The Wyvern - MCU [COMPLETE]

Finished it and have to say was written very well. It's definitely not for everyone, it's very slow-paced but goes into such detail that everything meshes together and makes sense. The character slides into the story without feeling jarring or like someone forced them into the story. The writing quality never really drops in terms of personalities. The main issue is... the character doesn't matter and has 0 impacts on the story. The mc is a watcher looking on never changing anything so ultimately the author manages to write someone else's story very well so I can't really give them credit for story development because it's copied at many times word for word and describing the same fight scenes as the original. It's a shame because it's written so well but convoluted excuses, mistakes and random emotional drama happen all to force the events to play out exactly like the original source material. The place where it shines is the few points where it's original but then those are quickly ruined by being shoved under the rug in order to maintain the original plot. Overall though it's a fantastic story... it's just unfortunate that it lacks anything original.

Going to start of by saying the book is great, but not for everyone. The start of the book was quite well done for world building and showing who/what/why the main character is the way she is. It's written very well and in-depth, at the same time it's a tease and time delay until the original story of MCU starts going. That's when I think the book starter spiralling downwards, the romance and the travel was a nice input, but the fact of them being on the side-line every time its convenient for the story gets to you eventually. Then the story starts taking of after the fall of Ultron, yet the main character gets put on the side-line with a few twists and turns to let the original plot play out again and again, crying and sobbing for 10 chapters while "Attempting" to stop things around her, while they play out just like the plot. What got to me the most was the fact once the mc was pointed out to the media, she has to go through a trial to prove her innocence to the people? and her friends and family sits on the side and can't do anything for 15 chapters? Stark gets blackmailed and cant do anything? Where are the other villains in the justice system? Aren't there literal serial killers not getting anywhere near this publicity and outrage? Odd universe. Anyhow, I enjoy the book and recommend others to read it, just don't try to reason with the logic of the main character, as it is a mix-mash of guilt/anger/sadness and there's no way others can really judge a character living with their own logic and answers.

I liked the premise, the beginning, and parts of the story overall. The problem is that we have Maggie Stark as the protagonist, who has been shown to be someone who could be Tony Stark(her brother)‘s equal or near equal. THEN she also has the super soldier serumn like Steve or Bucky, with all the training HYDRA could provide, such as the Red Room like Natasha. Why is that bad? It isn’t. Until her presence in the MCU does basically nothing to change how the story goes. Major events stay basically the same, except some have an extra person in it- such as when going into the past to get the infinity stones, she joins Steve, stands there while he gets the scepter, rushes off to help with the cube, gets slapped by past-Hulk, rushes back to see Steve basically defeat past-Steve, knocks out past-Steve, and then has to go with Steve and Tony to the past. WHERE she follows Tony to get the cube, and nothing changes… except she’s in the scene. Her role in this story amounts to basic emotional support to the Avengers and Bucky. Of course that’s downplaying it a bit to make summarization easier, but still… she’s by no means fulfilling the role cut out for her. She doesn’t even do the snap instead of Tony, so all I can think of her being there is to give Bucky a happy ending, and help Pepper raise Morgan. Of course, a lot of that is just expectations vs reality. It’s just disappointing there. Overall a good novel though.

This is a great fan-fiction with behind the scenes style of hydra and winter soldier and a cool MC i am at Ch15 when writing this and now it is becoming even better cuz they are breaking away from being mindless puppets, give it a try :)

Puta que pariu eu fiquei puto lendo essa porra, não consegui passar do capitulo 14. O cara simplesmente mata o pai, a mae, sequestra ela com uma criança morta, transforma numa assasina da hydra e quando tem a chance não mata ele. Porra isso me deixou puto