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The story looks interesting! I want to read more! I want to know more! Author please update soon!
The Story line is pretty good and I like the characters I find that the story is going a great direction, I am really excited to read more chapters , good luck
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woooooow, bravo to the author. I love the display of characters and the placement of the background it is soo detailed. the words and description let a picture of the event in my head. looking forward to more.
There are two very subtle, marked, vibrant events. The intrigue of the contrasts remains, to evoke an intermediate process! I am left with my heart in my hand! Emotional musical interpretation. Narrated in jarring but accurate scenarios for the reality focused on the synopsis and the cover. Go on, I will read you for weeks.
So it was great until the end part with the father, specifically the part about her leg being snapped. Her fear and confusion is written nicely but not the snapping leg part. The mc wasn’ t horrified or confused, wasn’ t screaming in pain or shaking in disgust- just went to her bed and looked at her cashapp? As if her leg wasn’t broken? Im assuming she’ s going to the hospital in the next ch? Anyways the book is good but that could be elaborated a bit more
Great storyline, character desciptions and intrigue. Curious as to how it might unfold next.
The story looks interesting! I want to read more! I want to know more! Author please update soon!
The Story line is pretty good and I like the characters I find that the story is going a great direction, I am really excited to read more chapters , good luck
It's very good and highly recommended [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=fp][img=fp][img=update][img=update][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=exp][img=exp][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
woooooow, bravo to the author. I love the display of characters and the placement of the background it is soo detailed. the words and description let a picture of the event in my head. looking forward to more.
There are two very subtle, marked, vibrant events. The intrigue of the contrasts remains, to evoke an intermediate process! I am left with my heart in my hand! Emotional musical interpretation. Narrated in jarring but accurate scenarios for the reality focused on the synopsis and the cover. Go on, I will read you for weeks.
So it was great until the end part with the father, specifically the part about her leg being snapped. Her fear and confusion is written nicely but not the snapping leg part. The mc wasn’ t horrified or confused, wasn’ t screaming in pain or shaking in disgust- just went to her bed and looked at her cashapp? As if her leg wasn’t broken? Im assuming she’ s going to the hospital in the next ch? Anyways the book is good but that could be elaborated a bit more
Great storyline, character desciptions and intrigue. Curious as to how it might unfold next.