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Author here. Please make sure to add this book to library. enjoy your reading time
Wow, this Sci-fi piece makes Me wonder what more our imaginations can offer. it feels Unlimited, its a mastery of writing.
Hi guys, I'm sorry if you noticed any error or confusion in MC's gender or age. the reason is because the book was formerly a female lead, and the initial age of MC was 10, but there's no need to be bothered, I'm currently working on making the corrections. please if you notice any further error or confusing content, do leave me a comment on the paragraph or at the end of the chapter.Thank you :-)
Hi, a little feedback while I’m dropping the novel after chapter 15. There are repetitive breaks of tense, and confusions in the pronouns of the MC. Those are not prohibitive but the novel might benefit from correcting these.I was coming with expectations about the genre of the novel. First chapter feels optionnal, second chapter would have made a better start right into action. Then we are immersed in the usual school life but still no sign of systems. World is built around the disappearance of demons, with angels. Suddenly they’re taught about space warriors and aliens. I believe you’ll introduce the system soon after but it’s too late for me and the mix of genres is a little bit too much for my obtuse mind. I believe mentioning just fragments of these elements in chapter 2 and 3 would have smoothen things up. Hope that feedback will help you in future works. Good luck and perseverance!
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hay, isn't this another interesting novel from the same inspiring author. Right from the start I knew this would be a good story. I recommend this novel for ever great reader, and I assure you that you won't regret it
The plot is intriguing and I am kind of interested in where it will lead. There are a few errors that need to be fixed however it's great. You have the potential and do continue to write more. 👌👌👌✌✌✌
Thank you all for your remarks and comments.pls keep following up,add to library,a leave a review. I promise to be consistent in my updating. You can also leave chapter comments and paragraph comments. Stay tuned for more updates and more entertainment guys.
nice novel but I don't like how you make me wait for updates too long😅 I'm getting way too addicted. hope the author continues to give us more, can't wait.
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The plot is interesting and it will get you hooked and there is a lot of potential and it got me hooked I will continue waiting for upcoming chapters but there errors which really confuse me.
So far this story is great! I wish there was more! Hopefully the author will update more 😊 anyway there were a few grammatical mistakes you should check out btw.
i read survival of the survivors and reading this one....i kinda like this one better...though i like this one better the survival of the survivors is good and got more potential
I absolutely love the imagery, you are able to paint an incredible picture of your characters and their surroundings! Your writing style and tone is so engaging. This is excellent work so far and I can't wait to see what's to come next!
This is my second book. please, readers should try leaving a review,a a support with their power stones for efficient update. please support this work and comment if there's any suggestions or correction of errors detected. thanks
Author here. Please make sure to add this book to library. enjoy your reading time
Wow, this Sci-fi piece makes Me wonder what more our imaginations can offer. it feels Unlimited, its a mastery of writing.
Hi guys, I'm sorry if you noticed any error or confusion in MC's gender or age. the reason is because the book was formerly a female lead, and the initial age of MC was 10, but there's no need to be bothered, I'm currently working on making the corrections. please if you notice any further error or confusing content, do leave me a comment on the paragraph or at the end of the chapter.Thank you :-)
Hi, a little feedback while I’m dropping the novel after chapter 15. There are repetitive breaks of tense, and confusions in the pronouns of the MC. Those are not prohibitive but the novel might benefit from correcting these.I was coming with expectations about the genre of the novel. First chapter feels optionnal, second chapter would have made a better start right into action. Then we are immersed in the usual school life but still no sign of systems. World is built around the disappearance of demons, with angels. Suddenly they’re taught about space warriors and aliens. I believe you’ll introduce the system soon after but it’s too late for me and the mix of genres is a little bit too much for my obtuse mind. I believe mentioning just fragments of these elements in chapter 2 and 3 would have smoothen things up. Hope that feedback will help you in future works. Good luck and perseverance!
Membuka SPOILER hay, isn't this another interesting novel from the same inspiring author. Right from the start I knew this would be a good story. I recommend this novel for ever great reader, and I assure you that you won't regret it
The plot is intriguing and I am kind of interested in where it will lead. There are a few errors that need to be fixed however it's great. You have the potential and do continue to write more. 👌👌👌✌✌✌
Thank you all for your remarks and comments.pls keep following up,add to library,a leave a review. I promise to be consistent in my updating. You can also leave chapter comments and paragraph comments. Stay tuned for more updates and more entertainment guys.
nice novel but I don't like how you make me wait for updates too long😅 I'm getting way too addicted. hope the author continues to give us more, can't wait.
Have some idea about my story? Comment it and let me know. I tagged this book, come and support me with a thumbs up! Like it ? Add to library! Creation is hard, cheer me up! VOTE for me!
The plot is interesting and it will get you hooked and there is a lot of potential and it got me hooked I will continue waiting for upcoming chapters but there errors which really confuse me.
So far this story is great! I wish there was more! Hopefully the author will update more 😊 anyway there were a few grammatical mistakes you should check out btw.
i read survival of the survivors and reading this one....i kinda like this one better...though i like this one better the survival of the survivors is good and got more potential
I absolutely love the imagery, you are able to paint an incredible picture of your characters and their surroundings! Your writing style and tone is so engaging. This is excellent work so far and I can't wait to see what's to come next!
This is my second book. please, readers should try leaving a review,a a support with their power stones for efficient update. please support this work and comment if there's any suggestions or correction of errors detected. thanks
Great book. I recommend it to everyone. Trust me, you won't regret