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I really like reading novels with reincarnations and magic but its hard to find good ones. This one though is something Ill continue to read. It has so much potential and I'm excited to read more!
I really really love a good book and this is a really good amazing book.. I love the mystery and the fact it deals with reincarnation.. Totally worth it 🤤🤤..
What a fabulous writeup!! Your book is very intriguing and motivating. I can feel my spirit move by just reading few chapters. What a good storyline! More inspiration to you, Author!!
I haven't read all chapters but so far it is very exciting. A good reincarnation fantasy story, the narration is nice and the dialogue can be really good. I recommend!
The book is just too fascinating. I enjoyed your descriptions of each scene and unknowingly started picturing it. The way words were used was fascinating. I can only say that it is a piece of art. A good job, author
So it tool me a minute, but there isn't much for me to critique on the story per say. I will praise the world building in this world. I am a fan of it as well as the power system in this story. I am highly optimistic for the future clashes using the system and the type of challenges that our ML faces.
this book is so impressive, the storyline is amazing and the narrative is just perfect, I got hooked right away and couldn't put it down. I can't wait to see what happens next as it gets deeper.
reincaincarnation and magic, this is a fascinating read i'm waiting for the next chapter, the book had me on a continuous read without stopping
This story has a lot of potential, a good and enjoyable plot, most importantly, a relatable and interesting Mc, the grammar is good and understandable, the author did a great job!
I loved how the book started with chasing thief, the concept was amazing and from the very first line caught my attention, I can't wait to read more chapters, I wish you all the best author, your book is amazing 😍😍😍
Interesting concept and world background and characters are well described and writing quality is also good and keep releasing new chapters 👍👍👍
Hi author The novel you write is extremely nice. The chaps are also well written. I hope he makes more of them and continues his author job. May the stars align for him.
Awesome Story!!! I was hooked from the beginning and it keeps on getting better and better as the story progresses. The classroom was scene was very relatable. Keep it up and best of luck to the author.
The beginning of this book is quite energetic and I like that it transitioned and flowed into the next scene seamlessly. Great Job.
It has a great beginning, the story itself is amazing and the characterization is beautifully done, I appreciate your work. I would like to read more of it, keep writing more.
The story has some great potential to actually work, not gonna lie. The MC is understandable and is fleshed out and not rushed in any way.
I don't read this genre but still I recommend it to someone who enjoy reading action, exploration, and tunnels. Skye is a remarkable person n your novel. The idea is fresh and interesting. I enjoyed how you depicted events from the viewpoint of the main character while keeping the side characters alive.
This is just amazing with your writing style and the way you portrayed the story just glorious and wonderful, can't wait to see the next part <3
The novel is on to a great start. I really like the weak to strong concept. The description of the world could use some more effort and work. The character is a steal. I am impressed truly. Keep up the good work. But in my personal opinion the development is a bit on the slower side. Can be a different preference for other people though.
The potential of the story is really good, I have been wanting to read something like this for some time already. And the way the MC is I can’t wait to see more situations in the plot
This book is GREAT! A hidden gold inside the mine of books. If you dug it out your are the lucky one. I can't believe I found this type of book. The story is soo awesome. The plot is excellent. The writing style is flowing and you can enjoy the book. Everyone should read it. Good work author.
This story is fun to read with neat and well written, the characters are also unique and fun to follow. You will know how good this story is even in the early chapters. Great job author! Keep it up![img=recommend][img=recommend]
A hidden gem in a genre dominated by many fellow authors yet his writing skills and descriptions don't pale in comparison. The story's plot has the potential to grow far and wide if it continues at this pace. I personally liked it.
Nice synopsis and I bet the book cover is the reference for the image of the mc himself... that's good since it could help me imagine him easily. The beginning of the story was excellent so keep up the great work author :)
Hey author, I really loved the way your story progression moved. the characters are great, a bit too dark for my liking but it's cool. I'd really love to see more chapters in the future.
Hey guys! It's me again! Your friendly neighborhood author GrandSky. I'm not gonna say much. Just gonna let you know that your comments, reviews and support are highly welcome. Please continue to let me know your thoughts on my book. Means a lot! 😎😎🙏
Hey author! I've been following your novel for a while now and I gotta say, while I enjoyed the beginning of your chapter, I am enjoying it even more! While your novel has some bumps, it's definitely a 9/10 in my book! Keep it up author! All the best😀
This book deserve more than a five star rating.adventure , magic and the plot has so much potentials! The story line is superb,one of the best book months genre.All I can say is keep it up!
I really like reading novels with reincarnations and magic but its hard to find good ones. This one though is something Ill continue to read. It has so much potential and I'm excited to read more!
I really really love a good book and this is a really good amazing book.. I love the mystery and the fact it deals with reincarnation.. Totally worth it 🤤🤤..
What a fabulous writeup!! Your book is very intriguing and motivating. I can feel my spirit move by just reading few chapters. What a good storyline! More inspiration to you, Author!!
I haven't read all chapters but so far it is very exciting. A good reincarnation fantasy story, the narration is nice and the dialogue can be really good. I recommend!
The book is just too fascinating. I enjoyed your descriptions of each scene and unknowingly started picturing it. The way words were used was fascinating. I can only say that it is a piece of art. A good job, author
So it tool me a minute, but there isn't much for me to critique on the story per say. I will praise the world building in this world. I am a fan of it as well as the power system in this story. I am highly optimistic for the future clashes using the system and the type of challenges that our ML faces.
this book is so impressive, the storyline is amazing and the narrative is just perfect, I got hooked right away and couldn't put it down. I can't wait to see what happens next as it gets deeper.
reincaincarnation and magic, this is a fascinating read i'm waiting for the next chapter, the book had me on a continuous read without stopping
This story has a lot of potential, a good and enjoyable plot, most importantly, a relatable and interesting Mc, the grammar is good and understandable, the author did a great job!
I loved how the book started with chasing thief, the concept was amazing and from the very first line caught my attention, I can't wait to read more chapters, I wish you all the best author, your book is amazing 😍😍😍
Interesting concept and world background and characters are well described and writing quality is also good and keep releasing new chapters 👍👍👍
Hi author The novel you write is extremely nice. The chaps are also well written. I hope he makes more of them and continues his author job. May the stars align for him.
Awesome Story!!! I was hooked from the beginning and it keeps on getting better and better as the story progresses. The classroom was scene was very relatable. Keep it up and best of luck to the author.
The beginning of this book is quite energetic and I like that it transitioned and flowed into the next scene seamlessly. Great Job.
It has a great beginning, the story itself is amazing and the characterization is beautifully done, I appreciate your work. I would like to read more of it, keep writing more.
The story has some great potential to actually work, not gonna lie. The MC is understandable and is fleshed out and not rushed in any way.
I don't read this genre but still I recommend it to someone who enjoy reading action, exploration, and tunnels. Skye is a remarkable person n your novel. The idea is fresh and interesting. I enjoyed how you depicted events from the viewpoint of the main character while keeping the side characters alive.
This is just amazing with your writing style and the way you portrayed the story just glorious and wonderful, can't wait to see the next part <3
The novel is on to a great start. I really like the weak to strong concept. The description of the world could use some more effort and work. The character is a steal. I am impressed truly. Keep up the good work. But in my personal opinion the development is a bit on the slower side. Can be a different preference for other people though.
The potential of the story is really good, I have been wanting to read something like this for some time already. And the way the MC is I can’t wait to see more situations in the plot
This book is GREAT! A hidden gold inside the mine of books. If you dug it out your are the lucky one. I can't believe I found this type of book. The story is soo awesome. The plot is excellent. The writing style is flowing and you can enjoy the book. Everyone should read it. Good work author.
This story is fun to read with neat and well written, the characters are also unique and fun to follow. You will know how good this story is even in the early chapters. Great job author! Keep it up![img=recommend][img=recommend]
A hidden gem in a genre dominated by many fellow authors yet his writing skills and descriptions don't pale in comparison. The story's plot has the potential to grow far and wide if it continues at this pace. I personally liked it.
Nice synopsis and I bet the book cover is the reference for the image of the mc himself... that's good since it could help me imagine him easily. The beginning of the story was excellent so keep up the great work author :)
Hey author, I really loved the way your story progression moved. the characters are great, a bit too dark for my liking but it's cool. I'd really love to see more chapters in the future.
Hey guys! It's me again! Your friendly neighborhood author GrandSky. I'm not gonna say much. Just gonna let you know that your comments, reviews and support are highly welcome. Please continue to let me know your thoughts on my book. Means a lot! 😎😎🙏
Hey author! I've been following your novel for a while now and I gotta say, while I enjoyed the beginning of your chapter, I am enjoying it even more! While your novel has some bumps, it's definitely a 9/10 in my book! Keep it up author! All the best😀
This book deserve more than a five star rating.adventure , magic and the plot has so much potentials! The story line is superb,one of the best book months genre.All I can say is keep it up!