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fyaya
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I love how writer expressed everything beautifully. I would say, this fictional story is written very realistic? Like in life, sometimes you did everything to make the relationship work, but if it didn't work out, it wont. Good Job writer [img=recommend]

2yr
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Scarlett_Jane

I want to come back to this book when I'm in a better headspace. It's a bit melodramatic I feel, which can be tiring, but it's good writing overall. The kind of book that pulls you in and demands you pay attention. I enjoy books like this. They take you out of your comfort zone in the best way

2yr
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Emmanuel_Peter203

The style easily draws the reader into the story. The book is beautifully created and the story that underpins it is well thought out. Good job author. I am waiting for the New chapters. πŸ‘

2yr
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Cute_BooblyMe

It's my first time reading this kind of genre and I can say you did awesomely. The storyline and the character in your book are amazing. How to be accepted by the people we love? I want to know too😿😿😿

2yr
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Fallen_Tear

This is a fictional story that is quite interesting to read. The initial plot is also unusual, and very good.😍😍 Wow, I'm really really impressed! Keep it up Author! πŸ”₯πŸ”₯

2yr
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AntiTeoSensai

I'm usually not into slice of life but the first two chapters have been surprisingly great, I want to know what happens next so I'll continue reading.

2yr
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moved_44

What a nice work you got there... with interesting characters πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°I'm gonna follow up to the end of the book. Keep up the good work author...

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2yr
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Iin_Romita

plot twist Very cool . interesting story. I just read a story from Pakistan. the line is not market. different from other stories. passion for work✌️✌️

2yr
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Sikota_The_Great19

It's a very interesting book and I feel the way the author wrote the book was very descriptive but yet simple too. Otherwise it's a real page turner and I can't wait to see what happens next. Really hope the Author doesn't stop writing because that would be a shame.

2yr
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mudita_upreti

I think that whoever will read this book would be able to connect with it from the very first chapter. Very few books have capability to make the reader feel emotional and the author did a very good job in doing this. Recommended to all.

2yr
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qurat_ul_ain4

Beautifully written! You explained each scenario in so much detail that I got lost in that moment. Keep up the hardwork! All the luck for you. [img=recommend]

2yr
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Tare_baby99

This is wonderful, best story I've read this year. 😍😍😍😍😍😍. can't wait to see what happens. I'm so loving the progression More chapters please.

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2yr
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Asong_Rophine

I usually hate commenting on books because it's so difficult for me to but I put aside my laziness and cheer my friend onπŸŒŸπŸŒŸπŸŒŸπŸŒŸπŸŒŸπŸŒŸπŸŒŸπŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™Œ

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2yr
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Reet_Amber

Author did a remarkable job making the characters alive and human. Honestly speaking while reading the first chapter I didn't feel like I was reading a book. It felt like I was talking to myself. you know some deep talk we all do with ourselves every now and then. Great job!! Keep it up AuthorπŸ’™πŸ‘

2yr
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Maryam_Asif_3150

You're missing on such a good story if you're not reading this. I love it so much. That's all I have to say. Give them a happy ending please.

2yr
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Erin_Tierney

It's really good and beautiful. I feel Jake's pain as Abby doesn't seem to remember them. It's perfectly crafted with every ounce of sadness. The fact that only their sister is supporting them is really good. Plus, "it doesn't matter if we end up together, we can make few memories to ourselves. "

2yr
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therealessylove

This book is amazing! I love the good use of English and Grammar . The description is 😘😘 and the storyline is wonderful! A very great read. Hoping for more chapters . Ride on author!

2yr
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Chrissie_Swift

This is actually outside what I usually read and what made me want to finish is the writer’s good grammar and descriptions. Good job writer, I look forward to reading more.

2yr
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KaiserKen

Life is indeed a rollercoaster of emotions. I loved the title and the premise and got into the chapters. In a platform where fantasy rules, this author chose an obscure topic. I hereby support with a review and will read the story as it progresses. Best of luck!

2yr
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OneAutumnLeaf47

Great plot, excellent characters and amazing writing, this novel has it. Great work by the author, definitely deserving of more recognition.

2yr
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DemonBoy01

A nice book with a good contents , Nice story development and character design and great world background. I can't wait for more chapters to be released. Keep up the good work.

2yr
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MisterEditor

It's an amazing novel, with a great storyline and a nice use of English vocabulary and grammar. The story was so much engrossing. It was spectacular. Thank you Author for writing this book.

2yr
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ssfx3yuchens

it's a great book, an enticing blurb and leads you to delve deeper into this book to find out more. dear author, keep going! fighting!!!! ❀️❀️❀️

2yr
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foxyash

Slice Of Life, this book is very well written and truly has shown the Slice of life the bitter truth Transgender has to go through, it's really heart breaking how Jake was disowned by his parents and lost the love of his life. It's the bitter truth of real life of Transgender's that this author has portrayed very well. Great Work author. Keep it up☺️☺️

2yr
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Numero

I was quite envious of your English and writing style. the way you described things is very good. I don't know much about love story, but Jake and Abby was quite intriguing. You can feel the sadness and love of Jake towards Abby.

2yr
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Richard_Prince

I'm sinking in... you did well. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Great start and the ability to create mental imagery is powerful in your work. keep it up, I'll be following you up.

2yr
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LadyE101

wow!!! what a novel. The blurb, It's really interesting, and I would love to read more. clap for your author. I love your work. keep up the good work. I would keep reading.

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
Endymion_1501

waaaw😍😍😍 awesome work, pleasure, and happiness are what people search but ya it's true that only peace can give you real happiness 😌😌. Great story starting with pain to happiness, filled with emotion. I love itπŸ₯°πŸ₯°. carry onπŸ‘.

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
MrCornelismalan

Its a good written book with awesome storyline, it has heart, and brilliance in it, all that you want from a story is in here, nice third person view

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
Ruovaf_star

A true unique story. I love how the author narrated a very bit of the emotions. Our MC sounded melancholy, the only things that's gives him joy is his love and his never wrong for loving. you can never direct your heart when it comes to love. nice work author.

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
fyaya
LV 14 Badge

I love how writer expressed everything beautifully. I would say, this fictional story is written very realistic? Like in life, sometimes you did everything to make the relationship work, but if it didn't work out, it wont. Good Job writer [img=recommend]

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
Scarlett_Jane

I want to come back to this book when I'm in a better headspace. It's a bit melodramatic I feel, which can be tiring, but it's good writing overall. The kind of book that pulls you in and demands you pay attention. I enjoy books like this. They take you out of your comfort zone in the best way

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
Emmanuel_Peter203

The style easily draws the reader into the story. The book is beautifully created and the story that underpins it is well thought out. Good job author. I am waiting for the New chapters. πŸ‘

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
Cute_BooblyMe

It's my first time reading this kind of genre and I can say you did awesomely. The storyline and the character in your book are amazing. How to be accepted by the people we love? I want to know too😿😿😿

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
Fallen_Tear

This is a fictional story that is quite interesting to read. The initial plot is also unusual, and very good.😍😍 Wow, I'm really really impressed! Keep it up Author! πŸ”₯πŸ”₯

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
AntiTeoSensai

I'm usually not into slice of life but the first two chapters have been surprisingly great, I want to know what happens next so I'll continue reading.

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
moved_44

What a nice work you got there... with interesting characters πŸ₯°πŸ₯°πŸ₯°I'm gonna follow up to the end of the book. Keep up the good work author...

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2yr
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Iin_Romita

plot twist Very cool . interesting story. I just read a story from Pakistan. the line is not market. different from other stories. passion for work✌️✌️

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
Sikota_The_Great19

It's a very interesting book and I feel the way the author wrote the book was very descriptive but yet simple too. Otherwise it's a real page turner and I can't wait to see what happens next. Really hope the Author doesn't stop writing because that would be a shame.

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
mudita_upreti

I think that whoever will read this book would be able to connect with it from the very first chapter. Very few books have capability to make the reader feel emotional and the author did a very good job in doing this. Recommended to all.

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
qurat_ul_ain4

Beautifully written! You explained each scenario in so much detail that I got lost in that moment. Keep up the hardwork! All the luck for you. [img=recommend]

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
Tare_baby99

This is wonderful, best story I've read this year. 😍😍😍😍😍😍. can't wait to see what happens. I'm so loving the progression More chapters please.

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2yr
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Asong_Rophine

I usually hate commenting on books because it's so difficult for me to but I put aside my laziness and cheer my friend onπŸŒŸπŸŒŸπŸŒŸπŸŒŸπŸŒŸπŸŒŸπŸŒŸπŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™ŒπŸ™Œ

Membuka SPOILER
2yr
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Reet_Amber

Author did a remarkable job making the characters alive and human. Honestly speaking while reading the first chapter I didn't feel like I was reading a book. It felt like I was talking to myself. you know some deep talk we all do with ourselves every now and then. Great job!! Keep it up AuthorπŸ’™πŸ‘

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
Maryam_Asif_3150

You're missing on such a good story if you're not reading this. I love it so much. That's all I have to say. Give them a happy ending please.

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
Erin_Tierney

It's really good and beautiful. I feel Jake's pain as Abby doesn't seem to remember them. It's perfectly crafted with every ounce of sadness. The fact that only their sister is supporting them is really good. Plus, "it doesn't matter if we end up together, we can make few memories to ourselves. "

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
therealessylove

This book is amazing! I love the good use of English and Grammar . The description is 😘😘 and the storyline is wonderful! A very great read. Hoping for more chapters . Ride on author!

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
Chrissie_Swift

This is actually outside what I usually read and what made me want to finish is the writer’s good grammar and descriptions. Good job writer, I look forward to reading more.

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
KaiserKen

Life is indeed a rollercoaster of emotions. I loved the title and the premise and got into the chapters. In a platform where fantasy rules, this author chose an obscure topic. I hereby support with a review and will read the story as it progresses. Best of luck!

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
OneAutumnLeaf47

Great plot, excellent characters and amazing writing, this novel has it. Great work by the author, definitely deserving of more recognition.

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
DemonBoy01

A nice book with a good contents , Nice story development and character design and great world background. I can't wait for more chapters to be released. Keep up the good work.

2yr
Lihat 0 balasan
MisterEditor

It's an amazing novel, with a great storyline and a nice use of English vocabulary and grammar. The story was so much engrossing. It was spectacular. Thank you Author for writing this book.

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
ssfx3yuchens

it's a great book, an enticing blurb and leads you to delve deeper into this book to find out more. dear author, keep going! fighting!!!! ❀️❀️❀️

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
foxyash

Slice Of Life, this book is very well written and truly has shown the Slice of life the bitter truth Transgender has to go through, it's really heart breaking how Jake was disowned by his parents and lost the love of his life. It's the bitter truth of real life of Transgender's that this author has portrayed very well. Great Work author. Keep it up☺️☺️

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
Numero

I was quite envious of your English and writing style. the way you described things is very good. I don't know much about love story, but Jake and Abby was quite intriguing. You can feel the sadness and love of Jake towards Abby.

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
Richard_Prince

I'm sinking in... you did well. πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘ Great start and the ability to create mental imagery is powerful in your work. keep it up, I'll be following you up.

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
LadyE101

wow!!! what a novel. The blurb, It's really interesting, and I would love to read more. clap for your author. I love your work. keep up the good work. I would keep reading.

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
Endymion_1501

waaaw😍😍😍 awesome work, pleasure, and happiness are what people search but ya it's true that only peace can give you real happiness 😌😌. Great story starting with pain to happiness, filled with emotion. I love itπŸ₯°πŸ₯°. carry onπŸ‘.

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
MrCornelismalan

Its a good written book with awesome storyline, it has heart, and brilliance in it, all that you want from a story is in here, nice third person view

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
Ruovaf_star

A true unique story. I love how the author narrated a very bit of the emotions. Our MC sounded melancholy, the only things that's gives him joy is his love and his never wrong for loving. you can never direct your heart when it comes to love. nice work author.

2yr
Lihat 1 balasan
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