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A shameless review of the author is traditional, not pretentious don't be mad just enjoy and tell me every mistake for correction.
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till now i think the story is great. Mc is not super OP, please no harem.... Great Great GreatGreatGreatGreatGreatGreatGreatGreatGreatGreatGreat
Honestly the premise of the story and the story line the author has written is awesome, I simply love the idea he has had, but getting past the grammar is quite difficult, considering the authors first language isnβt English, it is understandable, However it makes it hard to enjoy the story with how bad it is. I would suggest that the author workshops and edits his current chapters before upploading anymore. Possibly by having an English speaking friend to edit it, or a willing person who would like to edit it for free or using a free grammar check website such as grammarly.
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is a good fic waiting for more πππππππππππππππππππππβοΈπππππβοΈπππβοΈππππβοΈππππβοΈππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
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A shameless review of the author is traditional, not pretentious don't be mad just enjoy and tell me every mistake for correction.
[ΠΈΠ·ΠΎΠ±ΡΠ°ΠΆΠ΅Π½ΠΈΠ΅ = ΠΎΠΏΡΡ][ΠΈΠ·ΠΎΠ±ΡΠ°ΠΆΠ΅Π½ΠΈΠ΅ = ΠΎΠΏΡΡ][ΠΈΠ·ΠΎΠ±ΡΠ°ΠΆΠ΅Π½ΠΈΠ΅ = ΠΎΠ±Π½ΠΎΠ²Π»Π΅Π½ΠΈΠ΅][img=ΠΌΠΎΠ½Π΅ΡΡ][img=ΠΌΠΎΠ½Π΅ΡΡ][img=ΠΌΠΎΠ½Π΅ΡΡ][img=ΠΌΠΎΠ½Π΅ΡΡ][img=ΠΌΠΎΠ½Π΅ΡΡ][img=ΠΌΠΎΠ½Π΅ΡΡ][img=ΠΌΠΎΠ½Π΅ΡΡ]
till now i think the story is great. Mc is not super OP, please no harem.... Great Great GreatGreatGreatGreatGreatGreatGreatGreatGreatGreatGreat
Honestly the premise of the story and the story line the author has written is awesome, I simply love the idea he has had, but getting past the grammar is quite difficult, considering the authors first language isnβt English, it is understandable, However it makes it hard to enjoy the story with how bad it is. I would suggest that the author workshops and edits his current chapters before upploading anymore. Possibly by having an English speaking friend to edit it, or a willing person who would like to edit it for free or using a free grammar check website such as grammarly.
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is a good fic waiting for more πππππππππππππππππππππβοΈπππππβοΈπππβοΈππππβοΈππππβοΈππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ