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unlike others there is a certain quality in this. maybe author age is not low like 12. I dont know. top 3.......................................................
This had sooooo much potential please continue i want to read this. This fanfic became so much for me please please continue i hate it when people stop writing books, novels or fanfics with so much potential.
This was an awesome read, while I had a few hang-ups they were just common ones when reading a story Honestly did enjoy it overall hopefully you continue working on this one! Thanks for writing it
aku suka dengan ide kekuatan nya walau diambil dari chara game lain sih 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍👍👍👍👍👍
Muito boa a história e o desenvolvimento, o quirk do Mc é muito top, meio Op mas o autor conseguiu equilibrar muito bem. A personalidade do Mc também é muito boa (tô cansada de ler história de MHA onde o protagonista tem uma personalidade horrível e estúpida) Espero que o autor possa continuar a história e desenvolve lá ainda mais.
FL boring and forced and cringe , Mc personality annoying, interactions between characters feel unnatural . Close combat weapon of choice is stupid and childish. He doesn't have the mental age he is suppose to have but instead feels like his reincarnation and forcefully pretending not to be a genius since he was a baby tuned him into a stupid class clown .His quirk is fun to develop but the bad parts of his storytelling makes this fan fiction a turn off and hard to bear reading.
I'm still confused how the mc looks like I need references good ff tho 😀👍
Looked forward to reading this after seeing the ratings and the description. What no one wrote was the fact it's the typical shounen troope, No change in the story except a few skipped fights due to the mc's input. His parents and his "gf" wants to punish his behaviour at close to any turn they can due to comedy effect, just the fact his parent(s) wants to punish him for showing off at the sports festival is legit beyond me. The writing quality is superb, except a few typos with names and stuff like that, the only thing that drags this fanfic down is the fact the logic used at every turn to force comedy is literally trash. That said it's not a bad fanfic, just immature and aimed towards teenage readers.
The start, the abilities is good but later at the chapter it got boring The story is just like the mha with him as part of the cast nothing different about him.
the ability is very creative and good but the mc personality is okay but the way you deliver his speech is too bland he's more like a clown who's trying to make the readers laugh but can't make them it's too awkward personality rather than carefree it's making the story boring wasting the idea of a good ability
quite good enough, the power is very creative and good and a an fmc that has rarely been used and good story line
The book is going amazing…Loving the plot and ur writing style, the romance is going good too…If u can plz give me some suggestions on how to write fight scenes, I’m not really that great in them and I’m working on a new fanfic so need some help…
Tiene bastante potencial, me gusta como se esta desarrollando la historia así como también los diversos poderes que muestra con sus cartas, estaré apoyando en los próximos capítulos, no dejes caer esta historia
This is a real good story and 4 is the best I give to anything that I won't pay money for. The only problem I have is the title could be changed to pull more people in.
Sorry dude if the update schedule was decent I would have given all 5 stars. But I have to say the storyline is nice so far, if there is something that is lacking then it is just that this story seems like it will be dependent on the canon the most. I am not saying that following the canon is bad but if possible please deviate from the canon after sometime. But anyway keep up the work and please update it more it is one of the most interesting stories i have ever read and I hope that you won't drop this midway.
Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
One of the really good MHA FanFic I read with something new and made with a lot of creativity. I wonder why this Fanfic isn't that popular right now when it's really good.
I like Idea Twisted Fate definitely have powers that are versatile but ...Gragas would be better... Anyway I m exited to see TF powers in MHA author can do a lot of cool stuff with cards by adding new effects so power development is up to author imagination. Best of luck author let's gets at last to sport festival [img=update]
Membuka SPOILER
seems decent enough thanks for the chapter keep it up and everything is going well and I 322 the new world I'm always dropped in years before the
unlike others there is a certain quality in this. maybe author age is not low like 12. I dont know. top 3.......................................................
This had sooooo much potential please continue i want to read this. This fanfic became so much for me please please continue i hate it when people stop writing books, novels or fanfics with so much potential.
This was an awesome read, while I had a few hang-ups they were just common ones when reading a story Honestly did enjoy it overall hopefully you continue working on this one! Thanks for writing it
aku suka dengan ide kekuatan nya walau diambil dari chara game lain sih 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍👍👍👍👍👍
Muito boa a história e o desenvolvimento, o quirk do Mc é muito top, meio Op mas o autor conseguiu equilibrar muito bem. A personalidade do Mc também é muito boa (tô cansada de ler história de MHA onde o protagonista tem uma personalidade horrível e estúpida) Espero que o autor possa continuar a história e desenvolve lá ainda mais.
FL boring and forced and cringe , Mc personality annoying, interactions between characters feel unnatural . Close combat weapon of choice is stupid and childish. He doesn't have the mental age he is suppose to have but instead feels like his reincarnation and forcefully pretending not to be a genius since he was a baby tuned him into a stupid class clown .His quirk is fun to develop but the bad parts of his storytelling makes this fan fiction a turn off and hard to bear reading.
I'm still confused how the mc looks like I need references good ff tho 😀👍
Looked forward to reading this after seeing the ratings and the description. What no one wrote was the fact it's the typical shounen troope, No change in the story except a few skipped fights due to the mc's input. His parents and his "gf" wants to punish his behaviour at close to any turn they can due to comedy effect, just the fact his parent(s) wants to punish him for showing off at the sports festival is legit beyond me. The writing quality is superb, except a few typos with names and stuff like that, the only thing that drags this fanfic down is the fact the logic used at every turn to force comedy is literally trash. That said it's not a bad fanfic, just immature and aimed towards teenage readers.
The start, the abilities is good but later at the chapter it got boring The story is just like the mha with him as part of the cast nothing different about him.
the ability is very creative and good but the mc personality is okay but the way you deliver his speech is too bland he's more like a clown who's trying to make the readers laugh but can't make them it's too awkward personality rather than carefree it's making the story boring wasting the idea of a good ability
quite good enough, the power is very creative and good and a an fmc that has rarely been used and good story line
The book is going amazing…Loving the plot and ur writing style, the romance is going good too…If u can plz give me some suggestions on how to write fight scenes, I’m not really that great in them and I’m working on a new fanfic so need some help…
Tiene bastante potencial, me gusta como se esta desarrollando la historia así como también los diversos poderes que muestra con sus cartas, estaré apoyando en los próximos capítulos, no dejes caer esta historia
This is a real good story and 4 is the best I give to anything that I won't pay money for. The only problem I have is the title could be changed to pull more people in.
Sorry dude if the update schedule was decent I would have given all 5 stars. But I have to say the storyline is nice so far, if there is something that is lacking then it is just that this story seems like it will be dependent on the canon the most. I am not saying that following the canon is bad but if possible please deviate from the canon after sometime. But anyway keep up the work and please update it more it is one of the most interesting stories i have ever read and I hope that you won't drop this midway.
Goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood
One of the really good MHA FanFic I read with something new and made with a lot of creativity. I wonder why this Fanfic isn't that popular right now when it's really good.
I like Idea Twisted Fate definitely have powers that are versatile but ...Gragas would be better... Anyway I m exited to see TF powers in MHA author can do a lot of cool stuff with cards by adding new effects so power development is up to author imagination. Best of luck author let's gets at last to sport festival [img=update]
Membuka SPOILER seems decent enough thanks for the chapter keep it up and everything is going well and I 322 the new world I'm always dropped in years before the
love it but is it dropped