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The first chapter was amazing. The punctuation, talking, and the way the sentences are structured is amazing. I hope you continue this story author cuz a lot of DC stories get dropped.
This is a great story. For future references perhaps you can make a couple more yautjas have a little more human features as the main characters romance that I’ve seen in your tags. But don’t make the added yautjas a reincarnated person. Please don’t make the story be generic as the MC is having relationships on earth and them wanting to be connected to the characters. Perhaps you can make the main character have more yautja personality with with a little of his previous personality but make him a little more ruthless. Maybe you can make the main character have a more leadership role for his race in the near future.
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The first chapter was amazing. The punctuation, talking, and the way the sentences are structured is amazing. I hope you continue this story author cuz a lot of DC stories get dropped.
This is a great story. For future references perhaps you can make a couple more yautjas have a little more human features as the main characters romance that I’ve seen in your tags. But don’t make the added yautjas a reincarnated person. Please don’t make the story be generic as the MC is having relationships on earth and them wanting to be connected to the characters. Perhaps you can make the main character have more yautja personality with with a little of his previous personality but make him a little more ruthless. Maybe you can make the main character have a more leadership role for his race in the near future.