Bab 1: Waking up in a new world [EDITED]
// hey I'm the author I'm new to this and am not good don't expect this to be that good anyway here is some stuff about the novel
"is for talking
'is for thinking
{} this is for system
that's it if you want to help me with ideas about spells and skills and stuff please comment on it//
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… 'where am i? It's so dark'
I open my eyes and I see bricks gray bricks
"Huh?"Why are there bricks?" 'I don't remember my roof being made of bricks'.
'now that I look closer they are dirty and have some moss on them'
'okay something's isn't right'
i try to get up but i notice that I feel different i bring my hand up to my face but instead of the hand I know so well I see claws panicked i hastily look at my arm to see it's covered by grey fur.
i rapidly check my body and what I feared was confirmed
"I'm a rat"
"or am I a mouse?"'I check and confirm'"I'm a rat I think"
'I get up and look around for a couple seconds'
'Suddenly i hear a splash i quickly look in the direction I think the splash came from'
'I start walking towards it look like a river'"wait! I'm in a sewer! that's why there are bricks and why they are mossy!"'i get closer to the water'
'standing it front of the water I lean down look at myself'
"yep that definitely confirms it I'm a rat now what"
/ding
{please select a class}
"a class?"
'okay so I have a system…I mean of course I would have a system considering that i reincarnated'
'okay so it wants me to pick a class'
"umm show me my options"
{warrior}
{rogue}
{archer}
{mage}
{Craftsmen}
'ok so I have five options hmm'…
warrior is pretty obvious what it is the melee class hmm… ya no I'm not a melee fighter type of guy… soo that's out okay next'
'rogue….nope I'm not a stealth type of guy either next'
'archer huh? I liked playing ranged builds a lot so maybe'
'mage that's my favorite class type so I'm definitely picking it but might as well check the other one'
'craftsmen…. no…tho I do like crafting I'm going to pick mage'
"I pick mage"
{you have picked mage do you want to confirm choice Y/N?}
"Yes"
{congratulations you are now a mage please say status to check your stats}
"status"'as I said that a blue some what translucent square appeared in my vision'
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{name-none}
{class-mage level-1-xp-0-100}
{species-Grey rat}
{level-0-xp-0}
{HP-4}
{MP-8}
{strength-2}
{vitality-2}
{agility-3}
{dexterity-3}
{endurance-4}
{intelligence-4}
{wisdom-4}
{SP-10}
{AP-10}
{skills}
{skill shop}
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PERTIMBANGAN PENCIPTA 
Bosstin_OzZzz
Bosstin_OzZzz Hello it's me the author I hope you enjoyed this chap :)
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