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this is very good the story is short but I can tell that this story will be very good, please make more chapters
i like it so far very interesting. :) ......................................,.................................................booo 👻 (i hate how it makes you put 140 on the review )
as of right now very interesting concept and good chapters altough a bit short but writing is hard anyways only thing i dont like as of right now is the human Form BUT IT IS only teased as of now. give it a try
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this is very good the story is short but I can tell that this story will be very good, please make more chapters
i like it so far very interesting. :) ......................................,.................................................booo 👻 (i hate how it makes you put 140 on the review )
as of right now very interesting concept and good chapters altough a bit short but writing is hard anyways only thing i dont like as of right now is the human Form BUT IT IS only teased as of now. give it a try
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