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It's really good tho I am a bit annoyed that u made the female lead an OC instead of just picking one of the many girls in the DXD world
I'll start this out by saying I'm not someone who's well-versed in DxD lore or fan fiction and have only read till chap 10, I just read it cuz there's nothing else to read. Now onto the review, I did somewhat enjoy it but I think the author not attaching an overpowered on as one of the tags is a mistake. Tsukasa learning Sound, Thunder, and Fire breathing to mastery in 4 years is extremely unrealistic considering that Tanjiro learned water breathing to a moderate level in 2 years with the training of an expert at water breathing. Also, learning Rokushiki even to a decent degree should be impossible for a normal human to learn because our bodies have a limit to them. You could make the argument that DxD humans have more powerful physiques but I haven't seen anything to prove that as of yet. So, in conclusion, I think it's a great fic for people who enjoy the overpowered tag but it should definitely be included as one of the tags regardless of whether he's as powerful as the other characters in DxD. Good Luck with your book Author-san :)
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Actually enjoyed this, I just hope this is not the kind of fanfic where he looks for a sacred gear or becomes a devil, u can make him high human or something like that so he will be ageless through cultivation or maybe senjutsu. This fic has good potential
Well.... The quality of writing is average. The update rate is similarly average. Plot: at the moment, the standard cliche with all the consequences, you will not see any deep and interesting plot twists. Everything is standard for the average fan fiction on DXD (at the moment). Character design: The main character is a standard oyash, with all the cringe moments from all kinds of anime, boring and dry. The rest of the characters are just dummies (fillers that are available to indicate the exclusivity of the main character) in general, everything is as usual. Well, the story as a story is an interesting world, but the author is not going to reveal it (at the moment). I recommend it if you haven't found something to read. Under the beer will go.
It's really good tho I am a bit annoyed that u made the female lead an OC instead of just picking one of the many girls in the DXD world
I'll start this out by saying I'm not someone who's well-versed in DxD lore or fan fiction and have only read till chap 10, I just read it cuz there's nothing else to read. Now onto the review, I did somewhat enjoy it but I think the author not attaching an overpowered on as one of the tags is a mistake. Tsukasa learning Sound, Thunder, and Fire breathing to mastery in 4 years is extremely unrealistic considering that Tanjiro learned water breathing to a moderate level in 2 years with the training of an expert at water breathing. Also, learning Rokushiki even to a decent degree should be impossible for a normal human to learn because our bodies have a limit to them. You could make the argument that DxD humans have more powerful physiques but I haven't seen anything to prove that as of yet. So, in conclusion, I think it's a great fic for people who enjoy the overpowered tag but it should definitely be included as one of the tags regardless of whether he's as powerful as the other characters in DxD. Good Luck with your book Author-san :)
Membuka SPOILER Actually enjoyed this, I just hope this is not the kind of fanfic where he looks for a sacred gear or becomes a devil, u can make him high human or something like that so he will be ageless through cultivation or maybe senjutsu. This fic has good potential
Well.... The quality of writing is average. The update rate is similarly average. Plot: at the moment, the standard cliche with all the consequences, you will not see any deep and interesting plot twists. Everything is standard for the average fan fiction on DXD (at the moment). Character design: The main character is a standard oyash, with all the cringe moments from all kinds of anime, boring and dry. The rest of the characters are just dummies (fillers that are available to indicate the exclusivity of the main character) in general, everything is as usual. Well, the story as a story is an interesting world, but the author is not going to reveal it (at the moment). I recommend it if you haven't found something to read. Under the beer will go.