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it's an amazing story only problem is there aren't enough chapters other than that it's perfect
it's an amazing book loved it wish he would update he'll I'd I could I'd send some money to read more
You a hoe. How you gonna give us the best four chapters to a yautja fanfic and the duo afterwards.
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Author seems to have died a horrible death. We have concluded that the cause of death was fans of said authors book finding him and strangling them in a way to get him to post more often. They will be missed.
I really like it. I think it perfectly describes the Yautja mindset. I’m not 100% whether if it’s accurate about what the life of a Yautja is like, but I think it gets some good details down. The only complaint I have is the upload schedule for now is a little hectic(non existent). The other thing is the fact that his looks have human mixed in with Yautja, but I don’t see him at all, so it’s more or less just a very minor annoyance. Otherwise it’s all well written.
oi mate! where are you? this fic is wild! I'm waiting for 19 days for a chapter, dude, don't drop it. you got it, continue the great work. don't give up!
La historia es muy buena la recomiendo además me agrada eso de cazar los trofeos le da una buena trama y una buena explicación alo fuerte h experimentado que será
Buena historia...................................................................................... .......... ............. ..... . .. . .. ... .. . . .. .. ... ...
Bro if you don't update soon I'm gonna give a one star review starting from tomorrow to until you update. The drop from the rating are gonna be faster then Rap God when he drop his beat
Excellent grammar and story telling so far. My only consternation is the updating speed but author obviously has a life and quality is better than quantity. Overall I highly recommend.
So far the story has been good. Punctuation, spelling and grammar are well done for s Webnovel story and the story itself is detailed and interesting. The insight into the thoughts of other characters thoughts is also done well and doesn’t take away from the story like some pov chapters do.
Excellent job on your awesome story .100/10 would recommend .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. ... .. .. ... ..
I just finished the first four chapters and I got to say this story is fantastic so far. It drew me in immediately and has me eagerly waiting for more. It's very well written as well.
maravilhoso. tem potencial para ser uma das melhores fan-fics que já lê. bom trabalho autor a unica coisa que falta é ver o qual bem você junta tudo isso com o mundo DC.
Read till chapter 4, Best story i read on webnovel till date...original one at least....deserved a 5 star rating...Please don't quit before completing this story!!!
4 chapters in and it is amazing with really good grammar and writing keep going and please don’t drop
Really good so far. wish he had mandibles but that pretty minor. Thankfully he isnt a doormat. And he holds the honor. What more can you ask for 10/10.
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So far a very good fanfiction. very few fics like this around depicting this alien society. Only thing I have against it is the MCs oh so human appearance for when he eventually gets to earth. Otherwise a good fic for the three chapters that have been released
It's been a while since I have been this excited for a fan-fic. Looking forward to it !! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I love it so far my g, you are an incredible writer and the idea is amazing, don't let anyone tell you otherwise. Such a great Fic, excellent example of how fics should be written, as if they were books themselves to be read by the public.
this is amazing, really early in the chaps but i havent seen a single mistake anywhere. also the way the author describes yautja society and quite literally everything else is awesome. havent been this excited to read a new fic in quite some time.
Really just read caz I thought for fun since it’s had only four chapters but I became so absorbed I want more chapters pls. And maybe like a image of the man character and some for the chapter would add to the quality. Like image of creatures being hunted doesn’t have to be super accurate u can always find fictional creature design images on Pinterest
it's an amazing story only problem is there aren't enough chapters other than that it's perfect
it's an amazing book loved it wish he would update he'll I'd I could I'd send some money to read more
You a hoe. How you gonna give us the best four chapters to a yautja fanfic and the duo afterwards.
Gods Gods GodsGods Gods Gods Gods Gods GodsGods Gods GodsGods Gods Gods Gods Gods GodsGods Gods GodsGods Gods Gods Gods Gods GodsGods Gods GodsGods Gods Gods Gods Gods GodsGods Gods GodsGods Gods Gods Gods Gods GodsGods Gods GodsGods Gods Gods Gods Gods GodsGods Gods GodsGods Gods Gods Gods Gods GodsGods Gods GodsGods Gods Gods Gods Gods Gods
Yauja is dead[img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Author seems to have died a horrible death. We have concluded that the cause of death was fans of said authors book finding him and strangling them in a way to get him to post more often. They will be missed.
I really like it. I think it perfectly describes the Yautja mindset. I’m not 100% whether if it’s accurate about what the life of a Yautja is like, but I think it gets some good details down. The only complaint I have is the upload schedule for now is a little hectic(non existent). The other thing is the fact that his looks have human mixed in with Yautja, but I don’t see him at all, so it’s more or less just a very minor annoyance. Otherwise it’s all well written.
oi mate! where are you? this fic is wild! I'm waiting for 19 days for a chapter, dude, don't drop it. you got it, continue the great work. don't give up!
La historia es muy buena la recomiendo además me agrada eso de cazar los trofeos le da una buena trama y una buena explicación alo fuerte h experimentado que será
Buena historia...................................................................................... .......... ............. ..... . .. . .. ... .. . . .. .. ... ...
Bro if you don't update soon I'm gonna give a one star review starting from tomorrow to until you update. The drop from the rating are gonna be faster then Rap God when he drop his beat
Excellent grammar and story telling so far. My only consternation is the updating speed but author obviously has a life and quality is better than quantity. Overall I highly recommend.
So far the story has been good. Punctuation, spelling and grammar are well done for s Webnovel story and the story itself is detailed and interesting. The insight into the thoughts of other characters thoughts is also done well and doesn’t take away from the story like some pov chapters do.
Excellent job on your awesome story .100/10 would recommend .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. ... .. .. ... ..
I just finished the first four chapters and I got to say this story is fantastic so far. It drew me in immediately and has me eagerly waiting for more. It's very well written as well.
maravilhoso. tem potencial para ser uma das melhores fan-fics que já lê. bom trabalho autor a unica coisa que falta é ver o qual bem você junta tudo isso com o mundo DC.
Read till chapter 4, Best story i read on webnovel till date...original one at least....deserved a 5 star rating...Please don't quit before completing this story!!!
4 chapters in and it is amazing with really good grammar and writing keep going and please don’t drop
Really good so far. wish he had mandibles but that pretty minor. Thankfully he isnt a doormat. And he holds the honor. What more can you ask for 10/10.
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So far a very good fanfiction. very few fics like this around depicting this alien society. Only thing I have against it is the MCs oh so human appearance for when he eventually gets to earth. Otherwise a good fic for the three chapters that have been released
It's been a while since I have been this excited for a fan-fic. Looking forward to it !! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I love it so far my g, you are an incredible writer and the idea is amazing, don't let anyone tell you otherwise. Such a great Fic, excellent example of how fics should be written, as if they were books themselves to be read by the public.
this is amazing, really early in the chaps but i havent seen a single mistake anywhere. also the way the author describes yautja society and quite literally everything else is awesome. havent been this excited to read a new fic in quite some time.
Really just read caz I thought for fun since it’s had only four chapters but I became so absorbed I want more chapters pls. And maybe like a image of the man character and some for the chapter would add to the quality. Like image of creatures being hunted doesn’t have to be super accurate u can always find fictional creature design images on Pinterest