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It's quite good of Naruto fanfiction!!! 👍👍👍 I like Tatsumi characteristic and how you don't make him OP in instant... Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good work author-chan 😁😁👍👍👍
good job author liked it hope u don't drop it it gives a bad taste in mind . i kind of wish hope u put Kushina and mikoto together with mc. well that's all and giving you a 5 Star since it's worth it. and good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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This is a system slave story, a story about an mc who is forced to do mission a system comes up with or they'll be punished. If you like reading about an mc who is a slave, then this story is for you.
I've read this novel....not only timeline is messed up but the story is also dull.... although i like the lite jokes in novel....there is a generation gap between Navaki, Minato, Mikoto, and Fugaku....
Seems promising, I’l make a more in-depth review when it reaches atleast 100 chapters. Also balancing the 1 Star troll reviews.
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a decent translation from mtl and thanks for that, kudos for u for braving urself to lose some braincells so yea keep up the good work pal im cheering u
I don't really understand why mc doesn't increase his yin or yang attributes, it provides greater benefits than the others, attributes that in the Naruto series are related to the body can definitely strengthen the body or can get to the sage body like Hashirama or Ashura, the yin attribute can definitely increase the sharinggan because almost all doujutsu depend on the yin attribute, just like genjutsu which is dominated by the yin attribute, if it is possible to combine them to form a yin-yang attribute, it will definitely give mc a slight increase let alone the yin-yang attribute can create even life
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i love the story keep UP the god work😤👍☕🍰 .................................................................................................
I love this story🤗🤗🤗 I need more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
good very good well done please dont drop im actually liking this book so please dont drop i dont wanna have to find another one thats not as good
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Reseña en español. Salvo el principio que es un poco aburrido, es un buen fic de Naruto. Los capítulos son cortos pero hay buena comedia también. A mi parecer es un 8.5/10 lean unos 5 o 10 capítulos antes de abandonar y verán mas o menos de como va la historia.
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Although not best but good translation. ....................................................................................................................................................
People who don't like System Slave MC(Forced tasks and forced penalties etc.) can leave after reading this review........................................... 🙂
This is, unfortunately, an mtl novel, and as such, after a while this gets extremely trashy and filled with padding, not to mention the fact that author seems to be bipolar in terms of making the protagonist strong then making him seem weak again in random bouts of semi-illogical reasoning.
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It's quite good of Naruto fanfiction!!! 👍👍👍 I like Tatsumi characteristic and how you don't make him OP in instant... Can't wait to see next chapter.. Keep up the good work author-chan 😁😁👍👍👍
good job author liked it hope u don't drop it it gives a bad taste in mind . i kind of wish hope u put Kushina and mikoto together with mc. well that's all and giving you a 5 Star since it's worth it. and good 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
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This is a system slave story, a story about an mc who is forced to do mission a system comes up with or they'll be punished. If you like reading about an mc who is a slave, then this story is for you.
I've read this novel....not only timeline is messed up but the story is also dull.... although i like the lite jokes in novel....there is a generation gap between Navaki, Minato, Mikoto, and Fugaku....
Seems promising, I’l make a more in-depth review when it reaches atleast 100 chapters. Also balancing the 1 Star troll reviews.
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a decent translation from mtl and thanks for that, kudos for u for braving urself to lose some braincells so yea keep up the good work pal im cheering u
I don't really understand why mc doesn't increase his yin or yang attributes, it provides greater benefits than the others, attributes that in the Naruto series are related to the body can definitely strengthen the body or can get to the sage body like Hashirama or Ashura, the yin attribute can definitely increase the sharinggan because almost all doujutsu depend on the yin attribute, just like genjutsu which is dominated by the yin attribute, if it is possible to combine them to form a yin-yang attribute, it will definitely give mc a slight increase let alone the yin-yang attribute can create even life
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i love the story keep UP the god work😤👍☕🍰 .................................................................................................
I love this story🤗🤗🤗 I need more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more
good very good well done please dont drop im actually liking this book so please dont drop i dont wanna have to find another one thats not as good
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Reseña en español. Salvo el principio que es un poco aburrido, es un buen fic de Naruto. Los capítulos son cortos pero hay buena comedia también. A mi parecer es un 8.5/10 lean unos 5 o 10 capítulos antes de abandonar y verán mas o menos de como va la historia.
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Keep the good work💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
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Although not best but good translation. ....................................................................................................................................................
People who don't like System Slave MC(Forced tasks and forced penalties etc.) can leave after reading this review........................................... 🙂
This is, unfortunately, an mtl novel, and as such, after a while this gets extremely trashy and filled with padding, not to mention the fact that author seems to be bipolar in terms of making the protagonist strong then making him seem weak again in random bouts of semi-illogical reasoning.
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