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Anide_Oficial

Es de las mejores historias de Marvel que llegué a leer aquí. Aunque realmente quise que la trama continuara, sé que su final era necesario. Y más de una vez he pensado en escribir por mi parte una continuación.

1mth
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Chromeal

This story was very good overall. I would say that everything meshed well for an OP character in Marvel. I didn't really feel that there were unfinished plotlines, and it definitely focused on removing some of the original somewhat tragic portions of MCU in a welly developed and creative way. The only bad thing was some of the grammar consistency switching up 'him and 'her' so if you weren't paying attention it could get frustrating. Overall, the story was good. It is very slice of life focused though, just be warned.

1mth
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Victorma1

historia buena calidad decente en todo desarrollo bastante bueno personajes medio meh por qué algunos no los desarollan bien pero en general la recomiendo mucho

1mth
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eatmywood

pokemon gotta catch em all

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2mth
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thewolvenking

love it hope for more chapters great fan fic

2mth
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DaoistfaoI8S

The best marvel fanfic i ever read, nothing scandalous about the power of the mc, no garbage mc like the Chinese one, really well written story

2mth
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The_Dark_Hydrax

Please update![img=coins][img=fp][img=exp]

2mth
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Madness_6003

Beautiful. a masterpiece . I recommend to try it

2mth
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Fieldbreaker

I must say, the idea is really good. Unfortunately, the story is so poorly told and written that it isn't fun to read. The smut part of the story is short, bad and everything else as smut.

3mth
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dragonhalf_Holsey

i hope you get well soon soon and this is a good novel i wish it can keep going on

3mth
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_narrator

Felt like I watched a baby growing into a magnificent adult one of the best and it would have been better if author continued a lot was left

3mth
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Psywarrior

this was an amazing read, I really loved it, no nonsense, no fillers, just story in a way which draws us in

3mth
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_narrator

one of the best Marvel fics a lot could have been done if not for the early ending

3mth
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Dragaim

no words , fantastic storytelling . plus the fact that the author actually completed the story 11 out of 10 easy .

3mth
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gg_gg33

good goodgood good goodgood good goodgood good goodgood

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3mth
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heavenABOVEheaven

another good fic is complete thanks for the story, been a lurker since ch. 1 posted, but id say its one of the best fics ive read since reading fan fics and you didnt abandon it like so many others kudos to you my friend and hoping you more power for writing another good story . see you on your other story soon i hope.

3mth
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DaoistHJ3Ug1

This story represents a journey of more or less 2 years since I discovered it and I was hooked from chapter 1 due to its crossover between Strike the Blood and Marvel. It focuses on daily life, has its moments of struggle and a bit of drama. Although the ending was a bit sudden I am satisfied.

3mth
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Kareem_Patterson

Just an amazing read, do hope this keeps going and next the author could do this again in a different universe

4mth
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XingTong

Buen FF para pasar el rato si quieres a alguien como un buen padre y sea cariñoso con sus amantes entonces esto es para ti Pero no si es así buscas a alguien que explota sus poderes y da peleas épicas aquí no es Es para sanar el corazón estos muy bueno la verdad y lo voy a re leer cuando acabe

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4mth
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Matt_inman

one of my favorite books of all time, love the family dynamic, keep up the hard work

5mth
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florian_lautenbach

this is a Masterpiece !!!!!! this is a 1 of 1 Millionen ist a must to read[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] a Masterpiece autor Respekt [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

5mth
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Oxzinax

I've been looking for a long time but I can't find fanfiction as good as this. Please someone give me some advice like this fiction.I thank you author for writing this masterpiece. I'm waiting for new chapters with four eyes.(it is an expression in my country)

5mth
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Davenchi_Lio

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5mth
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Maycon_Henrique_10

História é muito boa escrito ignora essas pessoas que falam mal da sua história ela realmente boa uma das poucas histórias de um vampiro que fica boa 🤔🤔😄😄😄

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6mth
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_Darker_Than_Black

MC is too naive and good. Overwhelmingly wholesome and slice of life, If I have to say. With a typical excuse of, "He is the most powerful person, he will pass his life leisurely. What can he do beside that?" Too peaceful and the MC just likes to take liability on himself.

7mth
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Cody_Mohr

one of the most interesting stories I have read so far I look forward to where this goes

8mth
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Daenerys_Targarye

My favourite fanfic on here been gone for a bit so miss some chapters so going to have a re read

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8mth
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Drakeayr

Honestly, it’s a master peice. I was a bit hesitant in the middle sections with the big plan, but it turned out better than I could have imagined. Btw I suggest you keep reading for this one cuz it just gets better, in writing quality, story, etc.

8mth
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Pedro_0000

It's fucking good ####################################################################################################################################

8mth
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Retardedmadman

CH 218 Really likes it till now keep the good work up😊

8mth
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Anide_Oficial

Es de las mejores historias de Marvel que llegué a leer aquí. Aunque realmente quise que la trama continuara, sé que su final era necesario. Y más de una vez he pensado en escribir por mi parte una continuación.

1mth
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Chromeal

This story was very good overall. I would say that everything meshed well for an OP character in Marvel. I didn't really feel that there were unfinished plotlines, and it definitely focused on removing some of the original somewhat tragic portions of MCU in a welly developed and creative way. The only bad thing was some of the grammar consistency switching up 'him and 'her' so if you weren't paying attention it could get frustrating. Overall, the story was good. It is very slice of life focused though, just be warned.

1mth
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Victorma1

historia buena calidad decente en todo desarrollo bastante bueno personajes medio meh por qué algunos no los desarollan bien pero en general la recomiendo mucho

1mth
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eatmywood

pokemon gotta catch em all

img
2mth
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thewolvenking

love it hope for more chapters great fan fic

2mth
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DaoistfaoI8S

The best marvel fanfic i ever read, nothing scandalous about the power of the mc, no garbage mc like the Chinese one, really well written story

2mth
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The_Dark_Hydrax

Please update![img=coins][img=fp][img=exp]

2mth
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Madness_6003

Beautiful. a masterpiece . I recommend to try it

2mth
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Fieldbreaker

I must say, the idea is really good. Unfortunately, the story is so poorly told and written that it isn't fun to read. The smut part of the story is short, bad and everything else as smut.

3mth
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dragonhalf_Holsey

i hope you get well soon soon and this is a good novel i wish it can keep going on

3mth
Lihat 0 balasan
_narrator

Felt like I watched a baby growing into a magnificent adult one of the best and it would have been better if author continued a lot was left

3mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Psywarrior

this was an amazing read, I really loved it, no nonsense, no fillers, just story in a way which draws us in

3mth
Lihat 0 balasan
_narrator

one of the best Marvel fics a lot could have been done if not for the early ending

3mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Dragaim

no words , fantastic storytelling . plus the fact that the author actually completed the story 11 out of 10 easy .

3mth
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gg_gg33

good goodgood good goodgood good goodgood good goodgood

Membuka SPOILER
3mth
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heavenABOVEheaven

another good fic is complete thanks for the story, been a lurker since ch. 1 posted, but id say its one of the best fics ive read since reading fan fics and you didnt abandon it like so many others kudos to you my friend and hoping you more power for writing another good story . see you on your other story soon i hope.

3mth
Lihat 1 balasan
DaoistHJ3Ug1

This story represents a journey of more or less 2 years since I discovered it and I was hooked from chapter 1 due to its crossover between Strike the Blood and Marvel. It focuses on daily life, has its moments of struggle and a bit of drama. Although the ending was a bit sudden I am satisfied.

3mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Kareem_Patterson

Just an amazing read, do hope this keeps going and next the author could do this again in a different universe

4mth
Lihat 0 balasan
XingTong

Buen FF para pasar el rato si quieres a alguien como un buen padre y sea cariñoso con sus amantes entonces esto es para ti Pero no si es así buscas a alguien que explota sus poderes y da peleas épicas aquí no es Es para sanar el corazón estos muy bueno la verdad y lo voy a re leer cuando acabe

img
4mth
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Matt_inman

one of my favorite books of all time, love the family dynamic, keep up the hard work

5mth
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florian_lautenbach

this is a Masterpiece !!!!!! this is a 1 of 1 Millionen ist a must to read[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] a Masterpiece autor Respekt [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

5mth
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Oxzinax

I've been looking for a long time but I can't find fanfiction as good as this. Please someone give me some advice like this fiction.I thank you author for writing this masterpiece. I'm waiting for new chapters with four eyes.(it is an expression in my country)

5mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Davenchi_Lio

[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

5mth
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Maycon_Henrique_10

História é muito boa escrito ignora essas pessoas que falam mal da sua história ela realmente boa uma das poucas histórias de um vampiro que fica boa 🤔🤔😄😄😄

img
6mth
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_Darker_Than_Black

MC is too naive and good. Overwhelmingly wholesome and slice of life, If I have to say. With a typical excuse of, "He is the most powerful person, he will pass his life leisurely. What can he do beside that?" Too peaceful and the MC just likes to take liability on himself.

7mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Cody_Mohr

one of the most interesting stories I have read so far I look forward to where this goes

8mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Daenerys_Targarye

My favourite fanfic on here been gone for a bit so miss some chapters so going to have a re read

img
8mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Drakeayr

Honestly, it’s a master peice. I was a bit hesitant in the middle sections with the big plan, but it turned out better than I could have imagined. Btw I suggest you keep reading for this one cuz it just gets better, in writing quality, story, etc.

8mth
Lihat 2 balasan
Pedro_0000

It's fucking good ####################################################################################################################################

8mth
Lihat 0 balasan
Retardedmadman

CH 218 Really likes it till now keep the good work up😊

8mth
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