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This novel is a delightful fusion of mystery and compelling storytelling, with an intriguing protagonist and outstanding writing quality. The only flaw is the inconsistent update schedule, but it doesn't overshadow the sheer enjoyment derived from each chapter. Enthralling read!
Uhh hey author, do you have a discord server or a place where we can discuss your novels and stuff?? and another thing but can anyone tell me the cultivation stages from first?? I kind of forgot which chapter it was in...
This is genuinely a lot of fun to read, it encompasses all the great aspects of the cultivation genre. I’m not usually a fan of a character becoming so op so quickly but this time I actually didn’t mind it and it actually was exciting seeing the new awesome power he’d unlock next. In that way it kinda reminds me of Yang Kai from martial peak. Hope the author keeps writing this, highly recommend!
Hey, Author can you please update the new chapters out of privlages there are total 50 chapter in the privlages. 🥺🥺🫡
Very disappointing First volume is okay but second volume was bad with nonsense competition after competition especially after chapter 140 it is outright trash as It seems to have to written by ai chat bot.
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The story in general is quite good, with decent pacing and character development. However it sometimes feels repetitive with almost the exact same sequence of events almost being copied and pasted between story arcs. The MC is generally written well but sometimes there can be points where he seems stupid. In general the side characters seem to be given some development also, which is good to see rather than them just appearing for two chapters and the gone from all existence in the story.The only major criticism I have is the upload continuity of the author as initially the story was uploaded 2 chapters daily, then it dropped to 2 every other day then had a large absence, tho I believe this was due to the author's health. Now we have been without a release for a prolonged time again so I would encourage patients if you want to read this story.
Hey , bro why are you not uploading chapters. You are writing good story continue many.I am waiting for new chapters,please post some
Would have neen five stars if he didn’t make it feel like it was strong from start mc with all that soul power and all. I personally prefer a strong from start mc than weak to strong
Hello author, nice novel, but I don't like the part where some characters can jump over realms like our MC, I understand genius or something, but in some cases people object to several cultivation realms above them (not about the MC) and the general thing generally speaking, they are described as five-star geniuses. This is in my opinion to be improved.
Author I am loving the story and Hope to read it more in the future[img=recommend][img=update]. Though I want to ask is there a Discord server. For Character illustration(if there is any) And, Is there a chapter where it mentions cultivation Realms and the like. As I am at the end of Vol 1, I want to if there is anything like that for future reference while reading, as there is a chance that I might forget some So it would be helpful if there was a separate chapter describing Cultivation Realms.
author the story is very good world background and character design are good too.but your is writing is too complex
I love this book very much am still waiting for domination of the eternal dragon
I am on ch 135 so I feel that I am qualified to say some things. This novel is decent, but the English could use some help. Don't get me wrong it is still leagues above MLT, but there are some times where you have to reread a paragraph to understand what the author is trying to tell. There are some info dumps but not too many.
Author I'd like to say I love your book and though this is a review section,.... do you not think we deserve a binge reading for all the chapter we missed
It has potential not original but has potential to be a banger !! Jdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjddjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjjddhjdjdjdjdjdhdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdj
please update, we need more chapters these can't satisfy our hunger, they just stuck in our teeth hence we were not even able to enjoy them please update them
I really enjoy this novel plot, it very different from other reincarnation and cultivation plot of other popular novels. Keep a good work and update frequently.❤️👍
woohoo!! he has finally return. now I can't wait to see and read about the future chapter of this novel
Well so far i really like this novel. But i'm quite confused because the author said that the update will resume of 3de February. But their are no new chapter so far
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author sama are you really going to continue this book because 8 enjoyed it alot Please continue
Well the reasons this story isnt a 4 or higher is because 1. MC is cringe when he says stupid stuff like this I am the most handsome I am the protagonist I am the MC I am OP When mc says to multiple girls in his mind " I will make you mine etc or hinting at you will come to love me in the future" but in 200+ chapters he has done nothing when so many girls are interested 2. MC makes a group of people and force under him for fun but he has no goal or ambitions. He doesnt even take it seriously. I mean it gets tiring after 180+ chapters of his lack of properly cultivating his force If you are going to build a force do some proper work 3. Story shows barely any progress he goes to one sect gets some people under him, then goes to another sect gets some people under him...its too repetitive of the same scenarios over and over 4. MC just doesnt utilize his resources properly of how he couldve been making a proper force and no he doesnt realize this until like chapter 200+ that something is effed up with his mentality. He doesnt have his past life memories but he does know he was a really strong being in the past, and has some limited knowledge of it while most his memories are sealed. But even while knowing that his own lack of ambition is stupid. He has been portrayed as a genius, smart etc but then he does stupid things. He says he cares about his adopted family but then did he give them better techniques? since theirs are low level ? did he help the possible girls with potential (who could be part of harem), no he hasnt done any of that or provided them higher level techniques. Also typically if you form foundations with low level techniques your foundation, or power isnt as strong so makes no sense why he hasnt dont that for so many people under him etc It is just too dragged out 5. I was hoping for some romance or harem etc but all he does is think all the time that " oh that girl will come to like me" or she hasnt fallen for me now but in the future Yeah its so stupid to hear that for over 200+ chapters with no progress
This novel is a delightful fusion of mystery and compelling storytelling, with an intriguing protagonist and outstanding writing quality. The only flaw is the inconsistent update schedule, but it doesn't overshadow the sheer enjoyment derived from each chapter. Enthralling read!
Uhh hey author, do you have a discord server or a place where we can discuss your novels and stuff?? and another thing but can anyone tell me the cultivation stages from first?? I kind of forgot which chapter it was in...
This is genuinely a lot of fun to read, it encompasses all the great aspects of the cultivation genre. I’m not usually a fan of a character becoming so op so quickly but this time I actually didn’t mind it and it actually was exciting seeing the new awesome power he’d unlock next. In that way it kinda reminds me of Yang Kai from martial peak. Hope the author keeps writing this, highly recommend!
Hey, Author can you please update the new chapters out of privlages there are total 50 chapter in the privlages. 🥺🥺🫡
Very disappointing First volume is okay but second volume was bad with nonsense competition after competition especially after chapter 140 it is outright trash as It seems to have to written by ai chat bot.
here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse here can advertise your novel, please tell me Multiprof | Apocalypse
The story in general is quite good, with decent pacing and character development. However it sometimes feels repetitive with almost the exact same sequence of events almost being copied and pasted between story arcs. The MC is generally written well but sometimes there can be points where he seems stupid. In general the side characters seem to be given some development also, which is good to see rather than them just appearing for two chapters and the gone from all existence in the story.The only major criticism I have is the upload continuity of the author as initially the story was uploaded 2 chapters daily, then it dropped to 2 every other day then had a large absence, tho I believe this was due to the author's health. Now we have been without a release for a prolonged time again so I would encourage patients if you want to read this story.
Hey , bro why are you not uploading chapters. You are writing good story continue many.I am waiting for new chapters,please post some
Would have neen five stars if he didn’t make it feel like it was strong from start mc with all that soul power and all. I personally prefer a strong from start mc than weak to strong
Hello author, nice novel, but I don't like the part where some characters can jump over realms like our MC, I understand genius or something, but in some cases people object to several cultivation realms above them (not about the MC) and the general thing generally speaking, they are described as five-star geniuses. This is in my opinion to be improved.
Author I am loving the story and Hope to read it more in the future[img=recommend][img=update]. Though I want to ask is there a Discord server. For Character illustration(if there is any) And, Is there a chapter where it mentions cultivation Realms and the like. As I am at the end of Vol 1, I want to if there is anything like that for future reference while reading, as there is a chance that I might forget some So it would be helpful if there was a separate chapter describing Cultivation Realms.
author the story is very good world background and character design are good too.but your is writing is too complex
I love this book very much am still waiting for domination of the eternal dragon
I am on ch 135 so I feel that I am qualified to say some things. This novel is decent, but the English could use some help. Don't get me wrong it is still leagues above MLT, but there are some times where you have to reread a paragraph to understand what the author is trying to tell. There are some info dumps but not too many.
Author I'd like to say I love your book and though this is a review section,.... do you not think we deserve a binge reading for all the chapter we missed
It has potential not original but has potential to be a banger !! Jdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjddjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjjddhjdjdjdjdjdhdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdjdj
please update, we need more chapters these can't satisfy our hunger, they just stuck in our teeth hence we were not even able to enjoy them please update them
I really enjoy this novel plot, it very different from other reincarnation and cultivation plot of other popular novels. Keep a good work and update frequently.❤️👍
woohoo!! he has finally return. now I can't wait to see and read about the future chapter of this novel
Well so far i really like this novel. But i'm quite confused because the author said that the update will resume of 3de February. But their are no new chapter so far
Membuka SPOILER author sama are you really going to continue this book because 8 enjoyed it alot Please continue
Well the reasons this story isnt a 4 or higher is because 1. MC is cringe when he says stupid stuff like this I am the most handsome I am the protagonist I am the MC I am OP When mc says to multiple girls in his mind " I will make you mine etc or hinting at you will come to love me in the future" but in 200+ chapters he has done nothing when so many girls are interested 2. MC makes a group of people and force under him for fun but he has no goal or ambitions. He doesnt even take it seriously. I mean it gets tiring after 180+ chapters of his lack of properly cultivating his force If you are going to build a force do some proper work 3. Story shows barely any progress he goes to one sect gets some people under him, then goes to another sect gets some people under him...its too repetitive of the same scenarios over and over 4. MC just doesnt utilize his resources properly of how he couldve been making a proper force and no he doesnt realize this until like chapter 200+ that something is effed up with his mentality. He doesnt have his past life memories but he does know he was a really strong being in the past, and has some limited knowledge of it while most his memories are sealed. But even while knowing that his own lack of ambition is stupid. He has been portrayed as a genius, smart etc but then he does stupid things. He says he cares about his adopted family but then did he give them better techniques? since theirs are low level ? did he help the possible girls with potential (who could be part of harem), no he hasnt done any of that or provided them higher level techniques. Also typically if you form foundations with low level techniques your foundation, or power isnt as strong so makes no sense why he hasnt dont that for so many people under him etc It is just too dragged out 5. I was hoping for some romance or harem etc but all he does is think all the time that " oh that girl will come to like me" or she hasnt fallen for me now but in the future Yeah its so stupid to hear that for over 200+ chapters with no progress