Marvel: I... am Iron Man?

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Dethpool_Mlg

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I_cant_choose_name

It is very good but slow updates are a big downside. ...........................................................

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Sorrias

Honestly very interesting, good idea, good grammar, the only bad thing is the size of the chapters, they are too small.. ...................

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no_to_supp_abuse

So far, so good. The grammar's nice; the characters don't come off as 2d; the world is still being shaped up but from what I've seen it's already decent and becoming even better; the story is engaging and so far hasn't seemed forced. GJ author! Please keep it up ^^

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SpaceKatss

Love your book it’s one if not the best one I’ve read in along time, the only reason it’s not a 5 star for me is the time to upload. If you fix that to maybe 2 chapters a week or longer chapter I think this would become the best book on this site, my totally biased review 🥰😍😂😎

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Artemie_Vacarciuc

Foarte si foarte bine. Idea este superba, iar indeplinirea este fabuloasa. Gramatica este la nivel suprem. Te rog din suflet sa continui acest roman fabulos.[изображение=рекомендовать][изображение=рекомендовать]

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Saber_

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ANANTA

To the Author, Overall a very good fanfic with great potential. As a fan of the fic only a genuine suggestion- 1. MC becomes a Magic user, Technopathy, Martial Artist and Runes mastery, Smithery, Science or more beyond god level finding new or creating advance way of magic which does not need to borrow from other dimension as Mystic Arts but a Magic with the Combination of Cosmic,Chi,Mana,Gamma,Dimensional energies a whole new Magic which creates an advanced magic with endless potential(infinity) like cultivation techniques but a more greater technique than cultivator which also advanced tech and science without polluting the nature of planet but by helping/preserving it. Where later he teach people similar technique in the hope of people finding their own way, keeping his own special technique to his and modified technique to Avengers for each person. Where he makes technology and science more advance with  new found energy able to make with the combination of Magic far greater than Asgard. 2. Make MC save nature also making it richer in energy to keep the planet habital for infinity. 3. Make MC go back in time copy all Mystic Arts , Martial Art , Runes and many more which were lost in time. Sharing or giving it's to Knowlodge to Kamar Taj also saving Ancient One soul from Dormamu making Her Immortal by giving a techinque of his own invention where both of them become nigh-immortal in Soul, Mind and Body. 4. Changing Mutants to Meta-Humans by helping them also undrestanding the evolution of X-GENE of Humans. 5. Making his brain faster than supercomputer by several times and modifying his mindscape and his body(Like body cultivator from Xianxia/Wuxia) to be more OP/Broken character with instant regenration even with drop of blood even soul with his nigh-immortality. 6. Bringing more Asian Character like Shang Chi, Ancient One and others equally as we see Western Characters. *Hope to See MC as GREY CHARACTER in realistic way with the balance of Black and White as Grey. *As this is making too OP request to make MC more broken which can make any entity run away but that can be by slowly step by step😇. *Make his Suit Dark Grey in color with magic in combine energies to function like symbiote with it's infinite energy with the need of electricity but please not the Red and Gold color one too much childish. *Kindly write more longer chapters as chapters are too short to read and enjoy it. 7.Make Pepper(His Love) an Asian-American with powers(OP enough to make phoenix or beyonder run away) as she practices his technique too as this is an Fan-Fic but All this wishes depends on you Author-Sama whether you grant it or not. Thanks if your read my review- Reader.