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6 chapters in It's pretty good! It suffers a bit from "plot luck" where just the thing the mc needs just happens to be given to him, and I don't think it needs that. Him receiving the spirit stone didn't need to happen this early. Beyond that tiny issue though, I really enjoy the novel. The system is fun and the world seems to be a tad different than other cultivation worlds which is almost always good. Keep it up Author!
am in love withe novel and the synopsis is just great. I hope you could post more. The theme is somewhat different but it still applies to the same genre and am loving the change of pace and the character of the protagonist. I hope there is no harem cos it would spoil the pace. Nice work, keep up the hard work. The story has made my day just that its still in the beginning. I want more!!
6 chapters in It's pretty good! It suffers a bit from "plot luck" where just the thing the mc needs just happens to be given to him, and I don't think it needs that. Him receiving the spirit stone didn't need to happen this early. Beyond that tiny issue though, I really enjoy the novel. The system is fun and the world seems to be a tad different than other cultivation worlds which is almost always good. Keep it up Author!
am in love withe novel and the synopsis is just great. I hope you could post more. The theme is somewhat different but it still applies to the same genre and am loving the change of pace and the character of the protagonist. I hope there is no harem cos it would spoil the pace. Nice work, keep up the hard work. The story has made my day just that its still in the beginning. I want more!!