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love it keep up the good work also can't wait for next chapter 😊 😀 have a wonderful time 😀 😊 ☺️ 😄
Alright i really need more chapters of this this concept of traveling to a universe with full power from a game is always good for me
I like the story, the chapters are super short, if the chapters were longer this would have 5 chapters instead of 17, maybe 4 chapters if you remove the author notes, it helps with feedback, but i would prefer longer chapters, maybe 2k words a chap would work best
Can't wait for more. Wish the author could speed up the uploads but we read at his own discretion. One of the few Elden ring involved story's that are any good. Again I hope to see more and can't wait for more. I wish the author a prosperous and fruitful day and coming days.
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A childish crack-fic, not really that interesting, the only thing worth noting about it is the good writing considering how terrible the writing usually is in webnovel fics.
absolute Lee has potential but anyway put f on this comment for the MC being somewhat betrayed by the pet rock
Like. Not a lot of Elden Ring or even game fan fictions on this app, love to see it.
This story is so good like pls don’t stop making chapters if you do tho at least stop at 50 I’m begging pls😭🙏🏾
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good concept but its just another fanfic made for the authors waifu it seems. if you read on this site you know the drill and you'll know if you like that or not. i dont thats for sure
Good story and I am very much enjoying reading it. The character feels like he would do something I would do (just screwing around). Gave it a point for having ranni as fmc. The reason I gave a 4 on story development was because of how fast he was inducted into young justice. Author explained why he did it and I can agree that it doesn’t really matter how he gets in but I think it could’ve been done better. TL:DR- Good, read it.
love it keep up the good work also can't wait for next chapter 😊 😀 have a wonderful time 😀 😊 ☺️ 😄
Alright i really need more chapters of this this concept of traveling to a universe with full power from a game is always good for me
I like the story, the chapters are super short, if the chapters were longer this would have 5 chapters instead of 17, maybe 4 chapters if you remove the author notes, it helps with feedback, but i would prefer longer chapters, maybe 2k words a chap would work best
Can't wait for more. Wish the author could speed up the uploads but we read at his own discretion. One of the few Elden ring involved story's that are any good. Again I hope to see more and can't wait for more. I wish the author a prosperous and fruitful day and coming days.
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A childish crack-fic, not really that interesting, the only thing worth noting about it is the good writing considering how terrible the writing usually is in webnovel fics.
absolute Lee has potential but anyway put f on this comment for the MC being somewhat betrayed by the pet rock
Like. Not a lot of Elden Ring or even game fan fictions on this app, love to see it.
This story is so good like pls don’t stop making chapters if you do tho at least stop at 50 I’m begging pls😭🙏🏾
I loved it. keep up the good work![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
good concept but its just another fanfic made for the authors waifu it seems. if you read on this site you know the drill and you'll know if you like that or not. i dont thats for sure
Good story and I am very much enjoying reading it. The character feels like he would do something I would do (just screwing around). Gave it a point for having ranni as fmc. The reason I gave a 4 on story development was because of how fast he was inducted into young justice. Author explained why he did it and I can agree that it doesn’t really matter how he gets in but I think it could’ve been done better. TL:DR- Good, read it.
Amazing story that has most likely been dropped