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So far so good. Excited to see how it goes. So far so good. Excited to see how it goes.So far so good. Excited to see how it goes.So far so good. Excited to see how it goes.
Gostei muito apesar de demora para lança,tirando isso uma boa historia náo fica pulando tudo para os acontecimentos principais como e feito por varuas historias entao acho qye sera uma historia boa de se ler capitulos longos que sao sempre bem vindos
So we have a normal guy as Oc reborn as the brother of draco malfoy ! the Mc supposed to remember only the 3 first movies and not even his past life but he somehow know the actor playing Neville gonna be like a model ! Mc is arrogant kid like a normal Malfoy he believes he is smart and he knows it all! Mc as a kid had his whole room with muggle stuff as Tv posters of anime gameboy etc.etc. and lucius Malfoy let him have it.... muggle technology works in a house full magic... so this story is full of plot holes mc's personality is trash !
amazing I'm tired so no actual review 😴 //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Just like the rest of your stories the beginning is absolutely fantastic, although you had mad some calls in your stories I dislike they ate all still amazing and this one is looking to be just as good!!!
I f****** love this story. Although it only has 3 chapters now, it sucked me in and I read the chapters in one go. The chapters are also of great length, not too big, not too small. The story has an interesting touch and it has a little bit of humor too. I can't wait for more chapters and I definitely recommend you to read it.
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So far so good. Excited to see how it goes. So far so good. Excited to see how it goes.So far so good. Excited to see how it goes.So far so good. Excited to see how it goes.
Gostei muito apesar de demora para lança,tirando isso uma boa historia náo fica pulando tudo para os acontecimentos principais como e feito por varuas historias entao acho qye sera uma historia boa de se ler capitulos longos que sao sempre bem vindos
So we have a normal guy as Oc reborn as the brother of draco malfoy ! the Mc supposed to remember only the 3 first movies and not even his past life but he somehow know the actor playing Neville gonna be like a model ! Mc is arrogant kid like a normal Malfoy he believes he is smart and he knows it all! Mc as a kid had his whole room with muggle stuff as Tv posters of anime gameboy etc.etc. and lucius Malfoy let him have it.... muggle technology works in a house full magic... so this story is full of plot holes mc's personality is trash !
amazing I'm tired so no actual review 😴 //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Just like the rest of your stories the beginning is absolutely fantastic, although you had mad some calls in your stories I dislike they ate all still amazing and this one is looking to be just as good!!!
I f****** love this story. Although it only has 3 chapters now, it sucked me in and I read the chapters in one go. The chapters are also of great length, not too big, not too small. The story has an interesting touch and it has a little bit of humor too. I can't wait for more chapters and I definitely recommend you to read it.
I hope this fanfic continues, one of the good ones.