Naruto: Tango with Death

LV 5

SlyOW

New story obliges, 5 Star Review from myself. Again, I don't think there's anything wrong with this so I won't make a hypocritical review calling myself shameless or something. As for my own review of the story, I think one of the strong points is originality, I'm not following canon nor am I sending my character in the Second or Third Shinobi War, so it is relatively unique on Webnovel. Without spoiling anything, Sukaina, the main character, will be the same age as Rookie 9, but Minato, Kushina and the Uchiha are alive, resulting in many changes. Just in the first chapter their presence brings a huge change to the world, so my advice is to try it out, at least the first chapter, and not skip past this story because it's the nth Naruto story you saw.

LV 14

Qavid

1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read it wrong also 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wondering why you still reading this 8. You see the mistake right? (on7) 10. But did you see I skipped number 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 9 13. And did you see I skipped number 2 14. You got tricked 15. But did you see that I skipped number 12 16. You checked and wondered why I am wasting my time on this. ( You got tricked)

LV 1

Hinto_Hisashi

I love the protagonist and since she's not a man they don't ask for a harem, it's a relief.....,...........................................................

LV 11

Pythia

In terms or writing and progression this story has great pace and is very enjoyable to read. However, all that was ruined when she had a "Crushed ankle and broken back" That healed magically and she was left with only scars on her finger. Completely moronic, she's now either paralysed for life due to her back being completely broken or cannot move properly. With her ankle... well i shouldn't have to say it should i? If she was truly that powerful to heal such injuries with " I can heal myself with chakra" then she would be a lab experiment for Danzo or Orochimaru. Absolute idiocy that ruined the book for me.

LV 13

JMK

I really like it. The main character is interesting and nice to read about. It’s also a AU where Minato is still alive so I will look forward to the future devel opment

LV 4

SnowApathie

Writing Quality 5/5 Story Development 4/5 Character Design 4/5 Updating Stability 5/5 World Background 5/5 A very good Fan-fiction (AU) that doesn't follow canon. Only problem for me is that the Mc is a female and I can't relate to it, but I have no big problem with female mc.

LV 11

Sebastym

Good. This fanfic is Great.I hope it is not abandoned..............................................................................................................................................................

LV 14

ReadinSomeShit

Definitely one of the better novels. Power development feels right and adds world building in a slight AU. Makes some risks that pay off when other novels copy cannon and get boring

LV 14

ara_k

10/10 I love this. Everything is just perfect....maybe the chapters could be longer, but I prefer quality over quantity. Great fanfic, everything is super cool.

LV 13

Santaslittlehelper

Every thing about the novel is good Grammar check marking the mc fell real check I donor if u noticed Im bat this but you should unerstand I was kinda putting it off because Im not the biggest fans of female leads but it was good

LV 14

Primordial

It is not often that I give a 5 star review. Most Naruto fanfics have boring MC or rinse and repeat story. If they are born in Naruto's generation, they usually follow the same canon. Hiruzen-Danzo cliche is overused. They are either clan kids or Civilian orphans with some cheats or are secretly Senju or Uchiha. This one is fresh. MC is very likable. The world is not a tragedy but not a comedy too. MC is normal and hilarious and more importantly, not an idiot. Interactions are not forced and the conversation flow is good. Overall a solid work. May update the rating later at chapter 38, It's 5 stars

LV 4

Sooooyaaaaa

The most perfect novel I've read. it may be a fanfiction and most characters are not the creation of author-san, but he manage to create a perfect plot/story different from the plot of Naruto (though the Naruto plot haven't started yet from what I've read, around chapter 54) WQ - Perfect for me, never noticed any grammatical and spelling error SD - Best story I've read ever since i read a book on this app CD - Funny (at least for me) MC, she's a genius yet still works hard becoz she doesn't have a cheat. No instant power ups, very high IQ and EQ. US - Average updating stability in my opinion, but there's no need to rush Author-san. i love your book and i don't mind even if you make it 1 chapter a week WB - Naruto world but with different world background, this is in the synopsis i believe? but definitely great work on this background. Keep up the good work Author-san!!!!!!

LV 5

one_punch_op

Dear Author, All I have to say is that this fanfic is wonderful, don't stop because I am excited to see what might happen in the future and I hope you continue to deliver this fantastic quality it doesn't matter to me if you take breaks as long as you don't outright abandon the fanfic I will be reading. I am feel sad that I am not in situation in which I can support you with donations but I can at least give words of appreciation so thank you for providing us with so much entertainment stay healthy and take care of yourselves.

LV 1

Aboode

A great story I highly recommend it I like the MC The timeline is quite messed up but I like it However I would like if there is more chapter while training and creating no attack. Ps: The MC is not stuck between I am a woman better than a man or the opposite and it is good thing because I noticed most of the novel or fanfic they try to emphasize that point.

LV 4

ClearSkySage

but you see, since magic was mostly make-believe and worked on mystical associations instead of hard, cold rules, it was a surprisingly easy process. I just had to keep in mind what I was supposed to call and for what reason, and the entire thing basically built itself.

LV 4

iLeech

Just finished a 27 chapters binge. It was pretty enjoyable. Disappointed there's no more. I'm looking forward to what's next. Thanks. ~~~~~~

In this AU Universe, Konoha is much stronger, I hope to see how this story will continue to progress. I love Mc..................................

LV 4

MagnusAugust

Female MC

LV 4

Getryx

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LV 1

NicolasDC

siemplemente el mejor fanfic con protagonista femenina .... no hablo mas porque sería spoiler . solo acomodence y lean que no se van a arrepentir .... anque no les guste las fmc seguro que esta historia les guste