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This novel is not bad at all. Honestly i quite annoyed of mc, but this new taste so I'll will read this for a while. Btw author do you know boruto dad? I just have feeling 50% is just for the plot and 50% you didn't know boruto dad.
I thought it would be more interesting, in addition to the fact that in the first chapters the story is quite pathetic. ......................................
the First Chapter is Rough they Say Rubbish alot in the First chap and i cant help but imagine them saying in a British Accent and there is a A sentence that makes it look like the Mc is checking out a Seven Year-old but he is just Checking their Potential i assuming (i hope so) other than that its ok overall
It's a nice story i like the fact that danzo is mc uncle ___&____________________________________________________________________________________________
good. do what you think is good for your own story. sometimes simple action is the best action at that moment. when you read the story you dont see him, but when you see him you read the whole story.. monday teusday wednesday oh oh oh..
This novel is not bad at all. Honestly i quite annoyed of mc, but this new taste so I'll will read this for a while. Btw author do you know boruto dad? I just have feeling 50% is just for the plot and 50% you didn't know boruto dad.
I thought it would be more interesting, in addition to the fact that in the first chapters the story is quite pathetic. ......................................
the First Chapter is Rough they Say Rubbish alot in the First chap and i cant help but imagine them saying in a British Accent and there is a A sentence that makes it look like the Mc is checking out a Seven Year-old but he is just Checking their Potential i assuming (i hope so) other than that its ok overall
It's a nice story i like the fact that danzo is mc uncle ___&____________________________________________________________________________________________
good. do what you think is good for your own story. sometimes simple action is the best action at that moment. when you read the story you dont see him, but when you see him you read the whole story.. monday teusday wednesday oh oh oh..
Is this novel droped or not cause i like it
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