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1: let me tell everyone I reached the 4 chapter so take kind with a grind of salt 2: one promblem is don’t see how he can use his ability so well. Like he had for like a week and he almost have master control ( some context for the 3 part they guy recanted in prince that want to be a pirte. And the prince country is poor ) 3; I also have problem with the logic. the guy first thought was to make brothal right after he got caught my the mireans for his (pressoder) being a pirte but like why would the king agree at like let use logic here the king country is loseing a ton of money and then he had to pay alot to save his son from going to jail so why would even support his son into doing this and before anyone say anything his ability would not be a good excuse because the people hate him and his ilussion ability would cause people feel anything because u can’t phsivsly toach them it just get people hard and will quickly lose business if we were realistic about it.
Love it!! Love it!! 😍😍 It's a really great One Piece fanfiction.. 👍👍 I like how author make MC (Cade) have a great potential with his devil fruit.. I understand that his DF is concentrade in mind power, so his psychal/body is weaker.. So that's why he should train his body (his mind/DF will increase itself with Ilusion Brothels), and he have Zephyrs to train him (he's marine instructor so he could make Cade stronger).. Alas, his laziness is so powerfull.. 😂🤣🤣 Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good work author sama 😁😁👍👍👍
Very nice! Keep up the good work! _________________________________ _________________________________ _________________________________ _________________________________
I take back what I said, the very first chapters were good until chapter 10. For me, the ones that follow after chapter 10 are absolutely not interesting. I regret giving 5 stars as a rating.
An author reviewing his own novel ^_^. It is a One Piece fic about kingdom and territory building, as well as messing up with the plots of the original One Piece. There is also a little touch of comedy and action.
This story is interesting. I recommend this story for you who want seek enjoyment in one piece world with comedy. This story is really hidden gem in the mud. You should finish it author until the end, and thank you for your hard work
a business development one piece fic [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I like the way the story is going and will definitely continue to read it if it keep going in the same way. For those who are reading reviews to know about the story: MC gets a devil fruit that gives him illusion power and he uses it to develop his country.
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A pretty different fic. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A different story from the usual one piece fic, the mc is not a pirate who creates his crew or joins luffy on his journey, he is simply a prince who creates a brothel and uses the power of the devil fruit to create illusions to satisfy customers while getting stronger by continuous use of his power, it doesn't seem like more than that for now. It still doesn't seem like it's harem or not, the mc doesn't seem to have any interest in it.
i gonna read this and find out if it's good but I'm concerned about the comment that Zephyr made
this story is absolutely hilarious and a pleasure to read. Im on ch 25 right now and realized this novel is on haitus since it hasnt been updated in a month. please author sensei bring the novel back!!! As a light hearted story, the writing quality is good, story development is exciting and the character interactions are the best part. even though there is not a lot of chapters, you should definitely give it a try.
1: let me tell everyone I reached the 4 chapter so take kind with a grind of salt 2: one promblem is don’t see how he can use his ability so well. Like he had for like a week and he almost have master control ( some context for the 3 part they guy recanted in prince that want to be a pirte. And the prince country is poor ) 3; I also have problem with the logic. the guy first thought was to make brothal right after he got caught my the mireans for his (pressoder) being a pirte but like why would the king agree at like let use logic here the king country is loseing a ton of money and then he had to pay alot to save his son from going to jail so why would even support his son into doing this and before anyone say anything his ability would not be a good excuse because the people hate him and his ilussion ability would cause people feel anything because u can’t phsivsly toach them it just get people hard and will quickly lose business if we were realistic about it.
Love it!! Love it!! 😍😍 It's a really great One Piece fanfiction.. 👍👍 I like how author make MC (Cade) have a great potential with his devil fruit.. I understand that his DF is concentrade in mind power, so his psychal/body is weaker.. So that's why he should train his body (his mind/DF will increase itself with Ilusion Brothels), and he have Zephyrs to train him (he's marine instructor so he could make Cade stronger).. Alas, his laziness is so powerfull.. 😂🤣🤣 Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good work author sama 😁😁👍👍👍
Very nice! Keep up the good work! _________________________________ _________________________________ _________________________________ _________________________________
I take back what I said, the very first chapters were good until chapter 10. For me, the ones that follow after chapter 10 are absolutely not interesting. I regret giving 5 stars as a rating.
An author reviewing his own novel ^_^. It is a One Piece fic about kingdom and territory building, as well as messing up with the plots of the original One Piece. There is also a little touch of comedy and action.
This story is interesting. I recommend this story for you who want seek enjoyment in one piece world with comedy. This story is really hidden gem in the mud. You should finish it author until the end, and thank you for your hard work
a business development one piece fic [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I like the way the story is going and will definitely continue to read it if it keep going in the same way. For those who are reading reviews to know about the story: MC gets a devil fruit that gives him illusion power and he uses it to develop his country.
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A pretty different fic. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
A different story from the usual one piece fic, the mc is not a pirate who creates his crew or joins luffy on his journey, he is simply a prince who creates a brothel and uses the power of the devil fruit to create illusions to satisfy customers while getting stronger by continuous use of his power, it doesn't seem like more than that for now. It still doesn't seem like it's harem or not, the mc doesn't seem to have any interest in it.
i gonna read this and find out if it's good but I'm concerned about the comment that Zephyr made
this story is absolutely hilarious and a pleasure to read. Im on ch 25 right now and realized this novel is on haitus since it hasnt been updated in a month. please author sensei bring the novel back!!! As a light hearted story, the writing quality is good, story development is exciting and the character interactions are the best part. even though there is not a lot of chapters, you should definitely give it a try.