Naruto: The First Avatar

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DarkerEmpathy29

Great first chapter. I'm looking forward to gow it'll turn out. so free 5 stars

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Nika_Sun_God

looking forward to this one, a concept I haven't seen in a fanfic before but one that makes so much sense.

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Zero_Speed

this is an awesome work hopefully this hidden gem gets the love it deserves

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Chenglin_Qiu_6903

I want to read, but too little chapters. Afriaid they if I do, author drops then boom, gg. I’ll leave this 5 star for now to encourage the author to keep writing.

sangat bagus aku menantikan bab selanjut nya dan juga tolong koreksi penyebutan nama karakter dan wilayah nya ada beberapa yang salah.......,.....................

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Daoistblooming

It’s amazing!!! Loved the chapters. MC is also so good . I wish to read more. Will be waiting for updates. I hope the story develops steadily.

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Now_You_S33_Me

OMG, This is my Kid!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!¡!!!!!

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A420Snackattack

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Transhumanist

Oh no! He is going to bring balance to the shinobi world by killing all shinobi? He probably will try to suck everyone's Chakra with Shinju am I right?

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Ender_Slayer_3621

I'm loving it so far keep up the good work