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this book is amazing I am addicted to it but I have to pay to read the remaining chapters I am a little disappointed at the paying thing but the overall story is amazing
I've just started reading it and already love it. It's so absorbing. Thank u author for this discovering and please don't give up, keep it up till the end ❤
this book is amazing. you can't stop reading once you start. although a suggestion to the author - pls increase your speed in writing and publishing. it's been more than a year yet only 440 chapters are published. you are stretching out too long.
I’m 64 chapters in. I believe this story has the *capability* to be something on par with the high quality novels found here with the characters & background, but some of the repetitive words/chapters, paragraph similarities, childlike monologue, “muse” being incorrectly & constantly(!) used, and word-play diminishes that quality. The world & character backgrounds, vivid descriptions, story development are all there which can make a great storyline. Too much of a negative of something can truly wipe out a good story. That’s part of the case here when I’m reading over words (like the constant “muse” when it should be “said”, “thought”, etc. or changing sentences for it to make sense while I’m reading. I think the Grammarly app or even an editor could prove highly beneficial for this author to go the next step in their story-writing because there’s definitely a solid base of talent. I enjoyed a different take of wolves & Luna. A little confused on how Alpha can hear heartbeats but not necessarily his wolf brother, so some inconsistencies but nothing that ruins the storyline. It’s definitely getting interesting now that “mother” is involved. If this is from an amateur author, there’s def talent & with anything, there’s always room to grow. Overall, I’m mostly enjoying the story so far. I also love Blue & hope to hear more about his backstory.
this book is so good. I've only gotten to the 34th chapter and I already dont want to sleep untill I find out what happens
Very mid, basic rad hair quirky girl. But that's not the problem. The story is filled with very basic tropes and bad writing. The grammar mistakes and weird wording make it an absolute chore to get into. A lot of the things sound overly cringy.
Aww This book is really good. I am so into fantacy land and werewolves! I am even writing a book my own with vampires and werewolves being main characters called, Grim Sunshine. you guys should look it up.
This gem was found just 48 hours ago as Webnovel had it for free, for a limited time 🥰. I was immediately drawn in by the characters and plot. I highly recommend this read, despite the few spelling errors and repeated chapters. The author does warn readers in the title, so be sure to check before doing a batch unlock as new readers. Happy reading 😉!!
I love this book. it's one of the best books I've ever read . Bravo 👏 Aloera because this is just amazing. I mean I was intrigued and interested in the story from the very beginning. Looking forward to reading more of your books ❤
Nothing will stop me from reviewing this book. Its soo amazing, and i recommend this book to everyone looking for the best werewolf novel about curses and all thanks for this amazing book i love you
This book just keep getting more and more exciting 👏🏾 💋💖.....and thrilling cus I love the thrills 🤭..hehe....and I'll feel bad if I dont give a review......keep up the good 🙂🤩
All in all really good book just make sure you keep an eye out for repeat chapters I’ve unfortunately both 3 already -_- it would be nice if the author could remove them or make them free so people can’t make that mistake but I really love the story and can’t putt it down (probably why I didn’t notice the repeats xD)
i absolutely love this story. The way it is written makes me feel the sorrows, happiness, love, and much much more. it is certainly a well written book. love it, can't get enough. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
not many books I have bought with coins. but this book? I gladly bought it! It is THAT good!
I was hooked right from the beginning, reading the book I felt the character come to life, I am really enjoying the story and I can't wait to see how everything unfolds. I give this story five stars because it deserves it. good job author and please don't give up, I know you feel discouraged at times but please keep moving,
i have already read a lot of books and this is the first time I'm osting a review, i just loved the story, is sooo sweet. i love the characters and their relationship. I've been depressed for a long time and this book just made my day, thank you so much ❤️❤️❤️❤️
. I haven't read many chapters yet but so far, the plot and development of the story had been so great. Keep it up Author! .
This book is promising, i like the new take on an old trope, keep up the great work.♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
Werewolves are always a hot and tough topic. I hope the author can bring up something interesting. The plot already has a freshness to it. All the best.
The concept of the story is nice and Interesting, so I'll have to add this to my reading list. I just hope you continue writing, I'm quite thrilled and hooked after reading the synopsis and chapter One. keep it up!💞
[Reviewed on: 16-09-2022] [Reading status: 7 chapters] [Reviewed by: Aysel Inara] ••••••• REMARKS: - Title is so on point, synopsis was intriguing. I must add the cover is so pretty. 10/10 here. - Talking about the contents inside, it rarely happens that there are some amazing 1st person narrations. Usually such books feel like omnipresent author tone, but this one was indeed from the character's perspective. It consumes a lot of efforts to achieve this near-perfection while crafting 1st person tone. - Moving on the cliche of evil step sister and step mother, I personally felt that Rissa was mildly bad. She still somewhere felt empathy with the FL. Considering it was her mother who gave up the FL in place of Rissa. So, as per my perception that was a slight deviation which I personally enjoyed. Rissa's fiance is another topic, but I've a strong hunch Tim will be having an appearance later on. - Now let's move to main character, I loved how effortlessly her physical appearance was visualised. It was just worry praising, her red & white hair left an impression on the readers. Her personality was crafted so well, the fearless one, witty and thoughtful. I loved how she wast portrayed as a scared white lotus, rather a fearless woman who knows how to use savage words. - Till 7 chapters the significant thing I loved was the strong visually described background. The imagery was strong enough to make me imagine how the FL was pulled out of her home, the jungle scene, calling 'Blue' in dire need, then waking up on bed, going out again in woods, meeting those evil men. - Emotions every developed so well and I'd feel her pain, fear, tired legs, worry etc. - Still eager to find the name of the ML, haha. I read up to 7 chaps instead of usual 3 which is the max number I read before reviewing. Just to find the name of ML. Such mystery and the hype created about the ML by "his bride/mate." Dayum!
Very awesome, Miss! I very love with this good plot, and also like idea in this story! You did a good job when you description your character, and that's sooo pretty sentences! I think I would like to follow your story! I wanna know a what happen with arianne!
It won't be good if I don't give this book a review... I feel hooked when I started reading this book. Actually, my friend who was an Author recommended this book to me. And just like he had described this book, i met it that way. The storylines and story description are so great. Especially the part where the author explained how werewolves came across the curse they had till date. Overall, I love this book and I recommend it to everyone.
Nice book Aloera, I really love this book. You are a Little slow on the update and I know you are a little discouraged by the low response from other readers but I want you to continue to share Arianne's story. There's more to this amazing character, she's slowly coming out of her she'll and she's showing that little fire in her. Good job Aloera, I hope u get more reviews and I'll definitely recommend your book...
This is by far the besttt book I was hooked the moment I learn about the girl. The whole story it makes u imagine every bit of it makes me wanna live in the storyline I can't help but keep thinking about the storyline tbh. It all just so new and unique I think I just wanted to have a glimps and skeem through but the story is too good for that absolutely amazing.
Amazing work author. please keep it up. we miss your updates. So excited to read a new chapter :)
this book is amazing I am addicted to it but I have to pay to read the remaining chapters I am a little disappointed at the paying thing but the overall story is amazing
I've just started reading it and already love it. It's so absorbing. Thank u author for this discovering and please don't give up, keep it up till the end ❤
this book is amazing. you can't stop reading once you start. although a suggestion to the author - pls increase your speed in writing and publishing. it's been more than a year yet only 440 chapters are published. you are stretching out too long.
I’m 64 chapters in. I believe this story has the *capability* to be something on par with the high quality novels found here with the characters & background, but some of the repetitive words/chapters, paragraph similarities, childlike monologue, “muse” being incorrectly & constantly(!) used, and word-play diminishes that quality. The world & character backgrounds, vivid descriptions, story development are all there which can make a great storyline. Too much of a negative of something can truly wipe out a good story. That’s part of the case here when I’m reading over words (like the constant “muse” when it should be “said”, “thought”, etc. or changing sentences for it to make sense while I’m reading. I think the Grammarly app or even an editor could prove highly beneficial for this author to go the next step in their story-writing because there’s definitely a solid base of talent. I enjoyed a different take of wolves & Luna. A little confused on how Alpha can hear heartbeats but not necessarily his wolf brother, so some inconsistencies but nothing that ruins the storyline. It’s definitely getting interesting now that “mother” is involved. If this is from an amateur author, there’s def talent & with anything, there’s always room to grow. Overall, I’m mostly enjoying the story so far. I also love Blue & hope to hear more about his backstory.
this book is so good. I've only gotten to the 34th chapter and I already dont want to sleep untill I find out what happens
Very mid, basic rad hair quirky girl. But that's not the problem. The story is filled with very basic tropes and bad writing. The grammar mistakes and weird wording make it an absolute chore to get into. A lot of the things sound overly cringy.
Aww This book is really good. I am so into fantacy land and werewolves! I am even writing a book my own with vampires and werewolves being main characters called, Grim Sunshine. you guys should look it up.
This gem was found just 48 hours ago as Webnovel had it for free, for a limited time 🥰. I was immediately drawn in by the characters and plot. I highly recommend this read, despite the few spelling errors and repeated chapters. The author does warn readers in the title, so be sure to check before doing a batch unlock as new readers. Happy reading 😉!!
I love this book. it's one of the best books I've ever read . Bravo 👏 Aloera because this is just amazing. I mean I was intrigued and interested in the story from the very beginning. Looking forward to reading more of your books ❤
Nothing will stop me from reviewing this book. Its soo amazing, and i recommend this book to everyone looking for the best werewolf novel about curses and all thanks for this amazing book i love you
This book just keep getting more and more exciting 👏🏾 💋💖.....and thrilling cus I love the thrills 🤭..hehe....and I'll feel bad if I dont give a review......keep up the good 🙂🤩
All in all really good book just make sure you keep an eye out for repeat chapters I’ve unfortunately both 3 already -_- it would be nice if the author could remove them or make them free so people can’t make that mistake but I really love the story and can’t putt it down (probably why I didn’t notice the repeats xD)
i absolutely love this story. The way it is written makes me feel the sorrows, happiness, love, and much much more. it is certainly a well written book. love it, can't get enough. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
not many books I have bought with coins. but this book? I gladly bought it! It is THAT good!
I was hooked right from the beginning, reading the book I felt the character come to life, I am really enjoying the story and I can't wait to see how everything unfolds. I give this story five stars because it deserves it. good job author and please don't give up, I know you feel discouraged at times but please keep moving,
i have already read a lot of books and this is the first time I'm osting a review, i just loved the story, is sooo sweet. i love the characters and their relationship. I've been depressed for a long time and this book just made my day, thank you so much ❤️❤️❤️❤️
. I haven't read many chapters yet but so far, the plot and development of the story had been so great. Keep it up Author! .
This book is promising, i like the new take on an old trope, keep up the great work.♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️
Werewolves are always a hot and tough topic. I hope the author can bring up something interesting. The plot already has a freshness to it. All the best.
The concept of the story is nice and Interesting, so I'll have to add this to my reading list. I just hope you continue writing, I'm quite thrilled and hooked after reading the synopsis and chapter One. keep it up!💞
[Reviewed on: 16-09-2022] [Reading status: 7 chapters] [Reviewed by: Aysel Inara] ••••••• REMARKS: - Title is so on point, synopsis was intriguing. I must add the cover is so pretty. 10/10 here. - Talking about the contents inside, it rarely happens that there are some amazing 1st person narrations. Usually such books feel like omnipresent author tone, but this one was indeed from the character's perspective. It consumes a lot of efforts to achieve this near-perfection while crafting 1st person tone. - Moving on the cliche of evil step sister and step mother, I personally felt that Rissa was mildly bad. She still somewhere felt empathy with the FL. Considering it was her mother who gave up the FL in place of Rissa. So, as per my perception that was a slight deviation which I personally enjoyed. Rissa's fiance is another topic, but I've a strong hunch Tim will be having an appearance later on. - Now let's move to main character, I loved how effortlessly her physical appearance was visualised. It was just worry praising, her red & white hair left an impression on the readers. Her personality was crafted so well, the fearless one, witty and thoughtful. I loved how she wast portrayed as a scared white lotus, rather a fearless woman who knows how to use savage words. - Till 7 chapters the significant thing I loved was the strong visually described background. The imagery was strong enough to make me imagine how the FL was pulled out of her home, the jungle scene, calling 'Blue' in dire need, then waking up on bed, going out again in woods, meeting those evil men. - Emotions every developed so well and I'd feel her pain, fear, tired legs, worry etc. - Still eager to find the name of the ML, haha. I read up to 7 chaps instead of usual 3 which is the max number I read before reviewing. Just to find the name of ML. Such mystery and the hype created about the ML by "his bride/mate." Dayum!
Very awesome, Miss! I very love with this good plot, and also like idea in this story! You did a good job when you description your character, and that's sooo pretty sentences! I think I would like to follow your story! I wanna know a what happen with arianne!
It won't be good if I don't give this book a review... I feel hooked when I started reading this book. Actually, my friend who was an Author recommended this book to me. And just like he had described this book, i met it that way. The storylines and story description are so great. Especially the part where the author explained how werewolves came across the curse they had till date. Overall, I love this book and I recommend it to everyone.
Nice book Aloera, I really love this book. You are a Little slow on the update and I know you are a little discouraged by the low response from other readers but I want you to continue to share Arianne's story. There's more to this amazing character, she's slowly coming out of her she'll and she's showing that little fire in her. Good job Aloera, I hope u get more reviews and I'll definitely recommend your book...
This is by far the besttt book I was hooked the moment I learn about the girl. The whole story it makes u imagine every bit of it makes me wanna live in the storyline I can't help but keep thinking about the storyline tbh. It all just so new and unique I think I just wanted to have a glimps and skeem through but the story is too good for that absolutely amazing.
Amazing work author. please keep it up. we miss your updates. So excited to read a new chapter :)