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You not only wrote a harem story but you took a protag from another story to just add to a rimural harem, as if yuna let alone anyone would be part of a herem? its absurd and a massive plot hole as their's nothing real about girls just wanting be part of a harem and thus makes their characters lack believability as no one wants to share a lover. Such harem are demeening and degrading to woman implying they have lesser value so its simply a bad thing.
good story over all I can't believe that some finds a way for this two worlds to crossover
I really like both of the worlds you used and there really aren't alot of kuma kuma kuma bear fanfics so please keep updating it.
why? just why?---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Author is a genius. But please don't overwork yourself [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
You not only wrote a harem story but you took a protag from another story to just add to a rimural harem, as if yuna let alone anyone would be part of a herem? its absurd and a massive plot hole as their's nothing real about girls just wanting be part of a harem and thus makes their characters lack believability as no one wants to share a lover. Such harem are demeening and degrading to woman implying they have lesser value so its simply a bad thing.
good story over all I can't believe that some finds a way for this two worlds to crossover
I really like both of the worlds you used and there really aren't alot of kuma kuma kuma bear fanfics so please keep updating it.
why? just why?---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Author is a genius. But please don't overwork yourself [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I just want to give 5 star to my fav book