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This writer is very clearly a novice, but they have a great idea. It isn't very well executed, and it's a bit difficult to enjoy reading the story. However, if you look beyond the grammatical errors and disjointed flow, this has the potential to be good story.
This writer is very clearly a novice, but they have a great idea. It isn't very well executed, and it's a bit difficult to enjoy reading the story. However, if you look beyond the grammatical errors and disjointed flow, this has the potential to be good story.