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I'm really hooked with only the few chapters and I hope you come back and keep the story going 👍[img=update]
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Very good grammar. Can't say anything about updates, but, 5 stars. So far, I like how the story is heading. Character design. A little disappointed when the mc spared the woman, however, I'm sure the mc will change soon. World background: W AUTHOR
As I'm writing this, I'm 100% sure I messed something up in the FF but, I can't quite put my finger on it. This text is merely here so I don't-
I'm really hooked with only the few chapters and I hope you come back and keep the story going 👍[img=update]
Don't drop this masterpiece. 5 stars for everything. Sjsjsjsnsmkslwlwlwlqpansbdnxlwbsbsksusiwi29qknaan6271w618bszbnsbrubbruhsbsjsnnssn ssnnsnsns nsnensjs? Kskskskwkwkw!
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeemoreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Very good grammar. Can't say anything about updates, but, 5 stars. So far, I like how the story is heading. Character design. A little disappointed when the mc spared the woman, however, I'm sure the mc will change soon. World background: W AUTHOR
As I'm writing this, I'm 100% sure I messed something up in the FF but, I can't quite put my finger on it. This text is merely here so I don't-