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I am looking forward to seeing what author ChaosInvoker has in store for us with this one! Bit of an odd start but once you get into the main plot its quite interesting. only 21 chapters so far as of this review but promising.
I just started reading this book and I’m already hooked. Honestly I can’t believe this book isn’t more popular.
The author is a superb narrator that writes like a seasoned expert. The concept is original and compelling as well as the foreshadowing and the way the author paints the scene. There is no purple prose. nor is the author bland. The author isn't overly-descriptive, but they describe things from the main character's standpoint. I actually love this hidden gem and I know it will go far. Hope for more chapters author! -CrescentOreo
The main perk of this book is its world background which will make one attracted to it, aside form the fact that the character development was Ok rest is good.
Oh my god, let me start by saying that the MC's backstory is legit amazing, I haven't read anything so thrilling and satisfying in a long time. Your writing style is superb and I think of ghost rider. Who doesn't love ghost rider? I'd love to dive into this. It's a page turner as well. ⚡
The synopsis had me hooked. I could not wait to jump to the chapters! It is a fast paced work. The story is interesting and engaging. The plot is intriguing, and updates are stable. It is a well-crafted work. I want to read more. Author, please update soon!
I love how simple and effective the writing style is in this novel. I especially like how the characters' experiences and actions were artfully used to showcase their personality. The foreshadowing tools are creative and well utilized, and there is something to look forward to in every chapter. The scene transitions are seamless as well. Great storytelling!
An extremely powerful story. I absolutely plan to stick with this series as I enjoyed the world-building, loved the Ireland setting, and was intrigued by all of the secondary characters.
5 stars for me, the story was well-written, the writing quality is superb and most characters are well-described. It has the potential to be popular with some readers. I definitely recommend this to anyone who is curious about what the story is all about. Well done fellow novelist!
wow author your first chapter made me really emotional it sound really , this story got my interest in the first chapter, your plot is really great, let alone your character. your grammar and conversation is really great, I can't wait for the next chapter
The first chapter gave me chills, writing style was so good and you could feel the tension and the mistery. Other chapters are nice to and I think ML is a introvert since he doesn't like to attract much attention around him ( love that). I can't say much about world building but character design is good. Great job author [img=recommend]
Took an overview so can't say much but I loved the concept and the story development seems to be strong and nice so keep it up.......And wish you best of luck
I like how you express and tell the story. this is easy to understand and the other hand I want finish this before I comment again because every chapter become exciting because of the main characters. you make a big justice and grammar is very correct.
Okay, let me summarize my observation (because seriously want to do this story justice) - the all around feel of the writing has an almost professional vibe (due to proper grammar usage; amongst another things) - the flow of the story is easy on the eyes (not to fast where I feel whiplashed; not a slow burn = considered this to be quite well-balanced) - I love how the author made sure to pay an almost great balanced approach, in terms of details of the background and the context of the story (taking notes to learn how to balance myself) - approach and idea of the story feels rather refreshing (won't spoil potential readers; though I can say with full conviction, you won't regret reading this) It's like, if this book has a zodiac sign, I'd say it's a Libra. It has a little bit of everything. Not too much, not lacking in other aspects. It's easy to read, but it isn't shallow. Definitely a great read that fits its genre. *round of applause with matching standing ovation to the Author*
Well, it's seriously good. As both an author and a writer in this app, this is one of the rare novels with a proper knitted plot. The grammar is alosn noticeably better than most novels here. I actually saw nothing that stood out, if there were. If you are looking for a good read, you should consider reading this. The only problem I see in this novel that might shoo you readers away is the lack of stability in chapter uploads. But overall, this novel has great potential, the only thing that's stopping it is the stability of chapters. I added it to my library, you should too, because this is really good. Love how the story started and how the plot slowly revealed itself.
What a read, like this is interesting. I'm so tired of leaving long reviews to show how much I enjoyed the work so instead take this gif that shows all the emotions I want to.
I like the writing style very much. The first part where the dying mother thought about everything that she stood to lose really got me. I had wanted to read more about her. Unfortunately, the second part did not really relate to the first part so I am left crying in the feudal Japan ;_;
A suspenseful beginning that quickly develops into a heart-pumping scene. I can't help but sense some Persona 5 influences in some of the sequences (and that's not an insult, by the way). Perhaps when there are more chapters published, I will give a much higher score. Overall, thank you for the experience.
A beautiful story. Dialogue is awesome and on point, development of the book is also off to a great start, little or no errors, the book is off to a beautiful start. Great job author.
I like the start. The prologue seems to be interesting. The Reena aspect actually made me slightly attached to the story. Grammar is fine with no notable errors. I hope you do justice to the wrath aspect and also love to see more updates from you in future. keep up
Well that was a good one.. Specially the setting of the plot.. It is well described and interesting!!! Great job!!! ＼(^o^)／ Keep it up!! I'll be looking forward to the next chap!
OMG!! THIS IS SO GOOD! 2 chapters in and I already became entranced! Youre doin' a great job Author-san! truly 10/10! Can't wait for more chaps...[img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is also one book, I will like should get more attention. Author, this is awesome. Actually, kinda feel like.... mm.. I don't know. It's just amazing. will support you.. I am gonna add this to library since I am in love with this..🤗🤗🤗
I am looking forward to seeing what author ChaosInvoker has in store for us with this one! Bit of an odd start but once you get into the main plot its quite interesting. only 21 chapters so far as of this review but promising.
I just started reading this book and I’m already hooked. Honestly I can’t believe this book isn’t more popular.
The author is a superb narrator that writes like a seasoned expert. The concept is original and compelling as well as the foreshadowing and the way the author paints the scene. There is no purple prose. nor is the author bland. The author isn't overly-descriptive, but they describe things from the main character's standpoint. I actually love this hidden gem and I know it will go far. Hope for more chapters author! -CrescentOreo
The main perk of this book is its world background which will make one attracted to it, aside form the fact that the character development was Ok rest is good.
Oh my god, let me start by saying that the MC's backstory is legit amazing, I haven't read anything so thrilling and satisfying in a long time. Your writing style is superb and I think of ghost rider. Who doesn't love ghost rider? I'd love to dive into this. It's a page turner as well. ⚡
The synopsis had me hooked. I could not wait to jump to the chapters! It is a fast paced work. The story is interesting and engaging. The plot is intriguing, and updates are stable. It is a well-crafted work. I want to read more. Author, please update soon!
I love how simple and effective the writing style is in this novel. I especially like how the characters' experiences and actions were artfully used to showcase their personality. The foreshadowing tools are creative and well utilized, and there is something to look forward to in every chapter. The scene transitions are seamless as well. Great storytelling!
An extremely powerful story. I absolutely plan to stick with this series as I enjoyed the world-building, loved the Ireland setting, and was intrigued by all of the secondary characters.
5 stars for me, the story was well-written, the writing quality is superb and most characters are well-described. It has the potential to be popular with some readers. I definitely recommend this to anyone who is curious about what the story is all about. Well done fellow novelist!
wow author your first chapter made me really emotional it sound really , this story got my interest in the first chapter, your plot is really great, let alone your character. your grammar and conversation is really great, I can't wait for the next chapter
The first chapter gave me chills, writing style was so good and you could feel the tension and the mistery. Other chapters are nice to and I think ML is a introvert since he doesn't like to attract much attention around him ( love that). I can't say much about world building but character design is good. Great job author [img=recommend]
Took an overview so can't say much but I loved the concept and the story development seems to be strong and nice so keep it up.......And wish you best of luck
I like how you express and tell the story. this is easy to understand and the other hand I want finish this before I comment again because every chapter become exciting because of the main characters. you make a big justice and grammar is very correct.
Okay, let me summarize my observation (because seriously want to do this story justice) - the all around feel of the writing has an almost professional vibe (due to proper grammar usage; amongst another things) - the flow of the story is easy on the eyes (not to fast where I feel whiplashed; not a slow burn = considered this to be quite well-balanced) - I love how the author made sure to pay an almost great balanced approach, in terms of details of the background and the context of the story (taking notes to learn how to balance myself) - approach and idea of the story feels rather refreshing (won't spoil potential readers; though I can say with full conviction, you won't regret reading this) It's like, if this book has a zodiac sign, I'd say it's a Libra. It has a little bit of everything. Not too much, not lacking in other aspects. It's easy to read, but it isn't shallow. Definitely a great read that fits its genre. *round of applause with matching standing ovation to the Author*
Well, it's seriously good. As both an author and a writer in this app, this is one of the rare novels with a proper knitted plot. The grammar is alosn noticeably better than most novels here. I actually saw nothing that stood out, if there were. If you are looking for a good read, you should consider reading this. The only problem I see in this novel that might shoo you readers away is the lack of stability in chapter uploads. But overall, this novel has great potential, the only thing that's stopping it is the stability of chapters. I added it to my library, you should too, because this is really good. Love how the story started and how the plot slowly revealed itself.
What a read, like this is interesting. I'm so tired of leaving long reviews to show how much I enjoyed the work so instead take this gif that shows all the emotions I want to.
I like the writing style very much. The first part where the dying mother thought about everything that she stood to lose really got me. I had wanted to read more about her. Unfortunately, the second part did not really relate to the first part so I am left crying in the feudal Japan ;_;
A suspenseful beginning that quickly develops into a heart-pumping scene. I can't help but sense some Persona 5 influences in some of the sequences (and that's not an insult, by the way). Perhaps when there are more chapters published, I will give a much higher score. Overall, thank you for the experience.
A beautiful story. Dialogue is awesome and on point, development of the book is also off to a great start, little or no errors, the book is off to a beautiful start. Great job author.
I like the start. The prologue seems to be interesting. The Reena aspect actually made me slightly attached to the story. Grammar is fine with no notable errors. I hope you do justice to the wrath aspect and also love to see more updates from you in future. keep up
Well that was a good one.. Specially the setting of the plot.. It is well described and interesting!!! Great job!!! ＼(^o^)／ Keep it up!! I'll be looking forward to the next chap!
OMG!! THIS IS SO GOOD! 2 chapters in and I already became entranced! Youre doin' a great job Author-san! truly 10/10! Can't wait for more chaps...[img=update][img=update][img=update]
This is also one book, I will like should get more attention. Author, this is awesome. Actually, kinda feel like.... mm.. I don't know. It's just amazing. will support you.. I am gonna add this to library since I am in love with this..🤗🤗🤗