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Good pacing, with good detailed, thought through battle tactics. The perspective and observations can, though bit more neutral, since ones written were mostly Reyna’s. Leaving only a bit of description for Max. Overall good premise and idea, starting off strong. Can’t wait for future world building, and updates!
So excited for this story to develop! I’m loving the setting, it’s super interesting and unique. I’m already anticipating how the characters are going evolve within this story. Definitely going to keep up with this one!
Interesting premise, so far the first 3 chapters are very promising and I'm super excited to see how the story will develop further in the future!
Good pacing, with good detailed, thought through battle tactics. The perspective and observations can, though bit more neutral, since ones written were mostly Reyna’s. Leaving only a bit of description for Max. Overall good premise and idea, starting off strong. Can’t wait for future world building, and updates!
So excited for this story to develop! I’m loving the setting, it’s super interesting and unique. I’m already anticipating how the characters are going evolve within this story. Definitely going to keep up with this one!
Interesting premise, so far the first 3 chapters are very promising and I'm super excited to see how the story will develop further in the future!