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Bro this book is something else the amount of detail put into it is completely mind-blowing, fellow readers do not be discouraged by the current pace of the novel as later I believe it will! become even greater than it is now. I believe this book is worthy of being put in your libraries as I can tell with just 5 chapters the amount of detail and hard work that was put into this book mesmerises me and its use of description, imagery and character interaction creates a very vivid world of my own in my head. I thank the author for granting us such a good read... genres like this I say are not my biggest interests but this has absolutely got me hooked. thank you and goodbye
This is a pretty good military-isekai. I enjoy reading it and am genuinely curious as to how the story will progress.
Hey author, I hope you're still here, and I hooe you remember me. While you had dropped this story, I also hope you dont mind I made a story on Wattpad(I know, the gayish story app, but still has gold within a pile of pup) based on your story, but get rid of the cringe misogynist of poor writing villains and add more plot and twist, more chapters, more world building, more magic, more battles, and MORE SLAUGHTER FOR THE HUMANS! Yeah, I just increased the difficulty level. While gate is easy level, japan summons is mid level, your story is at the hard level, mine just straight up Dark Souls level. Just imagine fighting against a kilometer size sea monster, 5 demon lords, and Orcs that can walk on water like jesus. Yeah, thats what im going to do. And if you like to, you can check it out
I liked the plot, world building but hated all the plotholes. Its not good to dumb down characters just to make dramatic. Commanders cant even use their assets right in an operations inspite having a lot of them. Redundancy and irrelevance are wasted on some of the chapters.
Hi! My name is Victoria and you write really well! I would like to inquire if you are interested in trying to work on an interactive novel? Our company is in the beginning stages of rolling out this scripted interactive game worldwide, so if you'd like to work on a new paid creation or would like to do that adaptation of the book, please feel free to get in touch with me!
it's a good novel but it just sucks because later chapters got premium but it's good i want to read more.....well u can just ignore this comment if u want.
Hey lol I have no plans to read this. Honestly I just saw the cover and wanted to say the person looks like he got rejected from art school. Anyways that was my piece. So long š Dropped a sneaky 5 star review cause Iām just too nice :)
I have read 60+ chapters and made the rating very lower suddenly because: Writing Quality: Still good. Story Development: The development seems a bit less interest. I just cant wait for their existence will be exposed and the whole world's reaction about them. Character Design: I have no comments. Updating Stability: I made it one star because whenever you published the chapter, I cant get to the next chapter ecause they are privilage. Its 4 times that I didn't get the new chapter, ive been immpatient for so long!!! World Background: The more I read the story, the more about the Fantasy World seem like the other military vs fantasy stories, simple like any other. I want something like the modern ones has advanced tech vs fantasy with superhumans and powerful magic.
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Bro the moment you put austronesian empire here in chapter 2 I am already hyping to read this.
This is one of the best novels I have read so far. The way everything started and how all the actions and the way to represent the situation in novel with such attractive meaning full words
Is gud. Read it or not idc, if you find it dumb then it's your problem. I like it. ............................................................
Author does an amazing job of building a world, it's like reading a fascinating history book of an unknown world. doesn't waste time giving you the meat and potatoes of information and sets the scene for the world immediately.
Well, you caught me off guard when 'Indoneaia' Name came up, I proud of my country. but anyway I like the storyline and where it's going. Keep it up man [img=update][img=update]
Historical fantasy with expanding world background, although not my cup of tea, I could see the care put into crafting those words. I can't really rate it objectively since I'm not used to reading historical fictions, but I could suggest the introduction of character first before the world (it would be better if it's in the same first chapter) so that the reader had someone/something to connect to.
Shameless Author review here! I am a big fan of military and isekai genres and I have read numerous titles ranging from GATE to Nihonkoku Shoukan. So as of now with my current state of mind that is filled with inspiration and confidence, I released The First Light Of A New Age where I inserted my own twist and plot into the mix of past military isekai genres. I hope you all like and enjoy reading!
Bro this book is something else the amount of detail put into it is completely mind-blowing, fellow readers do not be discouraged by the current pace of the novel as later I believe it will! become even greater than it is now. I believe this book is worthy of being put in your libraries as I can tell with just 5 chapters the amount of detail and hard work that was put into this book mesmerises me and its use of description, imagery and character interaction creates a very vivid world of my own in my head. I thank the author for granting us such a good read... genres like this I say are not my biggest interests but this has absolutely got me hooked. thank you and goodbye
This is a pretty good military-isekai. I enjoy reading it and am genuinely curious as to how the story will progress.
Hey author, I hope you're still here, and I hooe you remember me. While you had dropped this story, I also hope you dont mind I made a story on Wattpad(I know, the gayish story app, but still has gold within a pile of pup) based on your story, but get rid of the cringe misogynist of poor writing villains and add more plot and twist, more chapters, more world building, more magic, more battles, and MORE SLAUGHTER FOR THE HUMANS! Yeah, I just increased the difficulty level. While gate is easy level, japan summons is mid level, your story is at the hard level, mine just straight up Dark Souls level. Just imagine fighting against a kilometer size sea monster, 5 demon lords, and Orcs that can walk on water like jesus. Yeah, thats what im going to do. And if you like to, you can check it out
I liked the plot, world building but hated all the plotholes. Its not good to dumb down characters just to make dramatic. Commanders cant even use their assets right in an operations inspite having a lot of them. Redundancy and irrelevance are wasted on some of the chapters.
Hi! My name is Victoria and you write really well! I would like to inquire if you are interested in trying to work on an interactive novel? Our company is in the beginning stages of rolling out this scripted interactive game worldwide, so if you'd like to work on a new paid creation or would like to do that adaptation of the book, please feel free to get in touch with me!
it's a good novel but it just sucks because later chapters got premium but it's good i want to read more.....well u can just ignore this comment if u want.
Hey lol I have no plans to read this. Honestly I just saw the cover and wanted to say the person looks like he got rejected from art school. Anyways that was my piece. So long š Dropped a sneaky 5 star review cause Iām just too nice :)
I have read 60+ chapters and made the rating very lower suddenly because: Writing Quality: Still good. Story Development: The development seems a bit less interest. I just cant wait for their existence will be exposed and the whole world's reaction about them. Character Design: I have no comments. Updating Stability: I made it one star because whenever you published the chapter, I cant get to the next chapter ecause they are privilage. Its 4 times that I didn't get the new chapter, ive been immpatient for so long!!! World Background: The more I read the story, the more about the Fantasy World seem like the other military vs fantasy stories, simple like any other. I want something like the modern ones has advanced tech vs fantasy with superhumans and powerful magic.
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Bro the moment you put austronesian empire here in chapter 2 I am already hyping to read this.
This is one of the best novels I have read so far. The way everything started and how all the actions and the way to represent the situation in novel with such attractive meaning full words
Is gud. Read it or not idc, if you find it dumb then it's your problem. I like it. ............................................................
Author does an amazing job of building a world, it's like reading a fascinating history book of an unknown world. doesn't waste time giving you the meat and potatoes of information and sets the scene for the world immediately.
Well, you caught me off guard when 'Indoneaia' Name came up, I proud of my country. but anyway I like the storyline and where it's going. Keep it up man [img=update][img=update]
Historical fantasy with expanding world background, although not my cup of tea, I could see the care put into crafting those words. I can't really rate it objectively since I'm not used to reading historical fictions, but I could suggest the introduction of character first before the world (it would be better if it's in the same first chapter) so that the reader had someone/something to connect to.
Shameless Author review here! I am a big fan of military and isekai genres and I have read numerous titles ranging from GATE to Nihonkoku Shoukan. So as of now with my current state of mind that is filled with inspiration and confidence, I released The First Light Of A New Age where I inserted my own twist and plot into the mix of past military isekai genres. I hope you all like and enjoy reading!