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Bro if you don’t drop this it has great potential if it’s someone like a normal relatable person and they got reincarnated as frieza this story can be very good but that being said you need make sure you have proper pacing you can’t just think about him being able to train and instantly clap everyone you need to build his character before anything because if not it will fall apart later on that being said I could be saying this for nothing I haven’t even read yet
Bro if you don’t drop this it has great potential if it’s someone like a normal relatable person and they got reincarnated as frieza this story can be very good but that being said you need make sure you have proper pacing you can’t just think about him being able to train and instantly clap everyone you need to build his character before anything because if not it will fall apart later on that being said I could be saying this for nothing I haven’t even read yet