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InHisName

Has great potential, but alas, soon into the story there's a possible trigger for many. So here's a warning for those whom personally find such things to be nauseating. In chapter 6 MC is imprinted with a guardian seal by Mito. What's a guardian seal you might ask? A slave seal that enslaves him at the whimsy of the Uzumaki clan, or rather Kushina in specific. What's even worse is that the MC has had his suspicions months ago (in-story time) but still willingly paved the path to this event. Willingly paved the path to his own servitude. Power is meaningless if in the end of the day you're just a slave. If you don't mind this particular caveat then this is actually a rather unique story. The author's writing style in particular is engaging.

2yr
Lihat 54 balasan
Gabbu_Xul

Truely good story like the rest of Fanharem's work. One of the few authors that continously puts out good stuff. If you've read Jordinio's naruto story then you'll already know how the system works, for those that haven't, it's all about the grind. lol The story is set just before the second shinobi war and the MC is five years old. As alot happens in the war expect the first 60ish chapters to take place during this time period as the MC will be a kid, no lemons for you, yet. The author takes a more realistic view of the world and therefore what would happen in a war (I've already seen one review where they whine about 'everybody is r*ping') so if that's too much for you, sorry. But I will state that none of it is described or 'on screen' but heavily implied and discussed by characters. The world if filling out well, but the only gripe I have is that the MC has no real motivation outside of the harem, everything is for the harem, which is eternal. *Slightly spoilery* As to the supposed *slave seal*, the seal that the MC is given by a clan head is to basically insure that the MC doesn't kill or cause irreparable harm to the clan hier, who is the MC's charge. It's explicitly stated that all the seal does is keep the MC from thinking or acting maliciously agains the clan heir (who is the MC's friend). How that equals a slave seal to others, I'm not sure. The clan head requests the seal as they've only know the MC for a few weeks, at best, and they want a little bit of insurance while they try to make ties with the MC and their clan. The MC accepts as they will be rewarded with a ton of multiple clans secret techniques by the system and the MC knows that the seal doesn't cause any major restrictions and they could get out of it if desired. Which proves true as the seal is removed pretty early on. I write this as the number one review gives inaccurate and incomplete statements about the seal and I'd rather not see a reader that may enjoy this turn away because of false impressions. Really the seal is a non-issue and is almost forgotten until it's brought up again upon it's removal, it has zero impact on the story or character development.

2yr
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ZxeroX
LV 13 Badge

Sooo I read up to 135 chapters so far. The story was great, if you can get over a few factors. If you read the reviews, you can see that he got branded by a seal so he couldn’t do anything malicious towards certain people. Most readers will drop the book at that point. But I kept reading just to see how it would turn out. Do not expect the author to follow the timeline at all. I actually like when authors actually go off script - who wants to read what you already know what will happen? However, my personal opinion, after chapter 95ish, the story just kinda fell off to me. I don’t know what the author is trying to do. Anyway, I gave it a whole 35 chapters to get better, and it still didn’t pick up my interest. So I’m dropping it.

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GupGodLicker

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Harshit_Ranjan_3833

well first off I have read currently till ch 172 and I would like to say plot is great and author got good writing style.got few things to point that mc is like crazy for grind which is ok and all but one which thing will SP be used for like he is collecting them like crazy and still not using.another thing show a bit more about outside of village and it would be good if it deals with mito going "maiden" at least before he turns 18 as it would be not great to leave her out.it will also be great if plot progress more and some mystery gets resolved.well ig that's it for now it's a great work.NOTE: - appreciate if author see and work on this still its from my prospective and i don't downplay or criticize anyone.

11mth
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Len_Stoff

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Isak_Svartrapmo

okayish story.mc is Kushina's guardian, not slave!He is dedicated to the grind. Op AF and helps tsunade research the rinnegan and helps orochimaru with experiments. He also gets sage mode.harem:Mikoto U.Kushina U.Nonou Y.Tsume I. (maybe)Tsunade S.fem orichimaru (likely in the future)students:Kurenai.Konan.and forgot the last one.

1yr
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Jetboy76

I’m at the point where orochimaru is teaching the MC is he actually a girl is that decided yet???

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1yr
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Jordi_Hardiansyah

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1yr
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Random_0P_Being

It was a good read but then after 100 chapter's it's just harem and more harem. It got boring quickly at that point. ******************************************************************************

1yr
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DaoistTempest619

A submissive Orochimaru is no more Orochimaru but else the novel is goodIt's just me preferring dark genres

1yr
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Harem_Seeker

no spoiler i just dont know what i need to write

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1yr
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MonkeReviewer

Ch 184: Writing Quality:5/5 Don’t see mistakes but I don’t really pay that much attention to it Update Stability:5/5 Don’t know about it Story Development: 3/5 It was very good at the start and was filled with so many possibilities but it is very slow now and kinda getting boring which would be good for slow paced stories but it just doesn’t get the readers to stay Character Desgin: 4/5 Pretty interesting OC and protrayal of the series characters are good World Background: 4/5 Other places are mentioned and have been used but most of the story is in the village(unsprisingly) but they are not used a lot Overall: I would recommend it if you like slow paced stuff but I would also warn you guys that it gets kinda boring in the later chapters because there is almost no conflict and we don’t see the MC develope much

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Genesis_999

Lol this people yeah it's a "guardian seal" and he took it cuz he can inherit both senju and uzumaki heritage but at what cost? Becoming kushina's plaything cuz he can't hut her or tsunade for that matter or nagato and karin too it's basically a slave seal just that they named it "Guardian" Seal. mind you in the anime kushina is trashy with how she treats naruto but in this she is a one he ll of a b i ch mc knew what he would get if he accepted the guardian seal that's what he got so welp yes this novel and author are trashy (a sf) and I read reviews says it doesn't matter lol what? Go take your {M} as s elsewhere he is basically a slave for life. And if it got removed even then this mc and fanfic is trash he would still choose kushina even after all the sh !ts she did to him now tell me is this a good fanfic too you? Lowlife frog with their disgusting world view

1yr
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Divine_Onahole

theres tons of kunoichi on narutoverse, but aparantly thats not enough, for the sake of unhealthy fethis author genderbend orochimaru to join his harem, sigh.

1yr
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Goca
LV 4 Badge

I would love to read but i am not sure with all mc became a slave thing soo is he free later on and at which chapter does mc free himself from seal?? Pls answer im longig for good naruto fic but i dont want a slave mc

1yr
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Lord_of_lords

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CouchPotatoDandy

I kinda enjoyed this fanfiction. But like any other Naruto fanfiction, there are two outcomes. It can either end very good or fail in the middle. For me, this fanfiction failed in the middle cuz the author gave the MC too many skills and jutsus, this turned the MC too strong right off the middle and it kind of lost its purpose... Again, this is for me and it's my opinion, maybe others will like it more.

1yr
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LeitorLv0

Nice [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Einfach_Moppel

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Eze_Agilera

I have a question will Kurama be in the arem?

1yr
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Kaiserz

So uh...with my peanut brain, I shall give a simple review. I don't know why I never saw anyone complain about the lack of battle in the reviews but yeah, that's the only problem for me...so yeah, that's it. Anyways, for those who are having second thoughts because of the reviews on the mc agreeing to have a slave seal...ignore them. It barely mattered at all... Bye

1yr
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Abashelkoolhem_399

It's a pretty good naruto fiction but not the best I've read.

1yr
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TheAngels

First of all the mc IS NOT A SLAVE, second, THERE ARE NO RAPERS AS THE REVIEWS say, now with this resolved. This is one of the best naruto novels but there are things that I don't like, the routine was fun at first but there came a time when it was quite annoying, another thing is that the mc never acts seriously, basically all his dialogues are bad jokes besides that the story is VERY SLOW the mc is only 12 years old and he aged 3 years in 1 day but only biologically, the harem is quite good but the author is delaying many things in the harem another point against is that there is no Lemon and the mc only had relationships with Mikoto who is also his only official partner. In conclusion, the worst thing about the novel is that there are no jumps in time and it is basically pure everyday life since the author focuses more on grinding than on character development, which delays things like war too much.

1yr
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Shivam_Thakur_1883

no naruto fan avoid this novel..... author litrally made every ninja rapist...yeah litrally every person is rapist scum and only mc is neutral according to author while very verry few good charater are dumb.......typical chinese type novel

1yr
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Spielar

I think the story is certainly one of the best I have read in the Narutoverse, though the author, while trying to keep morally correct, is ignoring the fact that physically the girls around the MC should be physically older than him. He aged faster because of training and chakra while the girls apparently did not and stayed growing at a normal pace. I also complain that he isn't grinding his base abilities. Having a higher perception should make his elemental training easier as he should be able to better sense and manipulate the elements which would provide a constant rise in his elemental stats as well as his other skills, but they aren't rising properly like they should.

1yr
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R4ITO
LV 1 Badge

A very good fanfic of Naruto. The story is good and makes sense without many plot holes and good solutions to problems. Despite the beginning being boring I assure you that the story is very good. Despite the title, it doesn't have too many senci limes. Continuing the story author.

2yr
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GrimFate77

Honest a good read it starts a little weird but it gets really good as you keep going Masked Maiden is the best…..

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Uzumaki_Kushina_21

can anyone tell who are in the Harem?? please 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

2yr
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Kostya_Dolgushev

Great Naruto fanfic. If only there were more chapters a week.[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

2yr
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InHisName

Has great potential, but alas, soon into the story there's a possible trigger for many. So here's a warning for those whom personally find such things to be nauseating. In chapter 6 MC is imprinted with a guardian seal by Mito. What's a guardian seal you might ask? A slave seal that enslaves him at the whimsy of the Uzumaki clan, or rather Kushina in specific. What's even worse is that the MC has had his suspicions months ago (in-story time) but still willingly paved the path to this event. Willingly paved the path to his own servitude. Power is meaningless if in the end of the day you're just a slave. If you don't mind this particular caveat then this is actually a rather unique story. The author's writing style in particular is engaging.

2yr
Lihat 54 balasan
Gabbu_Xul

Truely good story like the rest of Fanharem's work. One of the few authors that continously puts out good stuff. If you've read Jordinio's naruto story then you'll already know how the system works, for those that haven't, it's all about the grind. lol The story is set just before the second shinobi war and the MC is five years old. As alot happens in the war expect the first 60ish chapters to take place during this time period as the MC will be a kid, no lemons for you, yet. The author takes a more realistic view of the world and therefore what would happen in a war (I've already seen one review where they whine about 'everybody is r*ping') so if that's too much for you, sorry. But I will state that none of it is described or 'on screen' but heavily implied and discussed by characters. The world if filling out well, but the only gripe I have is that the MC has no real motivation outside of the harem, everything is for the harem, which is eternal. *Slightly spoilery* As to the supposed *slave seal*, the seal that the MC is given by a clan head is to basically insure that the MC doesn't kill or cause irreparable harm to the clan hier, who is the MC's charge. It's explicitly stated that all the seal does is keep the MC from thinking or acting maliciously agains the clan heir (who is the MC's friend). How that equals a slave seal to others, I'm not sure. The clan head requests the seal as they've only know the MC for a few weeks, at best, and they want a little bit of insurance while they try to make ties with the MC and their clan. The MC accepts as they will be rewarded with a ton of multiple clans secret techniques by the system and the MC knows that the seal doesn't cause any major restrictions and they could get out of it if desired. Which proves true as the seal is removed pretty early on. I write this as the number one review gives inaccurate and incomplete statements about the seal and I'd rather not see a reader that may enjoy this turn away because of false impressions. Really the seal is a non-issue and is almost forgotten until it's brought up again upon it's removal, it has zero impact on the story or character development.

2yr
Lihat 4 balasan
ZxeroX
LV 13 Badge

Sooo I read up to 135 chapters so far. The story was great, if you can get over a few factors. If you read the reviews, you can see that he got branded by a seal so he couldn’t do anything malicious towards certain people. Most readers will drop the book at that point. But I kept reading just to see how it would turn out. Do not expect the author to follow the timeline at all. I actually like when authors actually go off script - who wants to read what you already know what will happen? However, my personal opinion, after chapter 95ish, the story just kinda fell off to me. I don’t know what the author is trying to do. Anyway, I gave it a whole 35 chapters to get better, and it still didn’t pick up my interest. So I’m dropping it.

19d
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GupGodLicker

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Harshit_Ranjan_3833

well first off I have read currently till ch 172 and I would like to say plot is great and author got good writing style.got few things to point that mc is like crazy for grind which is ok and all but one which thing will SP be used for like he is collecting them like crazy and still not using.another thing show a bit more about outside of village and it would be good if it deals with mito going "maiden" at least before he turns 18 as it would be not great to leave her out.it will also be great if plot progress more and some mystery gets resolved.well ig that's it for now it's a great work.NOTE: - appreciate if author see and work on this still its from my prospective and i don't downplay or criticize anyone.

11mth
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Onepoint

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1yr
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Len_Stoff

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Isak_Svartrapmo

okayish story.mc is Kushina's guardian, not slave!He is dedicated to the grind. Op AF and helps tsunade research the rinnegan and helps orochimaru with experiments. He also gets sage mode.harem:Mikoto U.Kushina U.Nonou Y.Tsume I. (maybe)Tsunade S.fem orichimaru (likely in the future)students:Kurenai.Konan.and forgot the last one.

1yr
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Jetboy76

I’m at the point where orochimaru is teaching the MC is he actually a girl is that decided yet???

Membuka SPOILER
1yr
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Jordi_Hardiansyah

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Random_0P_Being

It was a good read but then after 100 chapter's it's just harem and more harem. It got boring quickly at that point. ******************************************************************************

1yr
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DaoistTempest619

A submissive Orochimaru is no more Orochimaru but else the novel is goodIt's just me preferring dark genres

1yr
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Harem_Seeker

no spoiler i just dont know what i need to write

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MonkeReviewer

Ch 184: Writing Quality:5/5 Don’t see mistakes but I don’t really pay that much attention to it Update Stability:5/5 Don’t know about it Story Development: 3/5 It was very good at the start and was filled with so many possibilities but it is very slow now and kinda getting boring which would be good for slow paced stories but it just doesn’t get the readers to stay Character Desgin: 4/5 Pretty interesting OC and protrayal of the series characters are good World Background: 4/5 Other places are mentioned and have been used but most of the story is in the village(unsprisingly) but they are not used a lot Overall: I would recommend it if you like slow paced stuff but I would also warn you guys that it gets kinda boring in the later chapters because there is almost no conflict and we don’t see the MC develope much

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Genesis_999

Lol this people yeah it's a "guardian seal" and he took it cuz he can inherit both senju and uzumaki heritage but at what cost? Becoming kushina's plaything cuz he can't hut her or tsunade for that matter or nagato and karin too it's basically a slave seal just that they named it "Guardian" Seal. mind you in the anime kushina is trashy with how she treats naruto but in this she is a one he ll of a b i ch mc knew what he would get if he accepted the guardian seal that's what he got so welp yes this novel and author are trashy (a sf) and I read reviews says it doesn't matter lol what? Go take your {M} as s elsewhere he is basically a slave for life. And if it got removed even then this mc and fanfic is trash he would still choose kushina even after all the sh !ts she did to him now tell me is this a good fanfic too you? Lowlife frog with their disgusting world view

1yr
Lihat 3 balasan
Divine_Onahole

theres tons of kunoichi on narutoverse, but aparantly thats not enough, for the sake of unhealthy fethis author genderbend orochimaru to join his harem, sigh.

1yr
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Goca
LV 4 Badge

I would love to read but i am not sure with all mc became a slave thing soo is he free later on and at which chapter does mc free himself from seal?? Pls answer im longig for good naruto fic but i dont want a slave mc

1yr
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Lord_of_lords

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CouchPotatoDandy

I kinda enjoyed this fanfiction. But like any other Naruto fanfiction, there are two outcomes. It can either end very good or fail in the middle. For me, this fanfiction failed in the middle cuz the author gave the MC too many skills and jutsus, this turned the MC too strong right off the middle and it kind of lost its purpose... Again, this is for me and it's my opinion, maybe others will like it more.

1yr
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LeitorLv0

Nice [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Einfach_Moppel

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Eze_Agilera

I have a question will Kurama be in the arem?

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Kaiserz

So uh...with my peanut brain, I shall give a simple review. I don't know why I never saw anyone complain about the lack of battle in the reviews but yeah, that's the only problem for me...so yeah, that's it. Anyways, for those who are having second thoughts because of the reviews on the mc agreeing to have a slave seal...ignore them. It barely mattered at all... Bye

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Abashelkoolhem_399

It's a pretty good naruto fiction but not the best I've read.

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TheAngels

First of all the mc IS NOT A SLAVE, second, THERE ARE NO RAPERS AS THE REVIEWS say, now with this resolved. This is one of the best naruto novels but there are things that I don't like, the routine was fun at first but there came a time when it was quite annoying, another thing is that the mc never acts seriously, basically all his dialogues are bad jokes besides that the story is VERY SLOW the mc is only 12 years old and he aged 3 years in 1 day but only biologically, the harem is quite good but the author is delaying many things in the harem another point against is that there is no Lemon and the mc only had relationships with Mikoto who is also his only official partner. In conclusion, the worst thing about the novel is that there are no jumps in time and it is basically pure everyday life since the author focuses more on grinding than on character development, which delays things like war too much.

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Shivam_Thakur_1883

no naruto fan avoid this novel..... author litrally made every ninja rapist...yeah litrally every person is rapist scum and only mc is neutral according to author while very verry few good charater are dumb.......typical chinese type novel

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Spielar

I think the story is certainly one of the best I have read in the Narutoverse, though the author, while trying to keep morally correct, is ignoring the fact that physically the girls around the MC should be physically older than him. He aged faster because of training and chakra while the girls apparently did not and stayed growing at a normal pace. I also complain that he isn't grinding his base abilities. Having a higher perception should make his elemental training easier as he should be able to better sense and manipulate the elements which would provide a constant rise in his elemental stats as well as his other skills, but they aren't rising properly like they should.

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R4ITO
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A very good fanfic of Naruto. The story is good and makes sense without many plot holes and good solutions to problems. Despite the beginning being boring I assure you that the story is very good. Despite the title, it doesn't have too many senci limes. Continuing the story author.

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GrimFate77

Honest a good read it starts a little weird but it gets really good as you keep going Masked Maiden is the best…..

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Uzumaki_Kushina_21

can anyone tell who are in the Harem?? please 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

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Kostya_Dolgushev

Great Naruto fanfic. If only there were more chapters a week.[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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