Will Fate Bring Us Together?

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_mystique_

A whirlwind of emotions!!! So the story stars with Emma coping up with the loss of her two year relationship with Emir, who apparently chose some other girl over her. I truly feel bad for the mail lead, Emma, here. She had been doing everything to get over him, trying to make new friends, focussing on her work but the flashbacks of the past comes back to her every now and then and she can't help but dive into the memories of the past. The place where the plot thickens is when she realizes someone had been stalking her for a long time, keeping track of everything she does and everywhere she goes. Emma can't help but be creeped out about this and I as a reader can't help but be extremely excited about this. I just hope author releases more chapters soon because I'm too impatient.

LV 11

Patricia_Levy

I’v read three chapters, and I’m hooked. One thing I love: the author promises to fix their mistakes. I love an author who knows they will need to edit. Another thing: I love how the story is developing. I am predicting the future already, which happens a lot when I read. But I have a really good feeling this book will exceed my expectations! Keep up the great work!

LV 1

_Himari_Nora_

The story is amazing. It's idea of a girl fighting hard to forget her previous relationships and a guy obsessed with her is a hard plot and interesting at the same time. However, I didn't like a lot how emir behaved with her in the eleventh chapter. I wish Emma end up with Jason, and not Emir, but who knows what fate brought to those two. The story is great, but what needed to be improved, is the writing quality of an author, but we're all studying and noboby is perfect. Great job author. Looking out for more chapters!

LV 2

GODOFCAT

The way the author writes the scenery is a little bad but still readable. I can see a lot of mistakes I mean a lot but the author says she will update them so let's just wait. I rarely read an FL novel but this one is good but due to grammar mistakes and poor writing it became a little bad. but that doesn't mean it was not readable. Try reading it you might like it, just like me. So I advise you to improve your writing and update again.

LV 13

Lil_Amore

I sincerely love this story already 🥺💋, just that the Fl brings me to tears whenever she recalls Emir💔. Emir is really a jerk and I hate him already😣. Love this book so much💯, I'm definitely rating 5 stars. thank you author for such a wonderful story 🌹.

LV 13

Sweet_Vanilla553

Will Fate bring us together? I don't know, but my fate brought me here. Love this so much author. A perfect story line for my preference. Keep going author...[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

LV 11

OnizukaShinu

Great story with greater premise. It can be executed better yet the author did his best on attracting the readers in the first few chapters. It was a good read.

LV 11

blossoms_hkhk

I read first few chapters and I am already hooked. The story is super captivating. The plot and characters both are interesting. I am really looking forward to read more chapters. Keep up the good work author 👍

LV 14

NixOrtikal

Grammar mistakes aside, the writer weaves a wonderful story in a modern day setting. Give this novel a chance if you're into love triangles, emotional and sappy hear breaking moments, an FL that can't seem to make up her mind or know when to call it quits, then this tear jerker may be the novel for you!

LV 2

_Nightin_gale_

I know stories with a potential second lead always hurt, but I'd recommend reading this book anyways. The telling of the story is lovely, it hurts to see our FL in her situation often times. Hoping for fate to bring her together with someone who she loves and who loves her. Keep Going!!!!

LV 3

Marble_Fun_World

It is an amazing story, Good work author for coming up with a great plot😘😘. The story develops quickly, author's writing quality is top-notch.

LV 1

deviljooniefics

The opening of the story and the pace of the novel was efficiently maintained. The only thing that I was a bit disappointed about were the punctuation errors. The majority of them were there in the first chapter, if you could edit them out. On a wider basis, the character's traits were realistic and the plot was an interesting one as well. Good job author!

LV 12

Empzze

Great work author, interesting plot and amazing introduction, even though the book is still in its early stage I can already tell that it has great potential, just need a little bit of spice and you are good to go. And I cannot wait to find out what's going to happen to Emma( I feel so sorry for her 😩) I've been trying to guess but I just can't. Any ways, i'm sending you my best wishes. keep up the good work.

LV 1

Jolan_Hildebrandt

I'm going to give you the bad first. You could afford to use more active words and think more about word efficiency. Less words and better verb choices equals clarity. That being said, you've effectively captured the break up feeling. We do feel like it wont get better, we do cry, we don't want to be around people. I have no doubt this story will end up brilliant

LV 3

aigotcha

Writing Quality- 6/10 Update Stability- 10/10 Story Development- too early, default is 8/10 Chara Design- some promise, 9/10 World BG- Solid 10, it's Earth. What more do I have to say? Solid 4.4, I don't normally read these types of books but it's promising with a good upload schedule.

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Lilliana_Wolfe

There's a lot going on but the different parts are separated in a way that makes it easy to keep track of. So far the plot is something most readers will be familiar with, which isn't a bad thing! I'm a sucker for plots like this. Sidenote: I'm glad to see the notes you have left after your chapters, promising to do touch-ups later on. Interested in reading more. [img=recommend]

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Altansarnai

It was a rollercoaster of emotions for me. I am hooked and I am waiting for the author to release more chapters. you should definitely give this a try. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update]