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Author is weird, story is great. Finally a real vilain MC. Blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla
Everything is great, the lore is great, the character is good, the world building is good. This is one of the best cultivation book that I have ever read so far.
the first time I saw the cover photo I thought this was a ghostlyz novel.......but apparently not after seeing your name. so I read it and I like it so far...continue author..
hai author....when are you gonna update this?it's great books why not update again?
Dá para passar o tempo, eu já bebi bastante veneno, que criei um certa imunidade a ela, eu meio que gosto disso mais, sei lá falta muitas coisas, porém eu estou vendo aonde isso vai....oque falta? Não sei, eu leio tanta coisas que minha cabeça está cheia de fezes, obrigada autor estarei aqui até o final.
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Goes to the lower world that is beyond weak compared to him but he acts like a beta there lol so don’t waste your time.
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Author, thanks for such a masterpiece. A great cultivation novel,best harem n scenes even with family harem, great mc. I love it. As a big cultivation novel reader,this novel includes what other doesn't. Please continue your masterpiece. please add more twists n turns (grasping evil), great inheritance.l upper,middle ,lower realms (each realm with many world). in most harem,they only care/focus women some times, unlike this. waiting for chaps.
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it just hurt a bit, me who don't even a gf and that b*stard mc.😒 tsk tsk tsk.... jealousy .....i also want to reincarnated in cultivation novel with op powers and as a young master of strongest sect.😭
It's great but i think that the MC progress is kinda slow but that's maybe due to the fact that there's not much chapters maybe it will get faster in the future
bueno, es un fanfic clásico con unos smuts disfrutables, el desarrollo de la trama (no "trama") se quedó varado un poco debido a los exámenes del autor, que es entendible y ahora que regreso, para animarlo le daré mi critica. desarrollo de personaje 4/5 (debido a muy poco espacio para desarrollar cada personaje, apenas está empezando) desarrollo de la historia 5/5 ( tiene buen futuro, aún no se ha desarrollado pero está bien hasta ahora) estabilidad de actualización (no comentaré, pero antes de que fuese a hiatus para prepararse para sus exámenes, tenía una buena estabilidad de publicación contexto general (como dije, actualmente se consideraría un clásico del mundo de cultivación, villano (MC) vs protagonista y contra el destino. la calidad si es muy buena, te deja sumergirte en la lectura. solo como falta desarrollar mucho más todo. saludo autor. 😘👌
At first,I thought “It's lit” but later too slow update,overpower but slow pace made me lost interest so overall boring novel
Harem, manuplative mc, maledom,milf , obsessive lovers. This has become One of my favorite novels👌. Hope its resume's fast😖 If anyone know any similar novel to this one or with fantasy, maledom please recommend me.
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the story is good and interesting, but the author has stop updating,author plz tell did u stop the novel or what
hello here writing a review based on my personal opinion, at first I see it very well without many clichés, an intelligent, cunning and a bit evil MC, without slapping, a very good novel, I would recommend it
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
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I like this story not until where the maid parts begin.is it just me cause i feel like he's love her more than his wife's or I'm wrong cause he's wife's are already strong? anyway thanks for the fanfic cause it's hard to find a fanfic with villain mc
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Here's my honest reply to this great work so far, Keep up the good work..........
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Author is weird, story is great. Finally a real vilain MC. Blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla blablabla
Everything is great, the lore is great, the character is good, the world building is good. This is one of the best cultivation book that I have ever read so far.
the first time I saw the cover photo I thought this was a ghostlyz novel.......but apparently not after seeing your name. so I read it and I like it so far...continue author..
hai author....when are you gonna update this?it's great books why not update again?
Dá para passar o tempo, eu já bebi bastante veneno, que criei um certa imunidade a ela, eu meio que gosto disso mais, sei lá falta muitas coisas, porém eu estou vendo aonde isso vai....oque falta? Não sei, eu leio tanta coisas que minha cabeça está cheia de fezes, obrigada autor estarei aqui até o final.
Membuka SPOILER Goes to the lower world that is beyond weak compared to him but he acts like a beta there lol so don’t waste your time.
more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
Author, thanks for such a masterpiece. A great cultivation novel,best harem n scenes even with family harem, great mc. I love it. As a big cultivation novel reader,this novel includes what other doesn't. Please continue your masterpiece. please add more twists n turns (grasping evil), great inheritance.l upper,middle ,lower realms (each realm with many world). in most harem,they only care/focus women some times, unlike this. waiting for chaps.
Membuka SPOILER it just hurt a bit, me who don't even a gf and that b*stard mc.😒 tsk tsk tsk.... jealousy .....i also want to reincarnated in cultivation novel with op powers and as a young master of strongest sect.😭
It's great but i think that the MC progress is kinda slow but that's maybe due to the fact that there's not much chapters maybe it will get faster in the future
bueno, es un fanfic clásico con unos smuts disfrutables, el desarrollo de la trama (no "trama") se quedó varado un poco debido a los exámenes del autor, que es entendible y ahora que regreso, para animarlo le daré mi critica. desarrollo de personaje 4/5 (debido a muy poco espacio para desarrollar cada personaje, apenas está empezando) desarrollo de la historia 5/5 ( tiene buen futuro, aún no se ha desarrollado pero está bien hasta ahora) estabilidad de actualización (no comentaré, pero antes de que fuese a hiatus para prepararse para sus exámenes, tenía una buena estabilidad de publicación contexto general (como dije, actualmente se consideraría un clásico del mundo de cultivación, villano (MC) vs protagonista y contra el destino. la calidad si es muy buena, te deja sumergirte en la lectura. solo como falta desarrollar mucho más todo. saludo autor. 😘👌
At first,I thought “It's lit” but later too slow update,overpower but slow pace made me lost interest so overall boring novel
Harem, manuplative mc, maledom,milf , obsessive lovers. This has become One of my favorite novels👌. Hope its resume's fast😖 If anyone know any similar novel to this one or with fantasy, maledom please recommend me.
Membuka SPOILER the story is good and interesting, but the author has stop updating,author plz tell did u stop the novel or what
hello here writing a review based on my personal opinion, at first I see it very well without many clichés, an intelligent, cunning and a bit evil MC, without slapping, a very good novel, I would recommend it
It's a hobby of mine to give other author story a 5 star rating, no matter if the story is good or bad, no matter if it's about something that i know or not, since as an author myself, i know how much joy does a good review brought to the writer. Also, as far as the story goes, it is good, but it's not my cup of tea.
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Membuka SPOILER I like this story not until where the maid parts begin.is it just me cause i feel like he's love her more than his wife's or I'm wrong cause he's wife's are already strong? anyway thanks for the fanfic cause it's hard to find a fanfic with villain mc
Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Villain MC Villain MC Villain MC Villain MC Villain MC Villain MC Villain MC Villain MC Villain MC Villain MC Villain MC Villain MCVillain MC Villain MC Villain MC Villain MC Villain MC Villain MC
Here's my honest reply to this great work so far, Keep up the good work..........
please you should continue author it has great vicious mc