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i like since its obito but the story is so hard to follow, i just cant wrap my head around it. very hard to understand whats going on but that's about it
Autor lied. He say that his story will not become harem. But its clearly a harem. Its just standard dark oc, nothing orginal about that, but still. I like the concept. 2/5
Writing Quality ----------------- ☒✪✪✪✪ Stability of Updates ------------ ☒✪✪✪✪ Story Development ------------ ☒☒✪✪✪ = -2star for changing the setting to no harem to harem(3). will change to 5 star if the author will be able to give a proper development to the harem. Character Design -------------- ✪✪✪✪✪ World Background ------------- ✪✪✪✪✪
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It was good at first but-........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The author have written in his synopsis that this story wasn't a harem, we're at chapter 9 and now the mc will have 3 girls...And like always on webnovel the mc is a dark/emo/uncarring mc who only think to experiment and/or crush peoples ...How original of him... I really don't know why I keep expecting better from the authors here. Don't think the story is worth it but it's your choice.
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i really like this one, aside from a few spelling mistakes it's ok since my brain autocorrects it. also im looking for a good one piece fanfics
I only read the first chapter, and I like the concept of it (Plus look at the novel cover, that's so cute). Has potential. Writing is understandable, updating stability is what I'm not sure of but from what I can see is that author updates daily while editing their old chapters. Not sure for the MC's character design but I love the use of sharingan's gengutsu.
I have no shame and I give myself 5 stars for everything. I just love Obito from Naruto and i love One piece, so I decided why not? And this is how this novel was created, No Harem, No system.
The Anti-harem sect mourns this fallen book. We shall forever remember the happy times, before the plague of Harem-itis tempted and seduced this once great story.
i like since its obito but the story is so hard to follow, i just cant wrap my head around it. very hard to understand whats going on but that's about it
Autor lied. He say that his story will not become harem. But its clearly a harem. Its just standard dark oc, nothing orginal about that, but still. I like the concept. 2/5
Writing Quality ----------------- ☒✪✪✪✪ Stability of Updates ------------ ☒✪✪✪✪ Story Development ------------ ☒☒✪✪✪ = -2star for changing the setting to no harem to harem(3). will change to 5 star if the author will be able to give a proper development to the harem. Character Design -------------- ✪✪✪✪✪ World Background ------------- ✪✪✪✪✪
Membuka SPOILER It was good at first but-........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
The author have written in his synopsis that this story wasn't a harem, we're at chapter 9 and now the mc will have 3 girls...And like always on webnovel the mc is a dark/emo/uncarring mc who only think to experiment and/or crush peoples ...How original of him... I really don't know why I keep expecting better from the authors here. Don't think the story is worth it but it's your choice.
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obito obito obito obito obito obito obito obito obito obito obito obito obito obito obito obito obito obito obito obito obito obito obito obito obito obito obito obito
i really like this one, aside from a few spelling mistakes it's ok since my brain autocorrects it. also im looking for a good one piece fanfics
I only read the first chapter, and I like the concept of it (Plus look at the novel cover, that's so cute). Has potential. Writing is understandable, updating stability is what I'm not sure of but from what I can see is that author updates daily while editing their old chapters. Not sure for the MC's character design but I love the use of sharingan's gengutsu.
I have no shame and I give myself 5 stars for everything. I just love Obito from Naruto and i love One piece, so I decided why not? And this is how this novel was created, No Harem, No system.
The Anti-harem sect mourns this fallen book. We shall forever remember the happy times, before the plague of Harem-itis tempted and seduced this once great story.