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Overall I think the start was very good. The only thing I found wrong were some minor mistakes.At some point you described liza as a her and then a he which made me a little confused but it was really interesting
I would highly recommend this to you guys it has uniqueness to other novels and the current plot is interesting. So please try reading it 👍
okay...i'm done reading all that the chapter👍 this book is the best i ever seen..so don't stop to create a new book okay👍❤ the main character was amazing, author❤❤
I love this book which has a unique and amazing plot! The description of the atmosphere also made me tense up and as if I was in the story. you did well, author! :D
Wow, the synopsis is awesome, it makes me want to read more, the story has a lot of suspense and I really want to know how Liza will find her soulmate. Keep it going author.
so interesting story. i need more chapter please. good job author! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'm not done reading the entire chapters available but I must say that this author is really great with his words . Liza is a young teenager and I love how the author portray her in the novel. She was stucked by lightning.... and I seriously won't say what happened to her . This novel is filled with suspense and at some point I started asking myself about the next outcome 😆 I'm not really a fan of this time of novel, because I deal on mainly comedy romance, but this novel kept me to my edge, and I'll be reading more from this author ♥️💕
Not gonna lie, I like the aspect of gore in Mr. Albert getting hit by the trunk of a tree.🤣 Also i like how she is suddenly pressured to not say anything as if something otherworldly is prohibiting her, it makes u stay at edge of your seat. And the exclusive ability of looking at other people clearly gives of an OP skill but seductively strong yet simple. It's great. Keep on writing.
Hey author, trust me when I say this, you can become Invincible with this story. The other greats like author kazzenlx and the rest all started it like this. Please keep it up for I support you hundred percent. Well, 99.9%, hehe. Not you only but I support the story as well. It's a nice start. I recommend this to you reading this.
I have become the fan of Liza, when I read about her in the synopsis. I wish I can be like her and have supernatural powers. Btw I am more interested in destruction than healing and I hope our hero will have that power! Good luck!
The synopsis of this book is very intriguing right from the moment I came across it. The author has a way with words and is very descriptive it feels like I'm watching a movie. I recommend this book
The story is interesting and suspenseful at the beginning of the chapter! It's cool, Liza can see the crystals on someone's body. ggwp! keep writing Thor [img=recommend]
I can't asked more from this author. he surely did a great job in writing this suspense filled Novel. I'd be at the edge of my bed reading this each time 🙂.
Overall I think the start was very good. The only thing I found wrong were some minor mistakes.At some point you described liza as a her and then a he which made me a little confused but it was really interesting
I would highly recommend this to you guys it has uniqueness to other novels and the current plot is interesting. So please try reading it 👍
okay...i'm done reading all that the chapter👍 this book is the best i ever seen..so don't stop to create a new book okay👍❤ the main character was amazing, author❤❤
I love this book which has a unique and amazing plot! The description of the atmosphere also made me tense up and as if I was in the story. you did well, author! :D
Wow, the synopsis is awesome, it makes me want to read more, the story has a lot of suspense and I really want to know how Liza will find her soulmate. Keep it going author.
so interesting story. i need more chapter please. good job author! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I'm not done reading the entire chapters available but I must say that this author is really great with his words . Liza is a young teenager and I love how the author portray her in the novel. She was stucked by lightning.... and I seriously won't say what happened to her . This novel is filled with suspense and at some point I started asking myself about the next outcome 😆 I'm not really a fan of this time of novel, because I deal on mainly comedy romance, but this novel kept me to my edge, and I'll be reading more from this author ♥️💕
Not gonna lie, I like the aspect of gore in Mr. Albert getting hit by the trunk of a tree.🤣 Also i like how she is suddenly pressured to not say anything as if something otherworldly is prohibiting her, it makes u stay at edge of your seat. And the exclusive ability of looking at other people clearly gives of an OP skill but seductively strong yet simple. It's great. Keep on writing.
Hey author, trust me when I say this, you can become Invincible with this story. The other greats like author kazzenlx and the rest all started it like this. Please keep it up for I support you hundred percent. Well, 99.9%, hehe. Not you only but I support the story as well. It's a nice start. I recommend this to you reading this.
I have become the fan of Liza, when I read about her in the synopsis. I wish I can be like her and have supernatural powers. Btw I am more interested in destruction than healing and I hope our hero will have that power! Good luck!
The synopsis of this book is very intriguing right from the moment I came across it. The author has a way with words and is very descriptive it feels like I'm watching a movie. I recommend this book
The story is interesting and suspenseful at the beginning of the chapter! It's cool, Liza can see the crystals on someone's body. ggwp! keep writing Thor [img=recommend]
I can't asked more from this author. he surely did a great job in writing this suspense filled Novel. I'd be at the edge of my bed reading this each time 🙂.