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I responded and defended the idea of this Novel to someone else that left a really cruel review..... however, I kinda now regret making my defense towards the Novel.... 1) My defense still sticks, I am poor, and disabled, so the whole concept of constant rewards for easy things and so easily finding treasures was something I can enjoy.... however, that now leads me to -> 2) I originally defended the Novel when I was only at ch 6. I barely started reading the Novel. Then 100's of chapters in, I realize that the Novel is nothing like the TAG "invincible" is suppose to mean.... the Author/Translator should have picked a better TAG than "Invincible", because it gave me the assumption that this was also one of those cultivation Novels.... 3).... The story is not bad per se... it is just that he is surrounded by Females that are mislead or take a huge misunderstanding towards MC's actions, and situations. With so many women, you would assume there would be a little bit of LIME involved or even mild Lemon, with confirmation from the Author that he is building a Harem... nope... no actual Harem, just a bunch of mislead women.... 4) As I pointed out in (2), I really expected this to be one of those System based "find Treasure" get rewarded with Cultivation resources and Wealth, and many more things with it. 5) and last but not least, I expected more from this Novel as I kept reading through.... Novel for me was a huge let down. Premise is nice, usually my type of Novel, but being RICH is not enough, I needed the MC to get rewarded with actual Super Powers and what not, and to have people to fight or embarrass with his amazing skills. The whole point of a Wish Fulfillment Novels is to Face Slap everyone... but to properly do that, you need to have the MC grow in actual strength.... as in Cultivation or Super powers that he can use to outwit and overpower his enemies or antagonists.
Starts off ok but then it becomes increasingly obvious that the MCA is weak AF. Also every chick wanting him is ridiculous. The only imagination put into the book is how he meets new girls but leaves them all hanging. Like how pathetic.
Good story...and I can said this because I read after 1000 chapter already translated and I don't need to care about skip couple of useless filler repetitive plot.... Good story netherless if you can ignore racism and nationalist from those Chin* gold pig country
je dois avouer que j'ai beaucoup aimé l'histoire , mais il y a quelque chose qui ne m'a pas vraiment plu , le chapitre 579 et 580 . auteur on comprend que tu aimes la chine mais n'exagère pas .il y a beaucoup de choses qui son exagéré autours de ces chapitres la ! et franchement ce n'est pas bien
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The mc IQ with women is too low.The wtriting was a mess.It should've been a great novel but how the mc handle with woman made it terrible.there's also too many unnecessary paragraph made it boring to read.
Another cliché w/ boy gets a system who helps him get rich, girls throw themselves at him, boy takes them, gets in a haremesque situation, boy becomes arrogant, and yada yada...smh...really disappointed w/ the story...
the story is good, it progresses dynamically, but the concept of time is confusing, the design of the characters and the overall description of the characters is minimalistic, and the math in the whole story is as confusing as if a 3-year-old child was calculating it. the only good descriptions are on antiques and cars, but even then only the external development of the characters except for mc is almost non-existent
Book is trash. Having MC being a wuss that he can't say no to these women is the worse. They need him to pretend he's with them so he goes along with it. Give the man some backbone to draw a clear line between these women who pester him all the time. It's annoying and repetitive. I was fine going on the hunt but gosh man can they just leave him alone and stop asking him to take them everyone
Estou atualmente no capítulo 210 e até o presente momento se houveram 15 capítulos realmente focados nos sistema de rastreio de tesouros, foram muitos eu gosto quando vc cria uma história com desenvolvimento porém tão poucos capítulos para oq deveria ser o foco da novel e decepcionante ele nem se deu ao trabalho de ir a locais que ele possivelmente teria mais chances de encontrar tesouros e nem se deu ao trabalho de utilizar esses coisas que o sistema da de forma eficiente ele é dono de 3 ou quatros empresas que se utilizadas de forma adequada podem realmente ter um grande aumento de valor. Resumindo a obra tem um enorme potencial porém mal aproveitado assim como a maioria das novels desse tipo
Girl gets gaslighted by best friend into deceiving mc into letting the news record his house and make a show about airing his dirty secrets about being a scum bag. Mc sees through it and gives her a chance to not betray him and come clean. Girl comes clean by crying and breaking down, and the mc apologizes for seeing through it and putting her on the spot so he doesn't lose trust in her. Mc apologizes, to the girl, because he made her confess trying to betray him. ??? I don't know about the main character, but even I, a random loser, have more self respect than to literally apologize to someone because they were planning on lying and deceiving you. Chapter 172 btw. Generally speaking I don't like many of the waifus since it feels like the mc is at their beck and call constantly and can't actually exist without a reaction from them. Mc feels more like a method for the author to get reactions out of characters than an actual character.
This novel just goes nowhere. he got a system that help him find treasure but did not have much fun with it, all he has to do was walk a few steps or dig a little then the system reward him with a company. He doesn't do anything with them companies, it's more for the plot line for the next chapter then never mention again. He meets a new chick every chapter and never does anything with most of them. This seems more like a single and broke guy diary fantasy than a novel.
Most of the females of this novel is trashy... seriously If I was Mc's place I would have chosen the true one. Who doesn't care about money or fame... Bunch of shameless fl..
This is a face slap novel, if thats what you enjoy then you will like this. However, 100 + chapters in there is no conflic or any real challege the mc has to face. And I doubt there will ever be one.
Read till the end of the free chapters, and it just seems like a boring power fantasy.
A story that is fun with wish fulfilment elements in it. Definitely a must read.
Why is mc of this novel so ignorant and stupid...author should invest some time in his character development.
another Chinese dump. .trash supreme. nothing except braindead plot. useless mc gets op power but does useless things , torture us with his nonsense harem nd same old last generation faceslap. old rich grandpas running around acting poor ,, class belle poor girl ,, mc getting money like rainwater in tsunami ,, money hungry harem --- idiot protagonist. .ruined my whole mood I JUST WONDER WHAT LEVEL OF DRUGS AUTHOR NEEDS TO SURVIVE THIS AND CONTINUE WRITING MORE CHAPTERS OF THIS BRAINLESS PLOT ..
189 chaps review Op mc has a system to make him a tycoon almost without effort, the plot armor is insane, sometimes funny, sometimes cringy, a lot of harem. But everything revolves around face slapping with money
Entertaining story, writing quality is excellent. But it lacks imagination, development. Also, sometimes, the story lacks logic. Spoiler : for ex, when he buys his mansion, it ie said to come with a fully equipped gym room, but in chapter 120, it isn't even mentioned before the MC goes to a public gym. And that isn't the only thing that lacks logic : the MC passes time with each of his "women", individually. But when he isn't with them anymore, they just seem to disappear : they do not contact him, and their story development is really minor. That is not what somebody in love or interested would do. It seems they don't exist away from the MC.
Membuka SPOILER
I haven't rated many books but here goes nothing. As He/She already said, it's a typical wish fulfilling story & that's it. I personally do not like how the women is portrayed here & there are quite a few illogical points mixed in a perfectly logical scenario. Then there's the car advertisement which help me get to a bit more about cars , that's a plus point 👉 (thanks for the info author ) Overall it's not a bad read but it's not for me.
the story is average but it's a classic wish fulfilment story. sometimes entertaining sometimes boring.
Read if you like pointless face slapping. I was willing to look past an extremely OP system and pointless face slapping, but how many times are you going to repeat the same plot? He has showed off infront of his High-school friends 5 times and it's only been 100 chapters. First he goes to friend's wedding and shows off, 20 chapters later, everyone has already forgotten how rich he is and are again treating him like a pauper. He's been collecting beauties without even touching them, I don't know what kind of Halal Harem he's building and he's already a multi billionaire but we are still reminding that his parents are poor, working people, he's yet to even treat them to lunch, author probably building them for an epic face slapping arc. I'm done with this, he owns the whole city at this point yet no one knows him.
mc's character is worst you can see author has shown that he is gentle man treat women good but what about his parents if i became rich my first to do list would be to have my parents live comfortable life but its 138 chapter but he didn't even contact with his parents
I was enjoying the story in the beginning but the author made the protagonist too easy going....feels like the protagonist doesn't have any attitude or such like a servant and i was seriously disappointed with recent chapters....the lead "shen batain" is just treating MC like a pet and he is okay with it?? i would have kicked her out of novel
What a pathetic main character, a coward who acts tough but as soon as these girls demand things he folds every single time even if they undermine him he folds, let alone these female characters. Story progression makes no sense
I responded and defended the idea of this Novel to someone else that left a really cruel review..... however, I kinda now regret making my defense towards the Novel.... 1) My defense still sticks, I am poor, and disabled, so the whole concept of constant rewards for easy things and so easily finding treasures was something I can enjoy.... however, that now leads me to -> 2) I originally defended the Novel when I was only at ch 6. I barely started reading the Novel. Then 100's of chapters in, I realize that the Novel is nothing like the TAG "invincible" is suppose to mean.... the Author/Translator should have picked a better TAG than "Invincible", because it gave me the assumption that this was also one of those cultivation Novels.... 3).... The story is not bad per se... it is just that he is surrounded by Females that are mislead or take a huge misunderstanding towards MC's actions, and situations. With so many women, you would assume there would be a little bit of LIME involved or even mild Lemon, with confirmation from the Author that he is building a Harem... nope... no actual Harem, just a bunch of mislead women.... 4) As I pointed out in (2), I really expected this to be one of those System based "find Treasure" get rewarded with Cultivation resources and Wealth, and many more things with it. 5) and last but not least, I expected more from this Novel as I kept reading through.... Novel for me was a huge let down. Premise is nice, usually my type of Novel, but being RICH is not enough, I needed the MC to get rewarded with actual Super Powers and what not, and to have people to fight or embarrass with his amazing skills. The whole point of a Wish Fulfillment Novels is to Face Slap everyone... but to properly do that, you need to have the MC grow in actual strength.... as in Cultivation or Super powers that he can use to outwit and overpower his enemies or antagonists.
Starts off ok but then it becomes increasingly obvious that the MCA is weak AF. Also every chick wanting him is ridiculous. The only imagination put into the book is how he meets new girls but leaves them all hanging. Like how pathetic.
Good story...and I can said this because I read after 1000 chapter already translated and I don't need to care about skip couple of useless filler repetitive plot.... Good story netherless if you can ignore racism and nationalist from those Chin* gold pig country
je dois avouer que j'ai beaucoup aimé l'histoire , mais il y a quelque chose qui ne m'a pas vraiment plu , le chapitre 579 et 580 . auteur on comprend que tu aimes la chine mais n'exagère pas .il y a beaucoup de choses qui son exagéré autours de ces chapitres la ! et franchement ce n'est pas bien
Membuka SPOILER The mc IQ with women is too low.The wtriting was a mess.It should've been a great novel but how the mc handle with woman made it terrible.there's also too many unnecessary paragraph made it boring to read.
Another cliché w/ boy gets a system who helps him get rich, girls throw themselves at him, boy takes them, gets in a haremesque situation, boy becomes arrogant, and yada yada...smh...really disappointed w/ the story...
the story is good, it progresses dynamically, but the concept of time is confusing, the design of the characters and the overall description of the characters is minimalistic, and the math in the whole story is as confusing as if a 3-year-old child was calculating it. the only good descriptions are on antiques and cars, but even then only the external development of the characters except for mc is almost non-existent
Book is trash. Having MC being a wuss that he can't say no to these women is the worse. They need him to pretend he's with them so he goes along with it. Give the man some backbone to draw a clear line between these women who pester him all the time. It's annoying and repetitive. I was fine going on the hunt but gosh man can they just leave him alone and stop asking him to take them everyone
Estou atualmente no capítulo 210 e até o presente momento se houveram 15 capítulos realmente focados nos sistema de rastreio de tesouros, foram muitos eu gosto quando vc cria uma história com desenvolvimento porém tão poucos capítulos para oq deveria ser o foco da novel e decepcionante ele nem se deu ao trabalho de ir a locais que ele possivelmente teria mais chances de encontrar tesouros e nem se deu ao trabalho de utilizar esses coisas que o sistema da de forma eficiente ele é dono de 3 ou quatros empresas que se utilizadas de forma adequada podem realmente ter um grande aumento de valor. Resumindo a obra tem um enorme potencial porém mal aproveitado assim como a maioria das novels desse tipo
Girl gets gaslighted by best friend into deceiving mc into letting the news record his house and make a show about airing his dirty secrets about being a scum bag. Mc sees through it and gives her a chance to not betray him and come clean. Girl comes clean by crying and breaking down, and the mc apologizes for seeing through it and putting her on the spot so he doesn't lose trust in her. Mc apologizes, to the girl, because he made her confess trying to betray him. ??? I don't know about the main character, but even I, a random loser, have more self respect than to literally apologize to someone because they were planning on lying and deceiving you. Chapter 172 btw. Generally speaking I don't like many of the waifus since it feels like the mc is at their beck and call constantly and can't actually exist without a reaction from them. Mc feels more like a method for the author to get reactions out of characters than an actual character.
This novel just goes nowhere. he got a system that help him find treasure but did not have much fun with it, all he has to do was walk a few steps or dig a little then the system reward him with a company. He doesn't do anything with them companies, it's more for the plot line for the next chapter then never mention again. He meets a new chick every chapter and never does anything with most of them. This seems more like a single and broke guy diary fantasy than a novel.
Most of the females of this novel is trashy... seriously If I was Mc's place I would have chosen the true one. Who doesn't care about money or fame... Bunch of shameless fl..
This is a face slap novel, if thats what you enjoy then you will like this. However, 100 + chapters in there is no conflic or any real challege the mc has to face. And I doubt there will ever be one.
Read till the end of the free chapters, and it just seems like a boring power fantasy.
A story that is fun with wish fulfilment elements in it. Definitely a must read.
Why is mc of this novel so ignorant and stupid...author should invest some time in his character development.
another Chinese dump. .trash supreme. nothing except braindead plot. useless mc gets op power but does useless things , torture us with his nonsense harem nd same old last generation faceslap. old rich grandpas running around acting poor ,, class belle poor girl ,, mc getting money like rainwater in tsunami ,, money hungry harem --- idiot protagonist. .ruined my whole mood I JUST WONDER WHAT LEVEL OF DRUGS AUTHOR NEEDS TO SURVIVE THIS AND CONTINUE WRITING MORE CHAPTERS OF THIS BRAINLESS PLOT ..
189 chaps review Op mc has a system to make him a tycoon almost without effort, the plot armor is insane, sometimes funny, sometimes cringy, a lot of harem. But everything revolves around face slapping with money
Entertaining story, writing quality is excellent. But it lacks imagination, development. Also, sometimes, the story lacks logic. Spoiler : for ex, when he buys his mansion, it ie said to come with a fully equipped gym room, but in chapter 120, it isn't even mentioned before the MC goes to a public gym. And that isn't the only thing that lacks logic : the MC passes time with each of his "women", individually. But when he isn't with them anymore, they just seem to disappear : they do not contact him, and their story development is really minor. That is not what somebody in love or interested would do. It seems they don't exist away from the MC.
Membuka SPOILER I haven't rated many books but here goes nothing. As He/She already said, it's a typical wish fulfilling story & that's it. I personally do not like how the women is portrayed here & there are quite a few illogical points mixed in a perfectly logical scenario. Then there's the car advertisement which help me get to a bit more about cars , that's a plus point 👉 (thanks for the info author ) Overall it's not a bad read but it's not for me.
the story is average but it's a classic wish fulfilment story. sometimes entertaining sometimes boring.
Read if you like pointless face slapping. I was willing to look past an extremely OP system and pointless face slapping, but how many times are you going to repeat the same plot? He has showed off infront of his High-school friends 5 times and it's only been 100 chapters. First he goes to friend's wedding and shows off, 20 chapters later, everyone has already forgotten how rich he is and are again treating him like a pauper. He's been collecting beauties without even touching them, I don't know what kind of Halal Harem he's building and he's already a multi billionaire but we are still reminding that his parents are poor, working people, he's yet to even treat them to lunch, author probably building them for an epic face slapping arc. I'm done with this, he owns the whole city at this point yet no one knows him.
mc's character is worst you can see author has shown that he is gentle man treat women good but what about his parents if i became rich my first to do list would be to have my parents live comfortable life but its 138 chapter but he didn't even contact with his parents
I was enjoying the story in the beginning but the author made the protagonist too easy going....feels like the protagonist doesn't have any attitude or such like a servant and i was seriously disappointed with recent chapters....the lead "shen batain" is just treating MC like a pet and he is okay with it?? i would have kicked her out of novel
What a pathetic main character, a coward who acts tough but as soon as these girls demand things he folds every single time even if they undermine him he folds, let alone these female characters. Story progression makes no sense