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It's kind of boring. I like it, but it is new, sum more actually or more experienment
extreme nerfing case check hypocrite mc check mc can save thousands from death every day by healing but he decided to be a vigilante well... he's selfish but okay and then the nerfing the hypocrite way of thinking/act author dumping negativity that was not in canon so he can make it "dark" also i suspect this author being an atheist, there's not much to read in this fanfic just some guy doing random hypocrite acts out of selfish desires just boring overall and a betrayal of title and synopsis and tags
i am sorry bruh, but you nerfed the mc too much even thought you tag this novel overpowered mc. mc had good quirk but also a little problem in his head (Stoopid MC).
Drop this story already. But please do not write another one. Kthxbai :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(
The main character is an idiot, thats about it. He has the ability to do anything, and he proceeds to use brute force as his main method of doing anything. The worst part is that he doesn’t use it to increase his training speed by much (he does use it, but he only uses it to increase his memory and learning ability for school. He also uses it early on only once to increase his physical growth and that was extremely minor) Tldr: if you have more than 2 braincells, dont read it.
Really? Another Force to become a student in UA fic hahaha. what a cliche. Mc has a hero syndrome And become a vigilante, Well vigilante is actually good and i thought there would be a cat and mouse game that will happen but Then He coincidentally appear in a store where all might is and bam he was knock unconscious by almight and force to a student in Ua 😆.
I don't get why the reviews are so harsh. Sure, the MC COULD have used his quirk better, but I think it's pretty good. Though I do hope to see it used to it's full potential in training, such as having a super adaptation order + super regen, or accelerated training growth (or adaptation) + gravity manipulation then crushing himself a bit, while switching with a regeneration order when he can't go on. Or maybe even an order to develop another quirk, even if it's weak. It'd also be cool if in the future after defeating AFO, MC were to use an order to forcibly activate his quirk, giving the MC All For One? But maybe the thing of not being compatible with too many quirks to nerf him, which is slightly overcome using an adaptive order or another one to integrate it better.
Hey te mereces un 5.0 por haber hecho esta novela, puede que no sea la mejor, pero se nota tu esfuerzo y me gusta esta novela, así que creo que te lo mereces
From the reviews I'm getting, this is probably the author letting off some steam by trying something new maybe? Anyways the best work the author has done is One Piece: Revolutionary so im still waiting on that.
good character development. - check. good story - check. good worldbuilding - check summary : A GOOD READ
Those 2 stars were minty because it’s MHA. But the talk about the quirk not being used to it’s full potential and the MC being a NEET you would think he could be more creative. It went downhill after meeting Nezu.
Petition to remove #Overpowered tag from this sh*tstain that masquerades as one. People who came for that specific tag is misled because he's nerfed af anyway.
I liked the idea of quirk which gave the MC unlimited options but I didn't enjoy how nerfed he was. Secondly, this is an AU where izuku doesn't get the OFA and MC has no interest in taking it for whatever reason. If I knew it was an AU I wouldn't have wasted my time with this story. In my opinion the point of making a fanfiction is to see how an extra character would impact the main story not write a boring original story in the main one... It just ruins the story. Even if we ignore the bad plot there are still many things that bothered me like how Nezu blatantly told him it's ok to kill the villains and that heroes do it all the time after he was captured without putting up any fights. The Author has a good grasp on grammar but that's it. That's the only good point of this story.
I personally felt like this was one of my favorite fanfics i liked the pacing not dragging it out in the training arc was the good part although i am curious who the main love interest is i hope it doesnt become a harem. The hero name is a little cringe and not really creative there are plenty of names you couldve come up with and you came up with something bland. The goal of the MC of trying to be a hero feels like a good start although the reason and motivation is missing you don't really need a reason to do good and if he kept being a vigilante he probably woulve been caught by a hero again probably from the top 10 so i get why he accepted the deal I really liked that you expanded the world to different countries like America. But anyway keep up the good work i will always check daily for new uploads.
No começo e bom , mas o autor não sabe desenvolver a história sem colocar o MC no meio de toda a merda sem sentido, a total falta de lógica em como o autor força o MC a usar seus poderes faz com que a história perca a graça com o tempo e a falta de criatividade do autor em mudar o enredo e desepsonante
Worst thing I've read lately. We have a typical victimized MC! Thought to be quirkless, abused by society, etc.. Then, he finally gets power... and what does he do? Does he rain fire and brimstone on those who kicked him onto the streets when he was eight years old? NO. His reincarnation must have addled his mind because he wants to be a hero, due to his sudden and bizarre desire to HELP PEOPLE. And instead of doing the smart thing, and helping people by taking his quirk to a hospital, he decides to become a vigilante! Unbelievable. How does the author come up with this stuff? I briefly wondered if this was some kind of surreal comedy because of how little the MC made sense, but alas, this story has no such redeeming qualities. It's been a while since I've come across a story I've hated this much. But this story deserves it. I mean, seriously, he killed that one guy just because he couldn't be bothered to explain things to the authorities. Yet he calls himself a hero and "wants to help people"? Unbelievable. If this story was a liquid, it would be sewage.
It started off good until he got to ua then it just started to go downhill fast in my opinion.— - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
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Nueva orden: un don que literalmente mente puede romper todo lo que existe en baku no hero, solo por pronunciar estás palabras. ⭐puedo copiar dones ⭐Tengo control adsoluto de mi cuerpo ⭐Soy un mega prodigio ⭐Los dones que copio son permanentes. Y así sucesivamente, el don solo está limitado a la imaginación del usuario....y este mc lo desperdicia demasiado, no voy a mentir que no tiene un imaginación pero es un !Reencarnado! La imaginación le sobra y vuelvo digo, no aprovecha nisiquiera su potencial.....*Suspiro* almenos la escritura es buena.
This is nonsensical. This is nonsensical. This is nonsensical. This is nonsensical. This is nonsensical. This is nonsensical. This is nonsensical.
Forced plot to send the mc to UA plus a nerf to his quirk not worth the time. ...................................................................... ......................
ummmmmm well I guess it's kinda good but somehow the author seems to make the main character more idiotic than your usual protagonist but I'm not sure if it's due to the author's lack of knowledge or if the author did it on purpose
In the first chapter, the main character says that they use the stars and stripes better than Caitlin, but then he goes to learn from Caitlin and in all the time he has not used the stars and stripes better than Caitlin, even worse.
I really tried to give it a go but it was horrible mc is a hypocrite all the things he has done with his quirk is more like a villain than a hero and you nerf the quirk more than the manga it self mc could have used it in many ways but you went for the worst
Mc hasn't really changed and is getting nerfed way too much for the sake of plot, he's barely gaining strength and somehow doesn't really look for ideas on how to use his quirk even after having it for so long and everything.
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Please continue I really like both the character's story and the development, I love his powers and I can't wait to see what happens I hope Aizawa adopts him and Eri it would be so cute
It's kind of boring. I like it, but it is new, sum more actually or more experienment
extreme nerfing case check hypocrite mc check mc can save thousands from death every day by healing but he decided to be a vigilante well... he's selfish but okay and then the nerfing the hypocrite way of thinking/act author dumping negativity that was not in canon so he can make it "dark" also i suspect this author being an atheist, there's not much to read in this fanfic just some guy doing random hypocrite acts out of selfish desires just boring overall and a betrayal of title and synopsis and tags
i am sorry bruh, but you nerfed the mc too much even thought you tag this novel overpowered mc. mc had good quirk but also a little problem in his head (Stoopid MC).
Drop this story already. But please do not write another one. Kthxbai :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :( :(
The main character is an idiot, thats about it. He has the ability to do anything, and he proceeds to use brute force as his main method of doing anything. The worst part is that he doesn’t use it to increase his training speed by much (he does use it, but he only uses it to increase his memory and learning ability for school. He also uses it early on only once to increase his physical growth and that was extremely minor) Tldr: if you have more than 2 braincells, dont read it.
Really? Another Force to become a student in UA fic hahaha. what a cliche. Mc has a hero syndrome And become a vigilante, Well vigilante is actually good and i thought there would be a cat and mouse game that will happen but Then He coincidentally appear in a store where all might is and bam he was knock unconscious by almight and force to a student in Ua 😆.
I don't get why the reviews are so harsh. Sure, the MC COULD have used his quirk better, but I think it's pretty good. Though I do hope to see it used to it's full potential in training, such as having a super adaptation order + super regen, or accelerated training growth (or adaptation) + gravity manipulation then crushing himself a bit, while switching with a regeneration order when he can't go on. Or maybe even an order to develop another quirk, even if it's weak. It'd also be cool if in the future after defeating AFO, MC were to use an order to forcibly activate his quirk, giving the MC All For One? But maybe the thing of not being compatible with too many quirks to nerf him, which is slightly overcome using an adaptive order or another one to integrate it better.
Hey te mereces un 5.0 por haber hecho esta novela, puede que no sea la mejor, pero se nota tu esfuerzo y me gusta esta novela, así que creo que te lo mereces
From the reviews I'm getting, this is probably the author letting off some steam by trying something new maybe? Anyways the best work the author has done is One Piece: Revolutionary so im still waiting on that.
good character development. - check. good story - check. good worldbuilding - check summary : A GOOD READ
Those 2 stars were minty because it’s MHA. But the talk about the quirk not being used to it’s full potential and the MC being a NEET you would think he could be more creative. It went downhill after meeting Nezu.
Petition to remove #Overpowered tag from this sh*tstain that masquerades as one. People who came for that specific tag is misled because he's nerfed af anyway.
I liked the idea of quirk which gave the MC unlimited options but I didn't enjoy how nerfed he was. Secondly, this is an AU where izuku doesn't get the OFA and MC has no interest in taking it for whatever reason. If I knew it was an AU I wouldn't have wasted my time with this story. In my opinion the point of making a fanfiction is to see how an extra character would impact the main story not write a boring original story in the main one... It just ruins the story. Even if we ignore the bad plot there are still many things that bothered me like how Nezu blatantly told him it's ok to kill the villains and that heroes do it all the time after he was captured without putting up any fights. The Author has a good grasp on grammar but that's it. That's the only good point of this story.
I personally felt like this was one of my favorite fanfics i liked the pacing not dragging it out in the training arc was the good part although i am curious who the main love interest is i hope it doesnt become a harem. The hero name is a little cringe and not really creative there are plenty of names you couldve come up with and you came up with something bland. The goal of the MC of trying to be a hero feels like a good start although the reason and motivation is missing you don't really need a reason to do good and if he kept being a vigilante he probably woulve been caught by a hero again probably from the top 10 so i get why he accepted the deal I really liked that you expanded the world to different countries like America. But anyway keep up the good work i will always check daily for new uploads.
No começo e bom , mas o autor não sabe desenvolver a história sem colocar o MC no meio de toda a merda sem sentido, a total falta de lógica em como o autor força o MC a usar seus poderes faz com que a história perca a graça com o tempo e a falta de criatividade do autor em mudar o enredo e desepsonante
Worst thing I've read lately. We have a typical victimized MC! Thought to be quirkless, abused by society, etc.. Then, he finally gets power... and what does he do? Does he rain fire and brimstone on those who kicked him onto the streets when he was eight years old? NO. His reincarnation must have addled his mind because he wants to be a hero, due to his sudden and bizarre desire to HELP PEOPLE. And instead of doing the smart thing, and helping people by taking his quirk to a hospital, he decides to become a vigilante! Unbelievable. How does the author come up with this stuff? I briefly wondered if this was some kind of surreal comedy because of how little the MC made sense, but alas, this story has no such redeeming qualities. It's been a while since I've come across a story I've hated this much. But this story deserves it. I mean, seriously, he killed that one guy just because he couldn't be bothered to explain things to the authorities. Yet he calls himself a hero and "wants to help people"? Unbelievable. If this story was a liquid, it would be sewage.
It started off good until he got to ua then it just started to go downhill fast in my opinion.— - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
Good next next next next.......................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD GOD
Nueva orden: un don que literalmente mente puede romper todo lo que existe en baku no hero, solo por pronunciar estás palabras. ⭐puedo copiar dones ⭐Tengo control adsoluto de mi cuerpo ⭐Soy un mega prodigio ⭐Los dones que copio son permanentes. Y así sucesivamente, el don solo está limitado a la imaginación del usuario....y este mc lo desperdicia demasiado, no voy a mentir que no tiene un imaginación pero es un !Reencarnado! La imaginación le sobra y vuelvo digo, no aprovecha nisiquiera su potencial.....*Suspiro* almenos la escritura es buena.
This is nonsensical. This is nonsensical. This is nonsensical. This is nonsensical. This is nonsensical. This is nonsensical. This is nonsensical.
Forced plot to send the mc to UA plus a nerf to his quirk not worth the time. ...................................................................... ......................
ummmmmm well I guess it's kinda good but somehow the author seems to make the main character more idiotic than your usual protagonist but I'm not sure if it's due to the author's lack of knowledge or if the author did it on purpose
In the first chapter, the main character says that they use the stars and stripes better than Caitlin, but then he goes to learn from Caitlin and in all the time he has not used the stars and stripes better than Caitlin, even worse.
I really tried to give it a go but it was horrible mc is a hypocrite all the things he has done with his quirk is more like a villain than a hero and you nerf the quirk more than the manga it self mc could have used it in many ways but you went for the worst
Mc hasn't really changed and is getting nerfed way too much for the sake of plot, he's barely gaining strength and somehow doesn't really look for ideas on how to use his quirk even after having it for so long and everything.
Membuka SPOILER 
Please continue I really like both the character's story and the development, I love his powers and I can't wait to see what happens I hope Aizawa adopts him and Eri it would be so cute