof reading. Besides that I thank you for your work
Its good if you can ignore the grammar mistakes and the inconsistent updates
why 5 star you may ask? because i can .. .-.. .-.. ..- ... .. --- -. / .. ... / .-. . .- .-.. .. - -.-- --..-- / .-.. .. ..-. . / .. ... / .- / .... --- .-.. --- --. .-. .- -- --..-- / -... ..- -.-- / --. --- .-.. -.. / -... -.-- .
The nine realms will die if more chapters are not released. May glob be with you :)
Эх, скорее бы (я не мастер писать отзывы, поэтому скажу одно, как же прекрасно, прекрасно, прекрасно, прекрасно, прекрасно, прекрасно, прекрасно)
I need the next volume of reincarnating in adventure time as the son of Simon Petrikov, please, it became a necessity. I don't know what other fanfic this good there will be with a mc x marceline I don't know what other fanfic this good there will be with a mc x marceline
I don’t like how like how mc and Marceline stick together until they force to split up and they won’t be able to see each other again that one of them thinks the other one them dies and the searth each other never find each othe later when they’re like hundred years later they meet again , but they friend but don’t really need each other good help when needed sorry for the rant it it just idk I just think Idea for something but it kinda feel forced because I don’t know to to describe its smooth reading then one the very forced
Great premise with a decent amount of character development in your OC. I also like how you've honored the source material and lore while filling in Blanche spots (see what I did there). Please don't cover this story with dust. I get your busyness, but some people like myself enjoy your writing. [img=strong][img=More pls][img=recommend]
Estou esperando os proximos capitulos............. ........................................................................................................................................................
Muchas gracias y animos, la historia es muy entretenida ------------------------------------------------ ------------------------------------------------
La historia y el personaje son de lo mejor espero que mas de las aventuras de blache y marcelin en esta historia y la entrada de mas personajes como la dulce princesa y mas. Tambien que esta gran historia no la avandones ya que es demaciado buena es el primer fanfic de adventure time que veo que me llame la atención y tiene una buena historia donde el prota tiene trampa que sea demaciado fuerte al inicio y el va creciendo con los años eso me gusta mucho. Me gustaria que blanche y marcelin crearan la casa del arbol en algun futuro lo cual me entantaria ver. Porfa no lo avandones te apoyo al 100, gracias
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Bro are u going to upload the new part after christmast? I think is a good time for writing like normaly people have more time on December and January but depends I don’t know if u study or in why are u working so ye hope ur good and I’m waiting really hard I love this story and I love adventure time
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Membuka SPOILER Best adventure time fanfic ive read, i hope this continues. Ive seen a lot of good fanfics dropped its tragic.
Honestly, it's one of the best I've read, stable plot, heart-wrenching turmoil, and actually using the source material well to make a seemless story. Oh, and I love Marcy's character
Membuka SPOILER personally I'm loving this book I believe it is the best Adventure Time fanfic that is out so far
es una o sino la mejor de las historias de hora de aventura que es visto hasta el dia de hoy me encanta como desarrola a los personajes me encanta los timelaps porque no son exagerados y nos da resumenes de lo que paso en ese tiempo tiene una historia interesante que me encantaria seguir leyendo esperemos una actualizacion en los tiempos venideros