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The background is captivating and the characters are interesting. Though the POV was a little confusing at the beginning, it's still very understandable. Anticipating more of the story.
I was kinda concerned as I read the title but as i read more of it, I started to like it. Its a fun story that I think you could do a lot with. Im assuming Eunice is Liam’ s ex? I kinda got confused towards the end
"Your story is a Lie gone too far...I hope to see some drama and if posible comedy...it has a lot of potential about drama. Some places need finishing touches but that can be done after the first draft is prepared"
Your writing is top-notch! I'll be waiting for the update to see how this story will end up. Keep going on!
I really enjoyed this! The characters are very believable, and what a funny premise! I always love a good old fashioned lavender marriage, I'm excited to see what happens next!
wooow this story of Liam and Mikayla is really fun I love it I can't wait for the next chapter it's my first time reading a Novel like this like woow author you are really exceptional
can't wait to read it looks really interesting 💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓😍😍😍
This is a really captivating story. The characters feel so real. I feel so.. attached.. I should say, to the main character already HAHA. Hope to see more and see how the story progresses. Good writing, great story and such good cliffhangers XD You're amazing author. Keep it up 😘
The background is captivating and the characters are interesting. Though the POV was a little confusing at the beginning, it's still very understandable. Anticipating more of the story.
I was kinda concerned as I read the title but as i read more of it, I started to like it. Its a fun story that I think you could do a lot with. Im assuming Eunice is Liam’ s ex? I kinda got confused towards the end
"Your story is a Lie gone too far...I hope to see some drama and if posible comedy...it has a lot of potential about drama. Some places need finishing touches but that can be done after the first draft is prepared"
Your writing is top-notch! I'll be waiting for the update to see how this story will end up. Keep going on!
I really enjoyed this! The characters are very believable, and what a funny premise! I always love a good old fashioned lavender marriage, I'm excited to see what happens next!
wooow this story of Liam and Mikayla is really fun I love it I can't wait for the next chapter it's my first time reading a Novel like this like woow author you are really exceptional
can't wait to read it looks really interesting 💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓💓😍😍😍
This is a really captivating story. The characters feel so real. I feel so.. attached.. I should say, to the main character already HAHA. Hope to see more and see how the story progresses. Good writing, great story and such good cliffhangers XD You're amazing author. Keep it up 😘