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what happened the last time I reread this it wasn't missing the first 15 chapters.
Another name for this book is Marvel: My Frog Cub Brings Back the Dragon Fruit . U guys can find it on wuxia.com. .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
garbage this story is garbage author has interfere in the main story too much and it became garbage
Chinese novel. You read one, you have read all of them. Characters always behave weirdly.
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Really! It has a great story development. From the amount of fanfictions, where MC is Chinese, I've been through, this one was unbelievable. I really love how MC is very strong but still cautious and not very arrogant. Stays low-key yet can't be trampled on. World view was also very well preserved. It's a blend of multiple storylines of different Marvel characters, yet author did a great job in blending them properly. Story doesn't feel inconsistent. Although the timeline isn't very well defined but where it is, it's a little inconsistent. But that's not something to make fuss over, because it's not mentioned much so far. Overall, it's a great read and worth watching.
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What's MC goal ? He just like NPC or the watcher like just watching around. I mean without him the story was good, so the mc like nothing to do.
very well done one of the best idea's On the mark plot development overall loved it Writing Quality 5 Stability of Updates 5 Story Development 5 Character Design 5 World Background 5 [img=fp]The total score[img=fp] [img=coins]5.0[img=coins]
I love the direction of the story is going. I wish I could read more, but i can't find the RAW link. Could one of you guys comment on my review and give me the link. Much appreciated.
can't continue to read it anymore.. too much nonsense.. too little screen time for little froggy.. too much focus on little character such as peter.. gwen got most of the focus instead of mc.
W book, op mc but needs a bit more of the frog in the first 130 ish chapters and when will they start too you know, that stuff. Great novel and that's all.
pretty decent story. My issue is with the lack of MC focus. I would just watch the movies if that's all I'm getting outta this story... MC could be removed and nearly nothing would change
This is my first review ever, so cut me some slack please. This fanfiction is interesting because of the way the original author setup the MC's cheat and his outlook on life. I don't want to spoil too much of course, being that Im about 600+ chapters into the mtl. I think maybe its just my brain has been so thoroughly broken by so many of these novels, but I do recommend you read this story because it’s really good/fun and the translator is doing a really good job. Now that means the story doesn’t have its own problems. There occasionally some details that make no sense whatsoever but those are in the mtl later down the line anyway and they are minor. Things like a green lantern ring with no mention of a battery to charge it, thors hammer breaking and then…… showing up again later fixed….without explanation….. but nothing that made me say ‘cmon! What?!? What?!! This makes no sense at all and my day is ruined!!’ because there not that crucial to the story. I’m not sure why the translator changed the name of the novel, and I don’t really care but at 600+ chapters Gwen is simply not the only female-lead anymore. So, the title isn’t wrong but *Spoiler* Wanda and Hela and Red Queen(is what I call the MC’s AI, sometimes its queen red but red queen sounds nicer imo) do start appearing more frequently and make their attraction obvious not to just the MC but also to everyone. And Hela seems to undergo some serious character development. Yes, I know I just said character development on a female-lead AND yes, it’s because of love, but I still really do enjoy her transformation from total butcher to some actual introspection. Her past is kind of sad when you think about it objectively. Does she want eternal war? No, but she is happy to wage war on all of existence because it will end with her ruling everything and then there will be no more war forever. This mindset is what Odin raised her on, so she sees it as fine. Though even after changing, her pride does still make her have a zero-tolerance policy for anyone who mocks or slander her or the MC. So, she is definitely not some angel all of a sudden. However, not every problem requires death and the sword to be solved. Sometimes death and sword can solve said problem, but in the wake of using it you’ve just created more problems for yourself. And also, the whole family and friends can help you out instead of being completely alone trope. Think of it like this: she is alone and no has been good enough in her eyes till the MC and now she has someone to lean on and in that process learns the ability to listen to other people opinions without immediately removing their heads for not knowing their place. I’m focusing on the Hela a lot, but she really is basically the 2nd female-lead(and obviously is stronger than Gwen) and is a big part of the story. And that is also really the foundation of the MC’s personality. He is rational, as much as he can be. He doesn’t have super cosmic awareness. He doesn’t know everything about marvel and as he intervenes, he understands that his actions have an effect, so he is losing that future knowledge cheat as time passes. But at the end of the day, he acts like a human. He likes earth and that’s his home. He doesn’t want to live anywhere else, nor is he interested in ruling earth from the shadows or the spotlight or any world for that matter. He wants to live his life in peace and yes it will require him to plan and fight the big villains in marvel. I absolutely love that the MC has the Red Queen(mc’s version of J.A.R.V.I.S) bc it gets rid of a lot of the slice of life parts that are just not that interesting in a fan fiction. And it realistically is the only way that the MC can hide is identity on earth and do some of the things that MC does on earth. And when it hacks into tony suit and forcibly connect the MC calls it’s always funny to see Tony’s reaction. But all in all, it’s really fun to read. Like I said before, somethings require a little disbelief(basically small plot holes) and if you are reading this then also, I must stress this very clearly. The MC intervenes in his new world before the some of the mcu heroes’ movies. This Tony is not even close to mcu Tony(mcu tony sends the nuke through the portal, is haunted by ‘knowledge’, ultimate sacrifice) and same for some of the other heroes and characters. Some are almost the same and some have been influenced by the MC greatly. For example, Tony gets the inspiration of his suit from having seen the MC armor/mecha/suit so he kind of looks up to the MC’s hero persona. Now if that bothers you, that some of the characters will basically worship the MC hero persona bc he keeps coming in clutch, then you won’t like this story. Now I realize that I’m reviewing the story mostly(and that I’m 600ch into it) and not so much the translation, but I don’t really know webnovels ‘Chinese fan-fiction translations’ review etiquette and like I said this is my first review ever. I have zero complaints about the translation. It certainly got me hooked. But I do really enjoy the story and want more people to read it hence creating more popularity, so it gets translated faster.
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One of good MCU fanfic and uniqe. Others maybe dislike passive MC, but I quite like that idea. Keep planning behind the scene and protect his GF and people he cared about.
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will give 4 stars for now, story looks good but please dont forget the froggo and by adding multiple characters from different realities like xmen, f4 to the fic makes it kinda confusing and will create lots of plot holes sample: since xmen already exist why diddn't shield prioritize recruiting them and all that anyway, nice novel so far
simples mente envolvente a cada capitulo melhora to curioso para o proximo ta chegan do as melhores partes para ler continuar a subir mais capitulos
Muy buena historia espero que sigas mejorando en la calidad y la forma en la que se desarrollan tus personajes felicitaciones de mi parte por tan buena historia y aprecio mucho el esfuerzo que nos muestras al traernos este trabajo
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Writing quality [5*] - Well... I can't say it's good in the few early chapters, but as it progressed with each updates, it gets progressively good, to the point where I can visibly see visible improvements as I read further down each chapters. Although I could understand, as this a translated book, so it would really differ a lot after conversion in English from its true meaning, but all in all, I could say that it's still one of the best translated novels out there that wouldn't make your brain tap out in plea. Story Development [5*] - Hmm... As for this one, I could say that the MC is placed a bit on the supportive role and just let the story progress on its own, as it's Marvel with multiple superhero interactions sprouting here and there, aaand he's building himself up so its natural. Of course, there's no way MU would just watch and let our MC accumulate resources. The story started with Iron Man, spoiler alert! Not at all; Everyone knew it all started with him. Nevertheless, at the point where I'm reading, I could say it's within my satisfaction so far. Character Design [4*] - Now this is a bit tricky... As far as I'm on the chapter, I could say that the MC is a smart one, no edgelord vibe, a bit secretive, but it's still in his development phase on his overall personality so for now, so far it's all in the positive side. Update Stability [4*] - Hm... I guess its a meh for me. The translator of this fic, that guy is a bit and quite a little hardworking IMO. So kudos to him in translating this fanfic for me, whoever that guy is. Anyways, updating stability is 1-2 chapters per day, and the chapter bonuses still weren't included, obviously. World Background [5*] - Marved Universe ATM.
historia muito boa mas alguns capitulos são muito curtos mas o resto muito bom 5 estrelas tamben essa histori e sem haren ja li muitas dessa historias e é muito repetitivas essa daqui e´mais equilibrada
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okay i was super surprised by writing quality because usally when i find " translated " novels its horrendous enough to make my head explode in pain, now the problem with this novel . . .. well i only got a few chapters in peter parkers personality really leaves a bad taste try it out your understand or you know wont. oh yeah he summoned his mech jumped off hit building and started flying around and got surprised people noticed it. a shiny golden mech flying in daylight with no care in the world. . ANYWAYS can read chinese fanfics you can most likely read this because it one of the better ones. so far
what happened the last time I reread this it wasn't missing the first 15 chapters.
Another name for this book is Marvel: My Frog Cub Brings Back the Dragon Fruit . U guys can find it on wuxia.com. .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
garbage this story is garbage author has interfere in the main story too much and it became garbage
Chinese novel. You read one, you have read all of them. Characters always behave weirdly.
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Really! It has a great story development. From the amount of fanfictions, where MC is Chinese, I've been through, this one was unbelievable. I really love how MC is very strong but still cautious and not very arrogant. Stays low-key yet can't be trampled on. World view was also very well preserved. It's a blend of multiple storylines of different Marvel characters, yet author did a great job in blending them properly. Story doesn't feel inconsistent. Although the timeline isn't very well defined but where it is, it's a little inconsistent. But that's not something to make fuss over, because it's not mentioned much so far. Overall, it's a great read and worth watching.
Membuka SPOILER What's MC goal ? He just like NPC or the watcher like just watching around. I mean without him the story was good, so the mc like nothing to do.
very well done one of the best idea's On the mark plot development overall loved it Writing Quality 5 Stability of Updates 5 Story Development 5 Character Design 5 World Background 5 [img=fp]The total score[img=fp] [img=coins]5.0[img=coins]
I love the direction of the story is going. I wish I could read more, but i can't find the RAW link. Could one of you guys comment on my review and give me the link. Much appreciated.
can't continue to read it anymore.. too much nonsense.. too little screen time for little froggy.. too much focus on little character such as peter.. gwen got most of the focus instead of mc.
W book, op mc but needs a bit more of the frog in the first 130 ish chapters and when will they start too you know, that stuff. Great novel and that's all.
pretty decent story. My issue is with the lack of MC focus. I would just watch the movies if that's all I'm getting outta this story... MC could be removed and nearly nothing would change
This is my first review ever, so cut me some slack please. This fanfiction is interesting because of the way the original author setup the MC's cheat and his outlook on life. I don't want to spoil too much of course, being that Im about 600+ chapters into the mtl. I think maybe its just my brain has been so thoroughly broken by so many of these novels, but I do recommend you read this story because it’s really good/fun and the translator is doing a really good job. Now that means the story doesn’t have its own problems. There occasionally some details that make no sense whatsoever but those are in the mtl later down the line anyway and they are minor. Things like a green lantern ring with no mention of a battery to charge it, thors hammer breaking and then…… showing up again later fixed….without explanation….. but nothing that made me say ‘cmon! What?!? What?!! This makes no sense at all and my day is ruined!!’ because there not that crucial to the story. I’m not sure why the translator changed the name of the novel, and I don’t really care but at 600+ chapters Gwen is simply not the only female-lead anymore. So, the title isn’t wrong but *Spoiler* Wanda and Hela and Red Queen(is what I call the MC’s AI, sometimes its queen red but red queen sounds nicer imo) do start appearing more frequently and make their attraction obvious not to just the MC but also to everyone. And Hela seems to undergo some serious character development. Yes, I know I just said character development on a female-lead AND yes, it’s because of love, but I still really do enjoy her transformation from total butcher to some actual introspection. Her past is kind of sad when you think about it objectively. Does she want eternal war? No, but she is happy to wage war on all of existence because it will end with her ruling everything and then there will be no more war forever. This mindset is what Odin raised her on, so she sees it as fine. Though even after changing, her pride does still make her have a zero-tolerance policy for anyone who mocks or slander her or the MC. So, she is definitely not some angel all of a sudden. However, not every problem requires death and the sword to be solved. Sometimes death and sword can solve said problem, but in the wake of using it you’ve just created more problems for yourself. And also, the whole family and friends can help you out instead of being completely alone trope. Think of it like this: she is alone and no has been good enough in her eyes till the MC and now she has someone to lean on and in that process learns the ability to listen to other people opinions without immediately removing their heads for not knowing their place. I’m focusing on the Hela a lot, but she really is basically the 2nd female-lead(and obviously is stronger than Gwen) and is a big part of the story. And that is also really the foundation of the MC’s personality. He is rational, as much as he can be. He doesn’t have super cosmic awareness. He doesn’t know everything about marvel and as he intervenes, he understands that his actions have an effect, so he is losing that future knowledge cheat as time passes. But at the end of the day, he acts like a human. He likes earth and that’s his home. He doesn’t want to live anywhere else, nor is he interested in ruling earth from the shadows or the spotlight or any world for that matter. He wants to live his life in peace and yes it will require him to plan and fight the big villains in marvel. I absolutely love that the MC has the Red Queen(mc’s version of J.A.R.V.I.S) bc it gets rid of a lot of the slice of life parts that are just not that interesting in a fan fiction. And it realistically is the only way that the MC can hide is identity on earth and do some of the things that MC does on earth. And when it hacks into tony suit and forcibly connect the MC calls it’s always funny to see Tony’s reaction. But all in all, it’s really fun to read. Like I said before, somethings require a little disbelief(basically small plot holes) and if you are reading this then also, I must stress this very clearly. The MC intervenes in his new world before the some of the mcu heroes’ movies. This Tony is not even close to mcu Tony(mcu tony sends the nuke through the portal, is haunted by ‘knowledge’, ultimate sacrifice) and same for some of the other heroes and characters. Some are almost the same and some have been influenced by the MC greatly. For example, Tony gets the inspiration of his suit from having seen the MC armor/mecha/suit so he kind of looks up to the MC’s hero persona. Now if that bothers you, that some of the characters will basically worship the MC hero persona bc he keeps coming in clutch, then you won’t like this story. Now I realize that I’m reviewing the story mostly(and that I’m 600ch into it) and not so much the translation, but I don’t really know webnovels ‘Chinese fan-fiction translations’ review etiquette and like I said this is my first review ever. I have zero complaints about the translation. It certainly got me hooked. But I do really enjoy the story and want more people to read it hence creating more popularity, so it gets translated faster.
Membuka SPOILER One of good MCU fanfic and uniqe. Others maybe dislike passive MC, but I quite like that idea. Keep planning behind the scene and protect his GF and people he cared about.
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will give 4 stars for now, story looks good but please dont forget the froggo and by adding multiple characters from different realities like xmen, f4 to the fic makes it kinda confusing and will create lots of plot holes sample: since xmen already exist why diddn't shield prioritize recruiting them and all that anyway, nice novel so far
simples mente envolvente a cada capitulo melhora to curioso para o proximo ta chegan do as melhores partes para ler continuar a subir mais capitulos
Muy buena historia espero que sigas mejorando en la calidad y la forma en la que se desarrollan tus personajes felicitaciones de mi parte por tan buena historia y aprecio mucho el esfuerzo que nos muestras al traernos este trabajo
Membuka SPOILER Writing quality [5*] - Well... I can't say it's good in the few early chapters, but as it progressed with each updates, it gets progressively good, to the point where I can visibly see visible improvements as I read further down each chapters. Although I could understand, as this a translated book, so it would really differ a lot after conversion in English from its true meaning, but all in all, I could say that it's still one of the best translated novels out there that wouldn't make your brain tap out in plea. Story Development [5*] - Hmm... As for this one, I could say that the MC is placed a bit on the supportive role and just let the story progress on its own, as it's Marvel with multiple superhero interactions sprouting here and there, aaand he's building himself up so its natural. Of course, there's no way MU would just watch and let our MC accumulate resources. The story started with Iron Man, spoiler alert! Not at all; Everyone knew it all started with him. Nevertheless, at the point where I'm reading, I could say it's within my satisfaction so far. Character Design [4*] - Now this is a bit tricky... As far as I'm on the chapter, I could say that the MC is a smart one, no edgelord vibe, a bit secretive, but it's still in his development phase on his overall personality so for now, so far it's all in the positive side. Update Stability [4*] - Hm... I guess its a meh for me. The translator of this fic, that guy is a bit and quite a little hardworking IMO. So kudos to him in translating this fanfic for me, whoever that guy is. Anyways, updating stability is 1-2 chapters per day, and the chapter bonuses still weren't included, obviously. World Background [5*] - Marved Universe ATM.
historia muito boa mas alguns capitulos são muito curtos mas o resto muito bom 5 estrelas tamben essa histori e sem haren ja li muitas dessa historias e é muito repetitivas essa daqui e´mais equilibrada
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okay i was super surprised by writing quality because usally when i find " translated " novels its horrendous enough to make my head explode in pain, now the problem with this novel . . .. well i only got a few chapters in peter parkers personality really leaves a bad taste try it out your understand or you know wont. oh yeah he summoned his mech jumped off hit building and started flying around and got surprised people noticed it. a shiny golden mech flying in daylight with no care in the world. . ANYWAYS can read chinese fanfics you can most likely read this because it one of the better ones. so far
sadly all the chapter are gone now was fun while it lasted