"Who are you calling a bratty little girl that can't even reach the potty without assistance?!"
Fleur became confused at this sudden change in attitude. Himeko had seemed like such a mature and well-manner girl, but now she was stomping and flailing her arms and throwing a tantrum like some spoiled child. It went on for some minutes before two Foxen women– likely her attendants– came in to soothe her. They hugged her from both sides and patted her back, and rubbed her head until she began to calm down. Whatever sort of seductive charm she had felt from this small girl had seemed to vanish.
Once Himeko had calmed down, her eyes seemed to gleam momentarily, and her personality did another 180. Fleur experienced another kind of confusion as she felt like she was looking at a mature woman. Her brain could hardly register that the person in front of her was a child.
Publishing this at 1am since I wasn't able to get started until late. Does that still count as sticking to the schedule for uploading on friday if I started before midnight? I don't know be we will just say it does.
So, what do you guys think of Himeko now that you learned more about her? I think she was fleshed out pretty well in these past 2 chapters. I could have made her a a regular Foxen woman than gave Fleur a trial to master her charm, but I think it is way more interesting this way. It also gave me a chance to flesh out Haruka a little bit more. I had a lot of fun fleshing out these characaters, so I hope you guys enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it.
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