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The translation quality is quite good, there was only really one mistake in the first few chapters. But the rest... the story has so many plotholes. MC gets a repair ability from a simulation, in this simulation he acquired it by being upgraded, but only to mid-tier, and when the baron 'finds out' about that ability it's suddenly an ability only known from legends and he has to actually look up what kind of rarity that ability would make the sword, but the guy who buys the sword, some guy even lower in the hierarchy of that world somehow instantly knows about it as that is 'from legends'. Another example: MC simulates his life and still had like 5years(or some such,not sure how long exactly, but definitely more than a year) to live, but a minute after the simulation the guy who uses MC is attacked and MC needs to use an ability he only acquired in the simulation to save the guy wielding him, like what? why could he survive in the simulation but not in RL even though nothing effectively changed? Not gonna bother writing down more. If you don't mind plotholes and a somewhat bland plot you can read it, but if you want to read something actually good, then this is nothing for you.
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actually good simulation novel where the mc can simulatie his life. this novel is above avarage compared to other simulation related novels but still not pergect 4,5/5 . not giving a 5 becuse there is too much faceslapping which is super annoying
base on the title i though it gonna become some copy paste of jp isekai novel. im glad i tried to read first before judge this by it title. this is interesting, still have some arrogant noble to face slap like other cn wn. but the execution feels more smooth and better, so yeah interesting
honestly, this feels so overdone but I suppose most recent releases have been the same.
I'm worried for the author's health. I think he needs to go and get checked for Alzeheimers. Fairly decent concept ruined by the execution and the author. The writing style is very dry and exposition-heavy, focusing on telling without showing. The author also has literal short term memory loss. For example, in one of the first 4 chapters, the author has the MC advance to being an intermediate grade tool. In the 5th chapter, he has the MC advance to being an intermediate grade tool (Yes, you did read that right and no, I did not mistype that. I am simply repeating what the author said). There are also already tons of plot holes and inconsistencies within the mere first 5 chapters, so I will be dropping this novel.
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This is one of the few books I like. It's part of the life simulation group if you know that genre but it's pretty good compared to others.
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Edgy revenge fantasy. Otherwise, it's okay, for a simulation novel. Speaking of simulation novels, is it just me or have they been getting better lately?
Another of these copy pasta, as I call them, "written simulations" novels. This genre is really bad, not only do we have these bad authors writing these, but the written simulation thingy is much more boring and disappointing than sign in and other things.
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Sad. An interesting ability, an interesting MC, but everything else feels bland. You won't feel implicated in the story. Author has wasted a good setting with this book.
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sounds interesting hope this gets picked ,...,.....,.108,000108,000108,000108,000108,000108,000108,000.....................,...,..,....,... , ...
Raw????????? ?? ?????? ????????????? ???? ??? ???????????? ??? ?? ????????????????? ????????????????????????????????????? ??? ??????????????
it's sound like LN "reincarnation as sword" or something like that..................... ......... .. ..... . . .... . .. . . ... ... ... ....
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Raw??[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
am waiting impatiently, I would love to read and recommend this book to other users. I hope the book is as catchy as the cover I saw! [img=fp]
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I like it it very good the mc has great decision for his owner the story in the simulation system is great the power lv is perfect cant wait for the next chapter
Membuka SPOILER The translation quality is quite good, there was only really one mistake in the first few chapters. But the rest... the story has so many plotholes. MC gets a repair ability from a simulation, in this simulation he acquired it by being upgraded, but only to mid-tier, and when the baron 'finds out' about that ability it's suddenly an ability only known from legends and he has to actually look up what kind of rarity that ability would make the sword, but the guy who buys the sword, some guy even lower in the hierarchy of that world somehow instantly knows about it as that is 'from legends'. Another example: MC simulates his life and still had like 5years(or some such,not sure how long exactly, but definitely more than a year) to live, but a minute after the simulation the guy who uses MC is attacked and MC needs to use an ability he only acquired in the simulation to save the guy wielding him, like what? why could he survive in the simulation but not in RL even though nothing effectively changed? Not gonna bother writing down more. If you don't mind plotholes and a somewhat bland plot you can read it, but if you want to read something actually good, then this is nothing for you.
Membuka SPOILER actually good simulation novel where the mc can simulatie his life. this novel is above avarage compared to other simulation related novels but still not pergect 4,5/5 . not giving a 5 becuse there is too much faceslapping which is super annoying
base on the title i though it gonna become some copy paste of jp isekai novel. im glad i tried to read first before judge this by it title. this is interesting, still have some arrogant noble to face slap like other cn wn. but the execution feels more smooth and better, so yeah interesting
honestly, this feels so overdone but I suppose most recent releases have been the same.
I'm worried for the author's health. I think he needs to go and get checked for Alzeheimers. Fairly decent concept ruined by the execution and the author. The writing style is very dry and exposition-heavy, focusing on telling without showing. The author also has literal short term memory loss. For example, in one of the first 4 chapters, the author has the MC advance to being an intermediate grade tool. In the 5th chapter, he has the MC advance to being an intermediate grade tool (Yes, you did read that right and no, I did not mistype that. I am simply repeating what the author said). There are also already tons of plot holes and inconsistencies within the mere first 5 chapters, so I will be dropping this novel.
let me know if one of our soldiers finds raw 🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥸🥸🥸🥸🥸🥸🥸🥸🥸🥸🥸 🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥱🥸🥸🥸🥸🥸🥸🥸🥸🥸🥸🥸as
This is one of the few books I like. It's part of the life simulation group if you know that genre but it's pretty good compared to others.
Fitcviu l yl f llucfufpcpupcucufppfucucfpu hfp fupu gucpcufpcufpucfcyo oudoycfofcuvffu oud y dooydy dyo do yd yodyyodufvpuf pdu ho coufof upu f yod
Membuka SPOILER Edgy revenge fantasy. Otherwise, it's okay, for a simulation novel. Speaking of simulation novels, is it just me or have they been getting better lately?
Another of these copy pasta, as I call them, "written simulations" novels. This genre is really bad, not only do we have these bad authors writing these, but the written simulation thingy is much more boring and disappointing than sign in and other things.
chaptersssssssssssss chaptersssssssssssss chaptersssssssssssss chaptersssssssssssss chaptersssssssssssss chaptersssssssssssss chaptersssssssssssss chaptersssssssssssss
Sad. An interesting ability, an interesting MC, but everything else feels bland. You won't feel implicated in the story. Author has wasted a good setting with this book.
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sounds interesting hope this gets picked ,...,.....,.108,000108,000108,000108,000108,000108,000108,000.....................,...,..,....,... , ...
Raw????????? ?? ?????? ????????????? ???? ??? ???????????? ??? ?? ????????????????? ????????????????????????????????????? ??? ??????????????
it's sound like LN "reincarnation as sword" or something like that..................... ......... .. ..... . . .... . .. . . ... ... ... ....
raw.............................................????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Raw??[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
am waiting impatiently, I would love to read and recommend this book to other users. I hope the book is as catchy as the cover I saw! [img=fp]
Membuka SPOILER 
I like it it very good the mc has great decision for his owner the story in the simulation system is great the power lv is perfect cant wait for the next chapter
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