1Ulasan-ulasan
- Kualitas penulisan
- Stabilitas Pembaruan
- Pengembangan Cerita
- Desain Karakter
- Latar Belakang Dunia
Bagikan pikiran Anda dengan orang lain
Tulis ulasan
LV 11 ![Badge]()
I can see the potential in making this story, and i like that you chose to have original characters instead of already mades. I hope you dont focus solely on the mc, but build the personality of side characters and also world building. I recommend when you do world building that you dont tell the reader, but instead show. Btw, please make the mc a likeable person and not another edgelord mc for the them 8385th time in this site
I can see the potential in making this story, and i like that you chose to have original characters instead of already mades. I hope you dont focus solely on the mc, but build the personality of side characters and also world building. I recommend when you do world building that you dont tell the reader, but instead show. Btw, please make the mc a likeable person and not another edgelord mc for the them 8385th time in this site