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Great story so far. Please don't drop or wait too long to update. I like how his personality changes and the reason with the split personality.
Great story. I really liked the way you have you have written Naruto's personality. Please continue writing, you have left us kinda on a cliffhanger. More please 🥺
I cannot wait for more of this story to be released! the amount of thought that went in to blend and make everything work, just tickles the go nads! If I could rate this more, it would be a bombastic award! totally and rightfully so! to be infinite stars!!
I rarely give a book 5 stars but this particular one earned it. It surprised me to no end more so that I'm not a fan of teen titans go yet I'm hooked. As long as the author doesn't drop the novel, we're cool WARNING ⚠️: Do not drop this novel Author-""(I don't speak Japanese)
Loved it, the storys intriguing and the characters grab at your heart. The updates are fairly stable, and the protagonist feels really relatable.
This deserves more readers. Excellent writing and pacing of the story is really well done. All in one, a 5-star rating
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Looks interesting and grammer is fine. Author has potential to write a great story......................................................................
story passes in teen titans world for those wondering .....................................................................................
I am writing this as I have read up to the curently chapter 14. The author is writing two books right now and I love both of them. This story so far is quite interesting. Not only is the story development there, but character development as well. it is slightly on the slow side but that is for story progression rather than geting to the point. With that said I would recomend reading to chapter 20 before making a decision. as ch1-12 are about the world and character wheres ch13+ seams like its gona expand on the authors consept.
looking forward for more chapters especially the fight scenes. .. I cant wait to see how will this naruto and gaara compare to other stories .. keep it up and upload more chapters ..
hmmm shameless author giving his novel five star review XD.......... .......................................................................
Just read it, trust me. Just read it, trust me. Just read it, trust me. Just read it, trust me. Just read it, trust me. Just read it, trust me.
Great fanfic naruto finally gets fed up with the way the leaf village treats him and runs away and ends up in jump city with the teen titans, just dont understand why the gang keeps coming after him to go back why he doesnt have a way back either so it just starts a fight with his former friends. I do lover where its going so far tho.
Great story so far. Please don't drop or wait too long to update. I like how his personality changes and the reason with the split personality.
Great story. I really liked the way you have you have written Naruto's personality. Please continue writing, you have left us kinda on a cliffhanger. More please 🥺
I cannot wait for more of this story to be released! the amount of thought that went in to blend and make everything work, just tickles the go nads! If I could rate this more, it would be a bombastic award! totally and rightfully so! to be infinite stars!!
I rarely give a book 5 stars but this particular one earned it. It surprised me to no end more so that I'm not a fan of teen titans go yet I'm hooked. As long as the author doesn't drop the novel, we're cool WARNING ⚠️: Do not drop this novel Author-""(I don't speak Japanese)
Loved it, the storys intriguing and the characters grab at your heart. The updates are fairly stable, and the protagonist feels really relatable.
This deserves more readers. Excellent writing and pacing of the story is really well done. All in one, a 5-star rating
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Looks interesting and grammer is fine. Author has potential to write a great story......................................................................
story passes in teen titans world for those wondering .....................................................................................
I am writing this as I have read up to the curently chapter 14. The author is writing two books right now and I love both of them. This story so far is quite interesting. Not only is the story development there, but character development as well. it is slightly on the slow side but that is for story progression rather than geting to the point. With that said I would recomend reading to chapter 20 before making a decision. as ch1-12 are about the world and character wheres ch13+ seams like its gona expand on the authors consept.
looking forward for more chapters especially the fight scenes. .. I cant wait to see how will this naruto and gaara compare to other stories .. keep it up and upload more chapters ..
hmmm shameless author giving his novel five star review XD.......... .......................................................................
Just read it, trust me. Just read it, trust me. Just read it, trust me. Just read it, trust me. Just read it, trust me. Just read it, trust me.
Great fanfic naruto finally gets fed up with the way the leaf village treats him and runs away and ends up in jump city with the teen titans, just dont understand why the gang keeps coming after him to go back why he doesnt have a way back either so it just starts a fight with his former friends. I do lover where its going so far tho.